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speak gently of those tender traps they that walk like wayward angels in the poetry of purgatory there you sit untainted this is what you think but at your feet steps down or up up and down down and up up and down and back again which way do you think? to steer? doors closed like rooms of Bluebeard shutting out all noise but, oh the want to fresh openings like new appointments the waiting room for interview awaits, ‘tis full, heads hung speak gently of those tender traps they that stand in front of you with shiny eyes like mirrors to reflect behind they stalk like memories sharp knives at your back like memories, the better to forget Candide Diderot. ‘24

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Date: 2/24/2024 8:53:00 AM
Dear Candide, The way you explore the delicate balance between memory and experience, between the past and the present, is both haunting and thought-provoking. You draw, me, the reader into a world where memories stand like shadows, always lurking just beneath the surface. The comparison to “wayward angels in the poetry of purgatory” is particularly striking, capturing the elusive nature of our past experiences and the ways in which they shape our perceptions of the present. And yet, amidst the chaos and confusion, there is a plea to speak gently of those tender traps, to approach them with compassion and understanding. Your words have left a lasting impression on me, prompting me to reflect on the complexities of memory and the ways in which it shapes our lives. - Blessings, Daniel
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Candide Diderot
Date: 2/24/2024 1:48:00 PM
Thank you.

Book: Shattered Sighs