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The lightness of late springtime glides on pendulums of hours, while her cyclical moods transform like a maiden's uncompromising ways-- reckless in the heat of summer's flamenco then gloomy in the flakes of winter chime: There's no way to measure the beauty of all her rhythmic gaits; they are equal in a splendor untamed by endless passages, nurtured by time and space … then to live, fade ,die and be born once more in all her ethereal grandeur, undefined. Punctuation Personified Contest Sponsor: Debbie Guzzi ~ Seasons~ new poem by nette onclaud

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Date: 10/11/2015 1:56:00 PM
The Periods have it..Way to go with this winner..Congrats..Sara
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Date: 10/9/2015 12:13:00 AM
Nette, Congratulations with your win. **SKAT**
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Date: 10/7/2015 7:45:00 PM
Yes dear a season is a period of time! Thanks for stretching! Congrad's on your win. Light & Love
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Date: 10/7/2015 3:14:00 PM
Always exquisitely written.....another beautiful poem, Nette !! Congratulations !
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Date: 10/6/2015 9:32:00 PM
Nice win!
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Date: 10/2/2015 12:39:00 PM
Wonderful poem read from you. Loved the lines much .. "endless passages ...................undefined". Change is must, a great philosophy clearly given with natural example. 7, loved always my lovely friend,bl
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Date: 10/1/2015 3:56:00 PM
Fine job here, such wonderful imagery! Agree with Jerry below....more than a 7!
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Date: 10/1/2015 3:40:00 PM
I love this piece, It deserves more than a 7----so I gave you two fives --to make a 10
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Date: 9/30/2015 12:22:00 AM
Excellent. Very inspirational write. Enjoyed it. Thanks for sharing it.
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Date: 9/29/2015 5:00:00 PM
What a fabulous write here. Your write is extreme beautiful and excellent. Brilliant one.........A.M.
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Date: 9/29/2015 9:08:00 AM
I am fascinated how the cycles of a year give us different remembrances. Outstanding poem!
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Date: 9/29/2015 4:12:00 AM
- Nette, a great poem about the time ...... I wish that "the clock" went a little slower - hugs // Anne-Lise :)
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Date: 9/28/2015 5:12:00 PM
Nette I love the original clever thoughts that are magnificent. When gardens are birthing, cyclical moods transform, so creative an image! Exceptional write! Enjoyed reading..
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Date: 9/28/2015 5:08:00 PM
Dear Nette Wonderment in the words of a poet whom feels the inner rythum of nature herself, your voice whispers off the written page like a clear mountain wind blowing through the pine trees of thought, again a flowless write my dear friend, inspirational, cheri
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Date: 9/28/2015 3:59:00 PM
Splendid comparisons of passages of time and life. The flow of thought with strong conclusion makes this a superb poem!
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