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"The earth has music for those who listen." _Shakespeare it is cold and the flowers are dying becoming withered memories leaves are drifting and rain is falling and the river flows like a stream of glass the grass is fading and birds are flying away and the forest is taking on a sombre hue and storms shake the ocean of my sleep where my hair is soft as a spider web and my filmy dress a paling green and I stand still in this decay as a tree with my arms outstretched to the sky oh, the fine thread of summer is a fading thought yet, there is a hazy beauty all around me and within the crumbling fragile leaves soar oh, the splendor of the whirling burnt orange and red leaves spinning like weeping blood red raindrops oh, listen to the sweet chiming of falling leaves that I will hold like a blanket of memory while the wind utters low wails like a hundred violins and hidden birds sing a beautiful symphony just for me ____________________________ July 04, 2021- Reposted August 28, 2022 Poetry/Free Verse/like a hundred violins Copyright Protected, 07-1368-850-04 All Rights Reserved, 2021, Constance La France Submitted to the Standard contest, Free Verse - Old or New sponsor, Joseph May, Judged 08/30/2022 First Place

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Date: 8/30/2022 12:41:00 AM
Quite a picturesque poem. Congrats!
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Constance La France
Date: 8/30/2022 2:42:00 PM
Afzal, thank you so much for the compliment and congrats ~
Date: 8/29/2022 7:12:00 PM
Your writings have no match. This is another. Congratulations!
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Constance La France
Date: 8/30/2022 2:43:00 PM
Christuraj, thank you so much for the compliment on my writing and poem and for the congratulations ~
Date: 8/29/2022 6:02:00 PM
Findind melody in the falling leaves, Lovely write Constance, Congrtas on your win
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Constance La France
Date: 8/30/2022 2:43:00 PM
Joseph, thank you so much for the contest and for my placement, and the comment, compliment and congrats, appreciate ~
Date: 8/28/2022 5:16:00 PM
Beautiful writing, indeed. I enjoyed your wind utter[ing] low wails like a hundred violins." I, too, sometimes stand and listen to the orchestral sounds coming through the trees. Lovely!
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Constance La France
Date: 8/30/2022 2:44:00 PM
Milt, thank you so much for the compliment and the comment ~

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