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Limerick- Beneath the Blue Sea

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We went a sailing one bright summer day, the sweet wind pushed us and we were so gay; Then, a great storm came roaring, our small sail boat was soaring; beneath the blue sea is where we now PLAY ! _________________________ August 2, 2018 Poetry/Limerick/Beneath the Blue Sea Copyright Protected, ID 18-1048-027-01 All Rights Reserved. Written under Pseudonym. Written for the contest, Sea Tales sponsor, Carolyn Devonshire Fifth Place

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Date: 8/7/2018 6:54:00 AM
Oh gosh. Congratulations on your win!
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Date: 8/5/2018 10:30:00 AM
LOL, had a chuckle
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Date: 8/4/2018 6:19:00 PM
what a sweet poem Constance, congrats on your win:-) hugs Jan xx
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Date: 8/4/2018 5:38:00 PM
great clever ending on yours, dear heart!! Congrats in the contest. I am enjoying reading the list of winners.
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Date: 8/4/2018 3:10:00 PM
A fun poem, my friend. Bit of a syllable problem prevented it from placing higher, but I certainly enjoyed reading it! Congratulations, Carolyn
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Date: 8/2/2018 6:53:00 PM
Sweet limerick Constance! Good luck in the contest :)xomo!
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