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Maiden's Passage

The lightness of late springtime
 glides on pendulums of hours,
while her cyclical moods transform
  like a maiden's uncompromising ways--
reckless in the heat of summer's flamenco
then  gloomy in the flakes of winter chime:

There's no way to measure the beauty
   of all her rhythmic gaits;
  they are equal in a splendor untamed
by endless passages, nurtured by time and space …
then to  live, fade ,die and  be born once more
 in all her ethereal grandeur, undefined. 



Punctuation Personified Contest
Sponsor: Debbie Guzzi
~ Seasons~ new poem
by nette onclaud

Copyright © Nette Onclaud | Year Posted 2015

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Sara Kendrick Date: 10/11/2015 1:56:00 PM The Periods have it..Way to go with this winner..Congrats..Sara Login to Reply

Skat A Date: 10/9/2015 12:13:00 AM Nette, Congratulations with your win. **SKAT** Login to Reply

Debbie Guzzi Date: 10/7/2015 7:45:00 PM Yes dear a season is a period of time! Thanks for stretching! Congrad's on your win. Light & Love Login to Reply

Carrie Richards Date: 10/7/2015 3:14:00 PM Always exquisitely written.....another beautiful poem, Nette !! Congratulations ! Login to Reply

Michael Tor Date: 10/6/2015 9:32:00 PM Nice win! Login to Reply

Bl Devnath Date: 10/2/2015 12:39:00 PM Wonderful poem read from you. Loved the lines much .. "endless passages ...................undefined". Change is must, a great philosophy clearly given with natural example. 7, loved always my lovely friend,bl Login to Reply

Thomas Martin Date: 10/1/2015 3:56:00 PM Fine job here, such wonderful imagery! Agree with Jerry below....more than a 7! Login to Reply

Jerry T Curtis Date: 10/1/2015 3:40:00 PM I love this piece, It deserves more than a 7----so I gave you two fives --to make a 10 Login to Reply

Ravi Sathasivam Date: 9/30/2015 12:22:00 AM Excellent. Very inspirational write. Enjoyed it. Thanks for sharing it. Login to Reply

Afolabi Muideen Date: 9/29/2015 5:00:00 PM What a fabulous write here. Your write is extreme beautiful and excellent. Brilliant one.........A.M. Login to Reply

Franco Gonza Date: 9/29/2015 9:08:00 AM I am fascinated how the cycles of a year give us different remembrances. Outstanding poem! Login to Reply

Anne-Lise Andresen Date: 9/29/2015 4:12:00 AM - Nette, a great poem about the time ...... I wish that "the clock" went a little slower - hugs // Anne-Lise :) Login to Reply

Michael Tor Date: 9/28/2015 5:12:00 PM Nette I love the original clever thoughts that are magnificent. When gardens are birthing, cyclical moods transform, so creative an image! Exceptional write! Enjoyed reading.. Login to Reply

Cherl Dunn Date: 9/28/2015 5:08:00 PM Dear Nette Wonderment in the words of a poet whom feels the inner rythum of nature herself, your voice whispers off the written page like a clear mountain wind blowing through the pine trees of thought, again a flowless write my dear friend, inspirational, cheri Login to Reply

Ashley Conte Date: 9/28/2015 3:59:00 PM Splendid comparisons of passages of time and life. The flow of thought with strong conclusion makes this a superb poem! Login to Reply