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. * * ( ) * * \ \ ( ) / / * \ ( ) / * * \ ( ) / * The light house stands Upon the rock Set not in sand Hourglass can't mock It's beams radiate Outward and far away Where wife and child await In that lonesome bay Will the light be seen by The crew upon the ship And the elements defy Lighthouse shine, lead men home To the port, with their transport Light the way, save those who roam Even though family's nerves distort Wa splash, spray, house ter foam light Save home day the coming Finis' Written: November 27, 2022 The last three lines are the water splashing. Therefore, read up and down.

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Sam Kauffman

Date: 11/29/2022 10:53:00 AM

Love the creative visual water splashing Sara. So well done all in the spiritual metaphor of the lighthouse that will bring us home through storms and dark night! Congratulations on your win. Blessings of lighthouses to you!

Sara Kendrick
Date: 11/30/2022 5:46:00 AM

Why, thank you, Sam. I need all the blessings I can get. Thanks for dropping by with such a kind review and congratulations. Sara

Linda Alice Fowler

Date: 11/29/2022 9:58:00 AM

Creative visual Sara. Congratulations on your win! :)

Sara Kendrick
Date: 11/30/2022 5:43:00 AM

Thank you for the visit. I appreciate you taking time to read and comment with congratulations. Sara

Sotto Poet

Date: 11/29/2022 8:17:00 AM

Great creative layout, Sara. Congratulations on your well-deserved contest win.

Sara Kendrick
Date: 11/30/2022 5:41:00 AM

Thank you for stopping by with congratulations. Sara

Anisha Dutta

Date: 11/29/2022 6:21:00 AM

WONDERFUL Big Congrats to win.

Sara Kendrick
Date: 11/30/2022 5:38:00 AM

Thanks for dropping by with congratulations. Sara

Anne-Lise Andresen

Date: 11/29/2022 5:40:00 AM

- A great and creative poem, Sara - Congratulations on your win in the contest :) - hugs

Sara Kendrick
Date: 11/30/2022 5:38:00 AM

Thank you, Anna-Lise. Sara

Valsa George

Date: 11/29/2022 5:09:00 AM

Hi dear Sara, you have an artist's mind ! This is so beautifully and ingeniously shaped . The lighthouse saves many sailors lost at sea. Your poetry too here serves as a light house ! Congratulations on your win.

Sara Kendrick
Date: 11/29/2022 2:40:00 PM

Thank you, Valsa, for dropping by with congratulations and for the kind review of my work. Sara

Mystic Rose Rose

Date: 11/29/2022 4:35:00 AM

This was so very creative dear Sara, I loved it, thank you for sharing your talent and your precious heart, love and prayers, xo

Sara Kendrick
Date: 11/29/2022 2:36:00 PM

Why, thank you, Mystic Rose. I appreciate the high regard. We still need your prayers. Sara

Christuraj Alex

Date: 11/29/2022 4:35:00 AM

Very grand writing. Congratulations!

Sara Kendrick
Date: 11/29/2022 8:11:00 AM

Alex, Thanks for dropping by with congratulations. Sara

Jennifer Proxenos

Date: 11/28/2022 10:50:00 PM

You managed this intricate style of poetry bravely. Creatively and beautifully Sara well penned dear friend. Hugs and blessings Jennifer.

Sara Kendrick
Date: 11/29/2022 3:51:00 AM

I appreciate the kind review of my work, Jennifer. They are not very easy to do for sure. Thanks for the visit, Sara

Gershon Wolf

Date: 11/28/2022 8:07:00 PM

Artistic masterpiece, Sara. Ingenius! Wow!!!! :) gw

Sara Kendrick
Date: 11/29/2022 3:46:00 AM

Thank you, Gershon, I appreciate the visit. Sara

Alkas Poetry

Date: 11/28/2022 4:01:00 AM

Dear poetess your poetry is always a guiding light! \A light in the dark , salute and God bless you always ! alkas

Sara Kendrick
Date: 11/28/2022 5:21:00 AM

Thank you, Alkas. I appreciate the compliments. I thank you for reading and taking time to comment. Sara

Harry Horsman

Date: 11/27/2022 10:48:00 PM

They have saved many lives, Sara, well done with the shape, the poetry lovely.

Sara Kendrick
Date: 11/28/2022 2:54:00 AM

Thank you, Harry. Yes, I am sure that lighthouses warnings of shallow water, rocky shores, and other hazards have been instrumental in saving many lives. Thanks again for the visit. Sara

Tom Cunningham

Date: 11/27/2022 8:16:00 PM

Love the creative layout Sara. Hope you and the family are okay Tom

Sara Kendrick
Date: 11/28/2022 2:36:00 AM

Tom, Thanks for hoping. Karter is much better and seemed to be fine yesterday when we went to their home for our Thanksgiving dinner and time together. Our son was able to go but he is still partly paralyzed or having problems with body function. We went by and picked him up to go to our daughter's home. Sara