Life’s Beginnings

It says man is born to trouble.. As surley as the Sparks fly upward..As I have read, all the Best Victor.!

Before the beginning, fireworks went bang - God then created all the wonders in this world, and lastly he created man and gave him logic, which man did not use wisely, to this day, he is destroying what God so kindly gave us, heaven help us as all, the fireworks begin again. What a wise write, Bless you Victor, Jennifer.

Powerfully poignant!

God created bestilled life, and His breath into that stillness came life. Life beyond Eden's exiles, Calvary's cross claimed the sins. The Gospels speak of abiding faith will not falter at the altar as rumors rise, truth or lies, lives or dies ... keep in prayer in Jesus' name, Amen.

Wow! Lots going on in your poem! Fantastic, Victor!

An ancient argument... some would agree, others would disagree... but we should all accept one another's perspectives. The diversity of humankind proves that Adam was the catalyst for change. Impressive prose.Victor, well done.

This is so true...enjoyed reading your poem

Dam the day they were born without Jesus power !

An old age debate... some would agree, some would not.. but all opinions should be respected.. nicely done Victor..

I love this one. Mankind is so varied that change definitely started with Adam. Great writing.

It's so interesting that your marvelously narrated tale both begins and ends with fireworks, Victor. It's a pleasure to read this poignant work. Blessings.

God saw mankind as good, but of course, being human, we messed up, but God has a plan for redemption. Thanks for sharing this one with us and for dropping by my page. Sara K

WOW!!! What a write. You told the true story in just a few lines. A Great Ending. Love It.... Have a blessed day......................

How profound and touching, Victor. For the ones respect our Mother's nature is wisdom to read through, but the most human beings don't read between the lines of their own story of living. I loved this interpretation of your writing about life, as it really is. I can't understand so much euphoria for having material things, be popular, be the best at your job, be admired because you are the richiest...the story is, that we go on the wrong direction. I appreciate this poem, as I always appreciate the best feelings on every penning by your heart. Thank you my dear Victor. Hugs/María

Absolutely, Victor; the earth's temperament is a reflection of soul condition. Well done. How many will take time to really understand this work? Bravo, Victor! Blessings my friend.

Wow. Stong poem there. Well done

Thus life began in chaos and may end in chaos, though God created everything beautiful. Man is responsible for his undoing. Thought provoking poem dear Victor.

The peace was shattered when man came along, Powerful verse

Such a powerful piece Victor, Created by God and its gradually being destroyed by mankind hugs jan xx

And the fireworks continue but nature will fight back. Man is slowly destroying our planet. Tom

You have fired off some powerful words her Victor. Nothing to contradict. Just plenty to like in a well constructed reminder of what needs to change while still time. Like how much you crammed in with out it looking cramped. Regards David in NZ

you've painted a beautiful picture with your words; did like the ending as well.

What a wise and profound write this is dear victor! Powerful it is! Especially loved “ Alas, it was the calm before the storm, for after man was born all hell broke loose” couldnt have said it any better, your way with words is always so soulfully meaningful and moving! Pleasure always reading your work. Sending you light