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Sand watch | Sand clock, Hourglass sand timer, Hourglasses

Man is like a grain of sand, in the hourglass of eternity. Reincarnating with every turn of the glass, continually changing while staying the same. The same eternal energy, moving from one location to another location, in the eternal continuum. We change our appearance by our intent and purpose, driven by our needs, through our intelligence.

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Date: 2/20/2024 9:48:00 PM
Really like the depth of the last stanza. Describes one of our most simple yet complex traits.
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Bill Baker
Date: 2/20/2024 11:15:00 PM
Thanks for the mindful comments, Christopher. "As a man thinketh, so is he." Have a pleasant week, my friend. Bill
Date: 12/24/2023 11:55:00 AM
Wise words Bill and you are right.. Your depiction of humanity is correct and you have done it so philosophically... An excellent write my friend..
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Date: 12/24/2023 5:46:00 PM
I hope you know how much I appreciate your faithful reading and commenting on my poetry, my friend. You're amazing! Bill

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