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Jim flicked off the bedroom wall LIGHT With HOPE of a wild sex filled night But the tone of his wife Made him fear for his life Guess she’s keeping her legs shut tight L & H Contest – Sponsor Catie Lindsey 05~21~15

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Date: 5/29/2015 9:38:00 PM
Ha! Ha! Ha! Poor guy! Funny limerick, Jan. Congrats on your win! Love, Kim
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JAN ALLISON
Date: 5/30/2015 2:09:00 AM
Thanks so much Kim:-) Hugs Jan xx
Date: 5/29/2015 5:55:00 PM
The scene of many a past, and present. So love your Limericks Jan, I could read them all day long, hugs and some more, James xxx
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JAN ALLISON
Date: 5/30/2015 2:08:00 AM
If I can make people smile and forget their worries for a while then it is all worth it:-) Hugs Jan xx
Date: 5/27/2015 8:59:00 PM
Back to congratulate you dear friend. It is still so funny. Hugs
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JAN ALLISON
Date: 5/28/2015 2:35:00 AM
Thanks Eve lovely to see you my friend:-) Hugs jan xx
Date: 5/27/2015 1:35:00 AM
Hi Jan I thought I had read this before, but I missed it, so sorry its cracking ....Seren
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JAN ALLISON
Date: 5/27/2015 2:04:00 AM
Thanks for the lovely comment Seren - so many poems to read ... so little time:-( Hugs jan xx
Date: 5/26/2015 12:21:00 PM
Clever and funny, Jan! Congratulations on your outstanding win! Hugs, Sandra
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Date: 5/26/2015 12:25:00 PM
Thanks so much Sandra:-) Lovely to see you back:-) xx hugs jan xx
Date: 5/26/2015 11:16:00 AM
Hahaha....hilarious....congratulations on your win......
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Date: 5/26/2015 11:46:00 AM
Thanks Nandita:-) Hugs Jan xx
Date: 5/26/2015 8:31:00 AM
Hi Jan! Pleased to see you on the winners' list! Congratulations! Hugs // paul
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JAN ALLISON
Date: 5/26/2015 10:12:00 AM
Thanks Paul i was delighted to place in the contest:-) Hugs Janxx
Date: 5/26/2015 7:20:00 AM
Jan, the graphic combined with the words make for a world-class limerick. Congratulations on a win you richly deserve.
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JAN ALLISON
Date: 5/26/2015 10:12:00 AM
Your are too kind in your praise Paul lol:-) hugs Jan xx
Date: 5/26/2015 4:26:00 AM
Downright HILARIOUS Jan, and so cartoon!! Many congrats - Tim
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JAN ALLISON
Date: 5/26/2015 6:41:00 AM
Thanks Tim it was a great fun contest:-) Hugs jan xx
Date: 5/25/2015 10:13:00 PM
Dropped back to congratulate you, Jan!
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Date: 5/26/2015 1:05:00 AM
Thanks Kim:-) Hugs Jan xx
Date: 5/25/2015 9:30:00 PM
A worthy win. Maybe he'll remember, when she wants to warm her feet on his back :). Viv x
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Date: 5/26/2015 1:05:00 AM
lol Thanks Viv:-) Hugs Jan xx
Date: 5/25/2015 5:52:00 PM
nice win
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Date: 5/26/2015 1:04:00 AM
Thanks Linda:-) Hugs Jan xx
Date: 5/25/2015 4:59:00 PM
LOL....enjoyed...super funny
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JAN ALLISON
Date: 5/25/2015 5:07:00 PM
Thanks as ever Judy:-) Hugs Jan xx
Date: 5/25/2015 2:52:00 PM
Way to go, Jan.BIG congrats to you.
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Date: 5/25/2015 3:03:00 PM
Thanks Andrea I saw some great entries was so happy to get a place:-) Hugs Jan xx
Date: 5/25/2015 2:45:00 PM
Like how this one stands out. Congrats. Sk
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Date: 5/25/2015 2:48:00 PM
Thanks Skat:-) Hugs Jan xx
Date: 5/25/2015 2:11:00 PM
congrats Jan...this one got me rolling
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JAN ALLISON
Date: 5/25/2015 2:13:00 PM
Tanks Tim it was a great fun contests and inspired many poems just for fun too:-) Hugs Jan xx
Date: 5/25/2015 2:07:00 PM
Very funny lim. Congratulations on the win!
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Date: 5/25/2015 2:13:00 PM
Thanks Michael:-) Hugs jan xx
Date: 5/25/2015 6:08:00 AM
HA! Yep, he'll think twice, in the future.
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Date: 5/25/2015 6:09:00 AM
LOL Thanks for all your support ML:-) Hugs Jan xx
Date: 5/22/2015 1:45:00 PM
Ha, ha, ha....this is so funny! #7 Hugs
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Date: 5/22/2015 1:46:00 PM
Thanks so much Cecilia:-) hugs Jan xx
Date: 5/22/2015 8:33:00 AM
LOL! You nailed it here! A 7. GL in the contest, Jan! PS. Who's this Jim? haha...
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Date: 5/22/2015 9:31:00 AM
No Idea just a name I came up with lol:-) Hugs Jan xx
Date: 5/22/2015 5:07:00 AM
Ha ha this is so funny. you naughty girl.well done thank you for the laugh well needed best wishes. Pete.
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Peter Dome
Date: 5/22/2015 7:00:00 AM
Well if your not naughty lets not be naughty lets just get on with it, your place or mine. Pete.
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JAN ALLISON
Date: 5/22/2015 6:34:00 AM
You guys on soup have me so wrong I am NOT naughty lol:-) Hugs Jan xx
Date: 5/22/2015 12:21:00 AM
VERY good one< jan, you sure have a way with the humor aspect of the limerick!
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JAN ALLISON
Date: 5/22/2015 1:10:00 AM
Thanks Andrea I have seen some excellent entries Catie has set us a great contest and people are having fun:-) Hugs Jan xx
Date: 5/21/2015 8:03:00 PM
ha! very funny - just what i'd expect from you, jan!
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Date: 5/22/2015 1:09:00 AM
Thanks as ever Ilene:-) Hugs Jan xx
Date: 5/21/2015 3:25:00 PM
very good Jan gl in contest did you get soup mail I sent you last night? hugs 7
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JAN ALLISON
Date: 5/21/2015 3:28:00 PM
I think i replied will check xx hugs Jan xx
Date: 5/21/2015 3:05:00 PM
Very funny, Jan! Loved the picture, too! :)
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JAN ALLISON
Date: 5/21/2015 3:10:00 PM
Thanks Laura I think Catie has brought a lot of fun to the site with this contest - I have another 2 limericks to post:-) hugs jan xx
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