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My poems are like creeping vines that I have planted well, I tend them in my garden of evergreen poetry to be strong; They are waiting quietly to release their swirling spiral tendrils, Tendrils that will adhere and entwine and entangle you in my words. You have whispered to me a challenge and I quiver with joy, My need to capture you is overwhelming, I am driven to win; I will do anything you request of me to impress and to please you, But to lose, it is unfathomable and I can become hostile and clinging. Can you not see my words so lovely, like wandering thread, I am tranquility and you can rest in my coolness and my shade; Hugging, caressing whispering to your muse my beautiful wordiness, Come wrap yourself in my words, be entwined, there will be no escape. I was born to write innocent words, to give my writing power, My need is great, to be acknowledge and known is my one goal; Nothing else will be acceptable, I crave your muse to hear my cry, Take my wild poetic words and poems high and let me shine in the sun. Let's make a deal, if you release me on my upward journey, I will not encircle you in my wandering seeking green tendrils; Withdrawal of my choking, hanging greenness will be your reward, You will be quite safe after I withdraw my clinging hold on your muse. ______________________________ September 23, 2015 Poetry/Verse/Like Creeping Tendrils Copyright Protected, ID 15-711-661-0 all Rights Reserved. Written under Pseudonym. For the contest, You Want It Bad, Then Bribe Me, sponsor, Casarah Nance Fourth Place

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Date: 10/15/2015 11:50:00 AM
Broken, congrats on the win, LINDA
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Date: 10/14/2015 3:07:00 PM
Hi Constance; you managed to persuade Casarah with eloquent words that have a shade of finely concealed blackmail! Congratulations on this lovely win. hugs // paul
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Date: 10/13/2015 7:46:00 PM
congratulations Constance! Hugs Rick.
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Date: 10/13/2015 4:05:00 AM
Nice win and Congratulations Constance!
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Date: 10/12/2015 11:22:00 PM
Awesome write n win broken! Big congrats!
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Date: 10/12/2015 8:05:00 PM
How soothingly beautiful! Congrats on your win!
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Date: 10/12/2015 6:36:00 PM
I think you have tangled her in your bramble and vines of temptation !! Great job, Broken wings!!
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Date: 10/12/2015 2:37:00 PM
Hi Broken, Congratulations on your awesome poem. SKAT
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Date: 10/12/2015 2:36:00 PM
How could this fail not to place - great pen Broken Wings - congrats on your win:-) hugs Jan xx7
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Date: 10/12/2015 2:34:00 PM
Very descriptive! So beautifully strong and intimidating. :) thanks for writing!
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Date: 10/12/2015 2:40:00 PM
Casarah, that was fun to write and thanks for the win ~~
Date: 10/12/2015 2:30:00 PM
Amazing write, BW! Love the way you crafted this hard to ignore bribe! Congratulations on your win. Hugs, Sandra
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Date: 10/11/2015 12:46:00 PM
WOW, Broken, you know how to pull a bribe. Love it, Wishing you the best of luck in coming in second place. haha.. I got to crack my leg and hope I come in first place... LINDA
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Date: 9/24/2015 11:58:00 AM
as a word manipulator myself....your words did catch my breath....suspending it in an artistic maze....that's breathtaking of the highest phase....;)
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Date: 9/23/2015 10:02:00 PM
Dear Broken wings Wow this is sad my friend, but it holds an excellence of a life message, cheri
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Date: 9/23/2015 9:23:00 PM
I guess it's about neither one. Excellent, BW. I would hate to get on your bad side.
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