Like the Tide

My life, like the sea, ebbed and flowed, A world littered with peaks and valleys A painted vision like a chiaroscuro, When times were sometimes light, others dark. Yet one thing I can truly say Despite the fact you often left and returned. I was always blindly loyal to you. I never looked at another spouse. I admit we were neither Cherubs nor Seraphs, We all had our shortcomings. Despite that, you judged me on my few failures, However, I had my successes too. I worked hard and achieved much, Alas that interested you not. Eventually, we got married. I remained a faithful soul. We had our ups and downs, but I was loyal to you. So when I die I only wish for someone To write upon my tomb’s headstone: He loved loyally.
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Baker Avatar
September 21, 2023 at 8:33 AM
A fine poem, Victor, and a great message to leave on your tombstone. It will resonate with many. Thanks for sharing your thoughts through your poetry, my friend. Bill
M  Avatar
September 17, 2023 at 11:24 PM
Poignant….so beautifully written Victor! Debx
Daisy Silk Avatar
September 15, 2023 at 11:46 PM
Endearing heart-wrenching and totally emotionally provoking write. You have a brilliant way of expressing and in such a truthful black and white way. Honest and lovely as the stars.
Vaso Avatar
September 15, 2023 at 11:40 PM
Your poetry never disappoints, I loved this poem!
Seeker Avatar
September 14, 2023 at 4:26 AM
Integrity ~ an extinct species, they don’t make them anymore. Superb poem, Victor. Loyalty and pure love will triumph.
Ricci Avatar
September 13, 2023 at 5:33 AM
Victor Victor Victor. Hello. Your entry and words are most moving and yes poetic. You have reached your reader. Thank you as always for sharing your poetic talent and the most powerful emotive factor. Love Peace and Blessings now and always. (smiles)
Messina Avatar
September 13, 2023 at 3:17 AM
Victor, with all the temptations that are shoved in our face these days, especially on tv. It takes a strong soul to keep loyal to your spouse, even when they are gone for years. Bravo! Fine write!
Kitchin Avatar
September 12, 2023 at 4:01 PM
Victor, you described true love, it starts as romantic love, then reality sets in with it's ebbs and flows and turns into a deeper true love, raw and emotive and worth all the ups and downs, hugs.
Andresen Avatar
September 12, 2023 at 6:32 AM
- Always faithful and loyal ... no one could wish for more, Victor - Lovely written :) - hugs
Sharma  Avatar
September 12, 2023 at 3:04 AM
This touched my heart in a very emotive and soul stirring way.. Sigh, the vulnerability expressed in these lines beyond vivid and reflects the silhouette of a very deep soul. Indeed, loving loyally must be beyond all the onyx waves that crash on the shorelines of life.. Because that's the essence of true love and togetherness. This write has definitely become one of my favs, so beautifully written..
Ashley Avatar
September 11, 2023 at 6:30 PM
Dear Victor, the power of your poignant pen touches me deeply. An evocative and emotive poem so elegantly expressed. To love loyally, despite romantic ups and downs, is the quintessence of wedded devotion. Warmest wishes my friend.. ~Susan
Roper Avatar
September 11, 2023 at 5:33 PM
A very touching poem. Your loyalty will always shine. Hugs my friend.
Dietrich Avatar
September 11, 2023 at 3:37 PM
this is so sweet and I do believe THIS one has to be not based on fiction.
Buehler Avatar
September 11, 2023 at 12:20 PM
A touchingly conveyed portrayal one faithful to his own heart, to the end. This masterpiece is a fave. :)
Anaya Avatar
September 11, 2023 at 12:06 PM
I agree with S.V. 'He Loved Loyaly' Romantic... Victor, I will fav this beautiful poem.
Volumes Avatar
September 11, 2023 at 11:22 AM
I am sure they will find a great deal more to write about you Victor. So much outpouring in your poem. Commendable heartfelt truth, A very good honest poem to be admired. Well done,
Empress Avatar
September 11, 2023 at 8:40 AM
This is so poignant and evocative how you’ve expressed here, sometimes in life, we may not be appreciated for our efforts etc, but it takes a strong and courageous soul to “ love loyally” amidst all the tides that pull and push you through cruel currents of time: i felt so much reading this: a fave
DiMino Avatar
September 11, 2023 at 8:22 AM
"True to thine own self" -- what's more, the vow given your God. Heaven ultimately will decide who was right/wrong, better/worse -- but those who worship Truth, sleep well...and eternally with love will reside and rest. Touching, heartfelt read, relatable to many here, truth essential if endearing one's poetry.
Romios Avatar
September 11, 2023 at 8:15 AM
An automatic favorite for me,you knocked on the Geary of my soul. You. With stood hard times,I can relate to that, all too well. Loyalty is a gyrations virtue, Even being loyal to fiends seem to be of Bo value, These days being flashy, bavdy or cute replaced true goodness, No matter what, stick tou your vaslues… As if you wouldn’t! Pangie xx
Lindley Avatar
September 11, 2023 at 7:53 AM
As humans we are creatures of the flesh. A flesh that oft succumbs to dark temptations. That we survive to live on is testament to our heart and soul. We do get over from such heartaches and we are much stronger for it. God bless you. A gem and a fav on this fine poem.
Poet Avatar
September 11, 2023 at 6:51 AM
Life, my dear Victor, is a symphony of highs and lows, a rollercoaster ride through the vast expanse of human experience. Yet, it is the unwavering bond that we forge with one another that anchors us firmly to the earth beneath our feet, like roots intertwined with the soil. Your words, my friend, are a masterpiece, painting a vivid and captivating portrait of the beauty found in resilience and togetherness.
Pandit Avatar
September 11, 2023 at 5:00 AM
Like the tide emotions ebb and flow--such is life, so wonderfully described, Victor. A story of true love that aches in memories bittersweet. Many will relate.
George Avatar
September 11, 2023 at 4:21 AM
Despite all ups and downs, you were so true and loyal to your partner though she didn't take that into account. Even after death, you want to affirm your loyalty to her and make the world know that you have ever been loyal. A touching poem dear Victor.
Kendrick Avatar
September 11, 2023 at 3:17 AM
Ahh!!! Awesome that you loved loyally, sad that the love was up and down in such a way though. Thanks for sharing and for dropping by my page. Sara
Daniel Avatar
September 11, 2023 at 2:02 AM
A relationship has its ups and downs as you write about, Victor, nicely descriptive:)
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