Lily Pad Bliss

It’s wrong to judge people by appearance
So when he approached me with that grimace
I tried to see what’s inside
Perhaps a sweet prince did hide
Behind scaly green skin on the surface

He offered his lips, I felt revolted
And through the door I just might have bolted
If I had not made a vow
To be less judgmental now
So we kissed and my heartstrings he jolted

Such heaven we found on his lily pad
Till he turned into a horny-toad cad
Now my mouth is filled with warts
And no more bliss he transports
I just look at him and shout out “Egad!”

Sometimes a book’s cover shows what’s within
And I’ve surely learned much to my chagrin
This frog will not be a prince
When I look at him I wince
And just belt down a few chugs of sloe gin



This entry for the happily ever after contest is based on the fairy tale about the frog 
prince.
Copyright © | Year Posted 2010

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December 2, 2012 at 7:01 PM
Diane, .. it is nice to read this oldie and goody limerick. :-) congrats with your wonderful win,, in the "Happily Ever After" contest.. always~ PD
Kendrick Avatar
December 30, 2010 at 5:04 PM
Congratultions on your win..Sara
Johnson Avatar
December 30, 2010 at 9:49 AM
And a great job you did. Just proving that most frogs and toads really are and to react accordingly. Great job and congratulations on your first place win. Love, Joyce
Neels Avatar
December 30, 2010 at 9:03 AM
Diane, super congratulations on your awesome win in John's contest.. Happy 2011 to you as well.. Love Wilma
Richards Avatar
December 30, 2010 at 8:31 AM
Congratulatiions Diane.....Loved this take on Frog Prince....we should never judge a book by it's warty cover!! LOL !!! Great number 1 poem!!
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December 30, 2010 at 7:56 AM
Congrats on your well deserved win in this contest, you are such a creative poet. Please keep your creative caps on and let your poetry pen keep painting your poetry pads with paints of passion. Enjoy the honor as I wish you many more. Love always, Adeleke
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December 30, 2010 at 7:32 AM
Oh my..congrats on your BIG win..this is very funny. and clever..and cute..BG
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December 30, 2010 at 6:21 AM
enjoyed this wonderful winning poem, Diane. Harry
Mehta Avatar
December 30, 2010 at 6:06 AM
Congratulations on this well deserved in the contest of John, Diane
Sweetheart Avatar
December 30, 2010 at 5:52 AM
Congrats Diane on your super first place win in John's contest with this awesome entry my friend... totally entertaining .. wishing u a Happy New Year ..with luv..
Brown Avatar
December 30, 2010 at 5:27 AM
Congratulations on your 1st Place win Diane in John Heck's contest. Love, Carol
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December 30, 2010 at 3:05 AM
It's an honor to share first place with you, Diane. Congratulations! Love, Carolyn
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December 17, 2010 at 7:03 AM
too funny...have not seen you areound lately...I have been so busy with christmas...so I understand.
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December 16, 2010 at 11:13 AM
soup mail.
Fraser Avatar
December 14, 2010 at 3:47 PM
Diane, this is a pretty darned clever quad Limerick tale. It's got to be a winner in the contest, good luck, not that you'll need it >> James :)
Mehta Avatar
December 10, 2010 at 12:45 PM
beautiful write with multiple Limerick with great images. Good luck in the contest, Diane
Dietrich Avatar
December 9, 2010 at 8:40 PM
hahaha; love that last part. She turns to drink! Luv, Andrea
Johnson Avatar
December 9, 2010 at 7:52 PM
Oh you're braver thanI To give him a try. Cute story and very funny. Should be a winner. LThank you for your comments on "My New Love". Love, Joyce
Sweetheart Avatar
December 9, 2010 at 7:25 PM
I just did my entry for this contest as when I first read yours I did not realize a new contest had been posted for this theme... so your write gave me some inspiration Diane... it is entitled... "From Fairy Tale to Nightmare Wail" based on Cinderella and her Prince Charming luv.. again good luck to u with this beauty ...
Sweetheart Avatar
December 9, 2010 at 3:18 PM
Wonderful rewrite of the fairy tale for the contest Diane.. vivid words and phrases make this extremely creative my friend.. good luck in the contest with luv.. my 'frog' has always been a prince..haha..
Kendrick Avatar
December 9, 2010 at 1:57 PM
Good luck in the contest with this one that got a chuckle from me..Your kind review of my work made my afternoon brighter..Sara
Devonshire Avatar
December 9, 2010 at 1:51 PM
What a great limerick series! I think this is just the kind of thing John is looking for in his contest. Best wishes for success, Diane.
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