Jan Allison Poet Limerick

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Light and Hope Limerick

Jim flicked off the bedroom wall LIGHT
With HOPE of a wild sex filled night
But the tone of his wife
Made him fear for his life
Guess she’s keeping her legs shut tight

L & H Contest – Sponsor Catie Lindsey
05~21~15

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Kim Merryman May 29, 2015 at 9:38 PM Ha! Ha! Ha! Poor guy! Funny limerick, Jan. Congrats on your win! Love, Kim Jan Allison May 30, 2015 at 2:09 AM Thanks so much Kim:-) Hugs Jan xx

James Fraser May 29, 2015 at 5:55 PM The scene of many a past, and present. So love your Limericks Jan, I could read them all day long, hugs and some more, James xxx Jan Allison May 30, 2015 at 2:08 AM If I can make people smile and forget their worries for a while then it is all worth it:-) Hugs Jan xx

Eve Roper May 27, 2015 at 8:59 PM Back to congratulate you dear friend. It is still so funny. Hugs Jan Allison May 28, 2015 at 2:35 AM Thanks Eve lovely to see you my friend:-) Hugs jan xx

Seren Roberts May 27, 2015 at 1:35 AM Hi Jan I thought I had read this before, but I missed it, so sorry its cracking ....Seren Jan Allison May 27, 2015 at 2:04 AM Thanks for the lovely comment Seren - so many poems to read ... so little time:-( Hugs jan xx

Sandra Haight May 26, 2015 at 12:21 PM Clever and funny, Jan! Congratulations on your outstanding win! Hugs, Sandra Jan Allison May 26, 2015 at 12:25 PM Thanks so much Sandra:-) Lovely to see you back:-) xx hugs jan xx

Nandita Das May 26, 2015 at 11:16 AM Hahaha....hilarious....congratulations on your win...... Jan Allison May 26, 2015 at 11:46 AM Thanks Nandita:-) Hugs Jan xx

Paul Callus May 26, 2015 at 8:31 AM Hi Jan! Pleased to see you on the winners' list! Congratulations! Hugs // paul Jan Allison May 26, 2015 at 10:12 AM Thanks Paul i was delighted to place in the contest:-) Hugs Janxx

Paul Schneiter May 26, 2015 at 7:20 AM Jan, the graphic combined with the words make for a world-class limerick. Congratulations on a win you richly deserve. Jan Allison May 26, 2015 at 10:12 AM Your are too kind in your praise Paul lol:-) hugs Jan xx

Tim Ryerson May 26, 2015 at 4:26 AM Downright HILARIOUS Jan, and so cartoon!! Many congrats - Tim Jan Allison May 26, 2015 at 6:41 AM Thanks Tim it was a great fun contest:-) Hugs jan xx

Kp Nunez May 25, 2015 at 10:13 PM Dropped back to congratulate you, Jan! Jan Allison May 26, 2015 at 1:05 AM Thanks Kim:-) Hugs Jan xx

Viv Wigley May 25, 2015 at 9:30 PM A worthy win. Maybe he'll remember, when she wants to warm her feet on his back :). Viv x Jan Allison May 26, 2015 at 1:05 AM lol Thanks Viv:-) Hugs Jan xx

Poet Destroyer A May 25, 2015 at 5:52 PM nice win Jan Allison May 26, 2015 at 1:04 AM Thanks Linda:-) Hugs Jan xx

Judy Konos May 25, 2015 at 4:59 PM LOL....enjoyed...super funny Jan Allison May 25, 2015 at 5:07 PM Thanks as ever Judy:-) Hugs Jan xx

Andrea Dietrich May 25, 2015 at 2:52 PM Way to go, Jan.BIG congrats to you. Jan Allison May 25, 2015 at 3:03 PM Thanks Andrea I saw some great entries was so happy to get a place:-) Hugs Jan xx

Skat A May 25, 2015 at 2:45 PM Like how this one stands out. Congrats. Sk Jan Allison May 25, 2015 at 2:48 PM Thanks Skat:-) Hugs Jan xx

Tim Smith May 25, 2015 at 2:11 PM congrats Jan...this one got me rolling Jan Allison May 25, 2015 at 2:13 PM Tanks Tim it was a great fun contests and inspired many poems just for fun too:-) Hugs Jan xx

MD Johnson May 25, 2015 at 2:07 PM Very funny lim. Congratulations on the win! Jan Allison May 25, 2015 at 2:13 PM Thanks Michael:-) Hugs jan xx

M. L. Kiser May 25, 2015 at 6:08 AM HA! Yep, he'll think twice, in the future. Jan Allison May 25, 2015 at 6:09 AM LOL Thanks for all your support ML:-) Hugs Jan xx

Cecilia Macfarlane May 22, 2015 at 1:45 PM Ha, ha, ha....this is so funny! #7 Hugs Jan Allison May 22, 2015 at 1:46 PM Thanks so much Cecilia:-) hugs Jan xx

Kp Nunez May 22, 2015 at 8:33 AM LOL! You nailed it here! A 7. GL in the contest, Jan! PS. Who's this Jim? haha... Jan Allison May 22, 2015 at 9:31 AM No Idea just a name I came up with lol:-) Hugs Jan xx

Peter Dome May 22, 2015 at 5:07 AM Ha ha this is so funny. you naughty girl.well done thank you for the laugh well needed best wishes. Pete. Peter Dome May 22, 2015 at 7:00 AM Well if your not naughty lets not be naughty lets just get on with it, your place or mine. Pete. Jan Allison May 22, 2015 at 6:34 AM You guys on soup have me so wrong I am NOT naughty lol:-) Hugs Jan xx

Andrea Dietrich May 22, 2015 at 12:21 AM VERY good one< jan, you sure have a way with the humor aspect of the limerick! Jan Allison May 22, 2015 at 1:10 AM Thanks Andrea I have seen some excellent entries Catie has set us a great contest and people are having fun:-) Hugs Jan xx

Ilene Bauer May 21, 2015 at 8:03 PM ha! very funny - just what i'd expect from you, jan! Jan Allison May 22, 2015 at 1:09 AM Thanks as ever Ilene:-) Hugs Jan xx

Shadow Hamilton May 21, 2015 at 3:25 PM very good Jan gl in contest did you get soup mail I sent you last night? hugs 7 Jan Allison May 21, 2015 at 3:28 PM I think i replied will check xx hugs Jan xx

Laura Leiser May 21, 2015 at 3:05 PM Very funny, Jan! Loved the picture, too! :) Jan Allison May 21, 2015 at 3:10 PM Thanks Laura I think Catie has brought a lot of fun to the site with this contest - I have another 2 limericks to post:-) hugs jan xx

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