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Life Smiles Strange Smiles

You hold me Upright while you tell me It's going to be alright It's going to be alright I cry at you We'll all be dead at some point We'll be tested, all of us at some point I rest my head in the crook of your neck while water flows and you soothingly whisper It's going to be alright It's going to be alright But I scream at you With paralyzed vocal cords Life smiles its strange smiles It brings the best people To do the worst jobs For me, filled with gratitude (and disgust) I rest my head with eyes closed And let you sing Let the youth in you step out And sing your words for me I smile at you While you hold me upright My eye trails the sunlight In your hair I give in, and give over to sleep *** February 23, 2017 © Darren White

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Date: 11/8/2017 6:07:00 PM
All I can say is wow! I like this poem.. Yes it is a powerful poem poem I agree with Lisa. Have a nice evening my friend.
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Date: 2/28/2017 11:57:00 PM
Darren I will not touch this entry. Please allow me to let your words stand. Words that come to mind are powerful emotional beautiful and more much more. The emotive factor truly is present. Well done
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Darren White
Date: 3/1/2017 12:17:00 AM
Thank you so much Lisa, you always have such kind and insightful comments for me!
Date: 2/24/2017 8:44:00 AM
(((Darren))) This is so sad and full of love too <3
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Darren White
Date: 2/24/2017 8:49:00 AM
Let's just say it exactly tells you how I am feeling at this very minute ;) (((Sara)))
Date: 2/23/2017 8:16:00 PM
Yes, Darren, there are tests. I think we humans are made to struggle, and that we do better when challenged. But there is a limit. Cheers, Doug.
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Darren White
Date: 2/23/2017 11:30:00 PM
Yes Doug, I think I reached that limit a while ago. Thanks my friend :)
Date: 2/23/2017 12:20:00 PM
Wow, this is brilliant. I'm just beginning to read your work but I find you are gifted at capturing real emotion.
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Darren White
Date: 2/23/2017 12:22:00 PM
Ha Joshua, welcome back :) Thank you. I am glad you like my poems.
Date: 2/23/2017 8:25:00 AM
I need someone I can give into, didn't want to give in to sleep last night. I'll put on some music and dream
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Darren White
Date: 2/23/2017 8:32:00 AM
Exactly that. Giving in can be too difficult. Put on some music, and sleep my friend :)
Date: 2/23/2017 8:02:00 AM
Beautifully written but extremely sad, Darren. We really have no earthly idea of what life is like for you. You are an inspiration to all:)
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Darren White
Date: 2/23/2017 8:14:00 AM
Thank you so much, Daniel :) As long as you like the poems I write, I am extremely happy!
Date: 2/23/2017 6:43:00 AM
Sadly beautiful or beautifully sad, but either way amazing will be the word I choose. Darren, you are so talented, your words always come a from a deep place and touch us who read.
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Darren White
Date: 2/23/2017 6:57:00 AM
I could explain the how and why, but that would kill the poetry, wouldn't it :) Thank you so much Chris. I don't think you have any idea how much your encouraging words always help me in writing even better poems!
Date: 2/23/2017 5:28:00 AM
Nice pearls of feeling ... a pleasure in reading ...
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Darren White
Date: 2/23/2017 6:58:00 AM
My friend, thank you for your ever encoutaging words :)

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