Like Angels' Tears - Quatern

Like angels' tears the raindrops fall,
As children gay the songbirds call;
Should I then cry or blithely sing
This dreary day in merry spring?

As children's cries the winds will squall,
Like angels' tears the raindrops fall; 
To know the reason, I desire,
But dare a mortal heav'n enquire?

Some girls pick flowers wet with rain,
An old man smiles and waves his cane;
Like angels' tears the raindrops fall
And splash upon the cheeks of all.

As if in prayer the grass bows down
To meet the clover's purple crown,
For both on them and on my shawl
Like angels' tears the raindrops fall.


*April 28th, 2014*

Copyright © | Year Posted 2014



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Date: 7/29/2014 11:51:00 PM
You've done this for to near perfection in both rhyme and meter as well as a wonderful story. My only suggestion is to replace "and" in verse 3 line 4 with something more vibrant perhaps "they" would work better but that's just a suggestion.
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Date: 5/31/2014 4:50:00 AM
Simply beautiful, Isaiah. Also, thank you for your kind comments on my writing. I love writing poems inspired my photo's or art and the one you provided was exceptional. bfn Lainie
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Date: 5/26/2014 6:28:00 PM
Isaiah, this is a lovely work of art. I really enjoyed the piece. Look forward to reading more of your work. Take Care Jess
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Date: 5/13/2014 9:58:00 PM
Isaiah, Congratulations, in Andrea's awesome Do You Know Quatern? Contest... happy for all the winning poems.. Linda
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Date: 5/11/2014 10:24:00 PM
Yes it has been a rainy spring here too. Beautiful writing. congratulations. Love, Joyce
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Date: 5/11/2014 4:59:00 PM
Isaiah. I especially loved the last two stanzas of this one. So beautiful. Congrats in my contest.
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Date: 5/1/2014 11:51:00 AM
Beautiful! The last stanza especially. BG
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Date: 5/1/2014 12:44:00 AM
Sing,sing Isaiah..May all the rain which fall upon your cheeks...be made of joyful tears and not of pain. A beautiful poem.
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