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Like Creeping Tendrils


My poems are like creeping vines that I have planted well,
I tend them in my garden of evergreen poetry to be strong;
They are waiting quietly to release their swirling spiral tendrils,
Tendrils that will adhere and entwine and entangle you in my words.

You have whispered to me a challenge and I quiver with joy,
My need to capture you is overwhelming, I am driven to win;
I will do anything you request of me to impress and to please you,
But to lose, it is unfathomable and I can become hostile and clinging.

Can you not see my words so lovely, like wandering thread,
I am tranquility and you can rest in my coolness and my shade;
Hugging, caressing whispering to your muse my beautiful wordiness,
Come wrap yourself in my words, be entwined, there will be no escape.

I was born to write innocent words, to give my writing power,
My need is great, to be acknowledge and known is my one goal;
Nothing else will be acceptable, I crave your muse to hear my cry,
Take my wild poetic words and poems high and let me shine in the sun.

Let's make a deal, if you release me on my upward journey,
I will not encircle you in my wandering seeking green tendrils;
Withdrawal of my choking, hanging greenness will be your reward,
You will be quite safe after I withdraw my clinging hold on your muse.


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September 23, 2015


Poetry/Verse/Like Creeping Tendrils
Copyright Protected, ID 15-711-661-0
all Rights Reserved.  Written under Pseudonym.

For the contest,  You Want It Bad, Then Bribe Me, 
sponsor, Casarah Nance

Fourth Place
Copyright © | Year Posted 2015

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A   Avatar
October 15, 2015 at 11:50 AM
Broken, congrats on the win, LINDA
Callus Avatar
October 14, 2015 at 3:07 PM
Hi Constance; you managed to persuade Casarah with eloquent words that have a shade of finely concealed blackmail! Congratulations on this lovely win. hugs // paul
Lamoureux Avatar
October 13, 2015 at 7:46 PM
congratulations Constance! Hugs Rick.
Tor Avatar
October 13, 2015 at 4:05 AM
Nice win and Congratulations Constance!
A. Sharma Avatar
October 12, 2015 at 11:22 PM
Awesome write n win broken! Big congrats!
Cheema Avatar
October 12, 2015 at 8:05 PM
How soothingly beautiful! Congrats on your win!
Richards Avatar
October 12, 2015 at 6:36 PM
I think you have tangled her in your bramble and vines of temptation !! Great job, Broken wings!!
A  Avatar
October 12, 2015 at 2:37 PM
Hi Broken, Congratulations on your awesome poem. SKAT
Allison Avatar
October 12, 2015 at 2:36 PM
How could this fail not to place - great pen Broken Wings - congrats on your win:-) hugs Jan xx7
Nance Avatar
October 12, 2015 at 2:34 PM
Very descriptive! So beautifully strong and intimidating. :) thanks for writing!
La France Avatar
October 12, 2015 at 2:40 PM
Casarah, that was fun to write and thanks for the win ~~
Haight Avatar
October 12, 2015 at 2:30 PM
Amazing write, BW! Love the way you crafted this hard to ignore bribe! Congratulations on your win. Hugs, Sandra
A   Avatar
October 11, 2015 at 12:46 PM
WOW, Broken, you know how to pull a bribe. Love it, Wishing you the best of luck in coming in second place. haha.. I got to crack my leg and hope I come in first place... LINDA
Boddie Avatar
September 24, 2015 at 11:58 AM
as a word manipulator myself....your words did catch my breath....suspending it in an artistic maze....that's breathtaking of the highest phase....;)
Dunn Avatar
September 23, 2015 at 10:02 PM
Dear Broken wings Wow this is sad my friend, but it holds an excellence of a life message, cheri
Inman Avatar
September 23, 2015 at 9:23 PM
I guess it's about neither one. Excellent, BW. I would hate to get on your bad side.
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