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Light and Hope Limerick

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Jim flicked off the bedroom wall LIGHT With HOPE of a wild sex filled night But the tone of his wife Made him fear for his life Guess she’s keeping her legs shut tight L & H Contest – Sponsor Catie Lindsey 05~21~15

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Kim Merryman

Date: 5/29/2015 9:38:00 PM

Ha! Ha! Ha! Poor guy! Funny limerick, Jan. Congrats on your win! Love, Kim

Jan Allison
Date: 5/30/2015 2:09:00 AM

Thanks so much Kim:-) Hugs Jan xx

James Fraser

Date: 5/29/2015 5:55:00 PM

The scene of many a past, and present. So love your Limericks Jan, I could read them all day long, hugs and some more, James xxx

Jan Allison
Date: 5/30/2015 2:08:00 AM

If I can make people smile and forget their worries for a while then it is all worth it:-) Hugs Jan xx

Eve Roper

Date: 5/27/2015 8:59:00 PM

Back to congratulate you dear friend. It is still so funny. Hugs

Jan Allison
Date: 5/28/2015 2:35:00 AM

Thanks Eve lovely to see you my friend:-) Hugs jan xx

Seren Roberts

Date: 5/27/2015 1:35:00 AM

Hi Jan I thought I had read this before, but I missed it, so sorry its cracking ....Seren

Jan Allison
Date: 5/27/2015 2:04:00 AM

Thanks for the lovely comment Seren - so many poems to read ... so little time:-( Hugs jan xx

Sandra Haight

Date: 5/26/2015 12:21:00 PM

Clever and funny, Jan! Congratulations on your outstanding win! Hugs, Sandra

Jan Allison
Date: 5/26/2015 12:25:00 PM

Thanks so much Sandra:-) Lovely to see you back:-) xx hugs jan xx

Nandita Das

Date: 5/26/2015 11:16:00 AM

Hahaha....hilarious....congratulations on your win......

Jan Allison
Date: 5/26/2015 11:46:00 AM

Thanks Nandita:-) Hugs Jan xx

Paul Callus

Date: 5/26/2015 8:31:00 AM

Hi Jan! Pleased to see you on the winners' list! Congratulations! Hugs // paul

Jan Allison
Date: 5/26/2015 10:12:00 AM

Thanks Paul i was delighted to place in the contest:-) Hugs Janxx

Paul Schneiter

Date: 5/26/2015 7:20:00 AM

Jan, the graphic combined with the words make for a world-class limerick. Congratulations on a win you richly deserve.

Jan Allison
Date: 5/26/2015 10:12:00 AM

Your are too kind in your praise Paul lol:-) hugs Jan xx

Tim Ryerson

Date: 5/26/2015 4:26:00 AM

Downright HILARIOUS Jan, and so cartoon!! Many congrats - Tim

Jan Allison
Date: 5/26/2015 6:41:00 AM

Thanks Tim it was a great fun contest:-) Hugs jan xx

Kp Nunez

Date: 5/25/2015 10:13:00 PM

Dropped back to congratulate you, Jan!

Jan Allison
Date: 5/26/2015 1:05:00 AM

Thanks Kim:-) Hugs Jan xx

Viv Wigley

Date: 5/25/2015 9:30:00 PM

A worthy win. Maybe he'll remember, when she wants to warm her feet on his back :). Viv x

Jan Allison
Date: 5/26/2015 1:05:00 AM

lol Thanks Viv:-) Hugs Jan xx

Poet Destroyer A

Date: 5/25/2015 5:52:00 PM

nice win

Jan Allison
Date: 5/26/2015 1:04:00 AM

Thanks Linda:-) Hugs Jan xx

Judy Konos

Date: 5/25/2015 4:59:00 PM

LOL....enjoyed...super funny

Jan Allison
Date: 5/25/2015 5:07:00 PM

Thanks as ever Judy:-) Hugs Jan xx

Andrea Dietrich

Date: 5/25/2015 2:52:00 PM

Way to go, Jan.BIG congrats to you.

Jan Allison
Date: 5/25/2015 3:03:00 PM

Thanks Andrea I saw some great entries was so happy to get a place:-) Hugs Jan xx

Skat A

Date: 5/25/2015 2:45:00 PM

Like how this one stands out. Congrats. Sk

Jan Allison
Date: 5/25/2015 2:48:00 PM

Thanks Skat:-) Hugs Jan xx

Tim Smith

Date: 5/25/2015 2:11:00 PM

congrats Jan...this one got me rolling

Jan Allison
Date: 5/25/2015 2:13:00 PM

Tanks Tim it was a great fun contests and inspired many poems just for fun too:-) Hugs Jan xx

Md Johnson

Date: 5/25/2015 2:07:00 PM

Very funny lim. Congratulations on the win!

Jan Allison
Date: 5/25/2015 2:13:00 PM

Thanks Michael:-) Hugs jan xx

M. L. Kiser

Date: 5/25/2015 6:08:00 AM

HA! Yep, he'll think twice, in the future.

Jan Allison
Date: 5/25/2015 6:09:00 AM

LOL Thanks for all your support ML:-) Hugs Jan xx

Cecilia Macfarlane

Date: 5/22/2015 1:45:00 PM

Ha, ha, ha....this is so funny! #7 Hugs

Jan Allison
Date: 5/22/2015 1:46:00 PM

Thanks so much Cecilia:-) hugs Jan xx

Kp Nunez

Date: 5/22/2015 8:33:00 AM

LOL! You nailed it here! A 7. GL in the contest, Jan! PS. Who's this Jim? haha...

Jan Allison
Date: 5/22/2015 9:31:00 AM

No Idea just a name I came up with lol:-) Hugs Jan xx

Peter Dome

Date: 5/22/2015 5:07:00 AM

Ha ha this is so funny. you naughty girl.well done thank you for the laugh well needed best wishes. Pete.

Peter Dome
Date: 5/22/2015 7:00:00 AM

Well if your not naughty lets not be naughty lets just get on with it, your place or mine. Pete.

Jan Allison
Date: 5/22/2015 6:34:00 AM

You guys on soup have me so wrong I am NOT naughty lol:-) Hugs Jan xx

Andrea Dietrich

Date: 5/22/2015 12:21:00 AM

VERY good one< jan, you sure have a way with the humor aspect of the limerick!

Jan Allison
Date: 5/22/2015 1:10:00 AM

Thanks Andrea I have seen some excellent entries Catie has set us a great contest and people are having fun:-) Hugs Jan xx

Ilene Bauer

Date: 5/21/2015 8:03:00 PM

ha! very funny - just what i'd expect from you, jan!

Jan Allison
Date: 5/22/2015 1:09:00 AM

Thanks as ever Ilene:-) Hugs Jan xx

Shadow Hamilton

Date: 5/21/2015 3:25:00 PM

very good Jan gl in contest did you get soup mail I sent you last night? hugs 7

Jan Allison
Date: 5/21/2015 3:28:00 PM

I think i replied will check xx hugs Jan xx

Laura Leiser

Date: 5/21/2015 3:05:00 PM

Very funny, Jan! Loved the picture, too! :)

Jan Allison
Date: 5/21/2015 3:10:00 PM

Thanks Laura I think Catie has brought a lot of fun to the site with this contest - I have another 2 limericks to post:-) hugs jan xx