Nette Onclaud Poet Personification

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Maiden's Passage

The lightness of late springtime
 glides on pendulums of hours,
while her cyclical moods transform
  like a maiden's uncompromising ways--
reckless in the heat of summer's flamenco
then  gloomy in the flakes of winter chime:

There's no way to measure the beauty
   of all her rhythmic gaits;
  they are equal in a splendor untamed
by endless passages, nurtured by time and space …
then to  live, fade ,die and  be born once more
 in all her ethereal grandeur, undefined. 



Punctuation Personified Contest
Sponsor: Debbie Guzzi
~ Seasons~ new poem
by nette onclaud

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Sara Kendrick October 11, 2015 at 1:56 PM The Periods have it..Way to go with this winner..Congrats..Sara

Skat A October 9, 2015 at 12:13 AM Nette, Congratulations with your win. **SKAT**

Debbie Guzzi October 7, 2015 at 7:45 PM Yes dear a season is a period of time! Thanks for stretching! Congrad's on your win. Light & Love

Carrie Richards October 7, 2015 at 3:14 PM Always exquisitely written.....another beautiful poem, Nette !! Congratulations !

Michael Tor October 6, 2015 at 9:32 PM Nice win!

Bl Devnath October 2, 2015 at 12:39 PM Wonderful poem read from you. Loved the lines much .. "endless passages ...................undefined". Change is must, a great philosophy clearly given with natural example. 7, loved always my lovely friend,bl

Thomas Martin October 1, 2015 at 3:56 PM Fine job here, such wonderful imagery! Agree with Jerry below....more than a 7!

Jerry T Curtis October 1, 2015 at 3:40 PM I love this piece, It deserves more than a 7----so I gave you two fives --to make a 10

Ravi Sathasivam September 30, 2015 at 12:22 AM Excellent. Very inspirational write. Enjoyed it. Thanks for sharing it.

Afolabi Muideen September 29, 2015 at 5:00 PM What a fabulous write here. Your write is extreme beautiful and excellent. Brilliant one.........A.M.

Franco Gonza September 29, 2015 at 9:08 AM I am fascinated how the cycles of a year give us different remembrances. Outstanding poem!

Anne-Lise Andresen September 29, 2015 at 4:12 AM - Nette, a great poem about the time ...... I wish that "the clock" went a little slower - hugs // Anne-Lise :)

Michael Tor September 28, 2015 at 5:12 PM Nette I love the original clever thoughts that are magnificent. When gardens are birthing, cyclical moods transform, so creative an image! Exceptional write! Enjoyed reading..

Cherl Dunn September 28, 2015 at 5:08 PM Dear Nette Wonderment in the words of a poet whom feels the inner rythum of nature herself, your voice whispers off the written page like a clear mountain wind blowing through the pine trees of thought, again a flowless write my dear friend, inspirational, cheri

Ashley Conte September 28, 2015 at 3:59 PM Splendid comparisons of passages of time and life. The flow of thought with strong conclusion makes this a superb poem!