like memories

speak gently 
of those tender traps
they that walk like wayward angels
in the poetry of purgatory
there you sit untainted 
this is what you think
but at your feet 
steps 
down or up 

up and down 
down and up
up and down 
and back again 

which way do you think?
to steer?

doors closed
like rooms of Bluebeard
shutting out all noise
but, oh the want to fresh openings
like new appointments 
the waiting room 
for interview 
awaits, ‘tis full,
heads hung

speak gently 
of those tender traps 
they that stand 
in front of you
with shiny eyes
like mirrors to reflect
behind they stalk 
like memories
sharp knives at your back

like memories,
the better to forget


Candide Diderot. ‘24 
Copyright © | Year Posted 2024

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Rodgers Avatar
February 24, 2024 at 8:53 AM
Dear Candide, The way you explore the delicate balance between memory and experience, between the past and the present, is both haunting and thought-provoking. You draw, me, the reader into a world where memories stand like shadows, always lurking just beneath the surface. The comparison to “wayward angels in the poetry of purgatory” is particularly striking, capturing the elusive nature of our past experiences and the ways in which they shape our perceptions of the present. And yet, amidst the chaos and confusion, there is a plea to speak gently of those tender traps, to approach them with compassion and understanding. Your words have left a lasting impression on me, prompting me to reflect on the complexities of memory and the ways in which it shapes our lives. - Blessings, Daniel
Diderot Avatar
February 24, 2024 at 1:48 PM
Thank you.
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