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Life and Death One Liner

I came out of my Mothers warm womb to one day go down into my desolate cold tomb. 10-13-16

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Eve Roper

Date: 10/16/2016 8:30:00 PM

Nice one, congratulations on your win Hugs Eve

Cheryl Hoffman
Date: 10/16/2016 9:41:00 PM

Thanks so much Eve!!:)

Andrea Dietrich

Date: 10/16/2016 7:33:00 PM

wow, a nice deep one and with rhyme to boot. BIg congrats on a great win.

Cheryl Hoffman
Date: 10/16/2016 9:43:00 PM

Thanks so much Andrea!!:)

Wanda Y. Olivera

Date: 10/15/2016 8:42:00 PM

deep...congratulations

Cheryl Hoffman
Date: 10/16/2016 9:42:00 PM

Thanks so much Wanda!!:)

Balveen Cheema

Date: 10/15/2016 1:53:00 PM

Congrats on your great win Cheryl!

Cheryl Hoffman
Date: 10/15/2016 6:21:00 PM

Thanks so much Balveen!!:)

Kai Michael Neumann

Date: 10/15/2016 11:29:00 AM

True, so true. Congrats, Kai

Cheryl Hoffman
Date: 10/15/2016 6:21:00 PM

Thanks so much Kai!!:)

Lu Loo

Date: 10/15/2016 11:23:00 AM

very true Cheryl! congratulations on your placement :)-luloo

Cheryl Hoffman
Date: 10/15/2016 6:20:00 PM

Thanks so much Luloo!!:)

Sushma A. Singh

Date: 10/15/2016 4:48:00 AM

So true! Congrats!

Cheryl Hoffman
Date: 10/15/2016 6:51:00 AM

Thanks so much Sushma!!:)

Nette Onclaud

Date: 10/15/2016 1:25:00 AM

amazing one-liner, cheryl... cheers to you on your high spot!..huggs

Cheryl Hoffman
Date: 10/15/2016 6:50:00 AM

Thanks so much Nette!! Huggs back :)

Sunita U.D Palawon

Date: 10/14/2016 10:47:00 PM

Eerie....from warmth to cold! Well penned. :)

Cheryl Hoffman
Date: 10/15/2016 6:50:00 AM

Thanks so much Sunita!!:)

Alexis Y.

Date: 10/14/2016 8:55:00 PM

Hi Cheryl, Good description of life and death in one line. Congratulations on 1st place win. It was well deserved: -) Alexis

Cheryl Hoffman
Date: 10/15/2016 6:49:00 AM

Thanks so much Alexis!!:)

Charlie Smith

Date: 10/14/2016 8:10:00 PM

Congratulations Cheryl, well done...

Cheryl Hoffman
Date: 10/15/2016 6:49:00 AM

Thanks so much Charlie!!:)

Tim Smith

Date: 10/14/2016 7:59:00 PM

A nice first place win Cheryl...congrats

Cheryl Hoffman
Date: 10/15/2016 6:48:00 AM

Thanks so much Tim!!:)

Kim Rodrigues

Date: 10/14/2016 7:57:00 PM

So true! Congrats, Cheryl!

Cheryl Hoffman
Date: 10/15/2016 6:48:00 AM

Thanks so much Kim!!:)

Joseph May

Date: 10/14/2016 5:38:00 PM

Congrats on your win Cheryl

Cheryl Hoffman
Date: 10/14/2016 6:34:00 PM

Thanks so much Joseph!!:)

Mike Hauser

Date: 10/13/2016 9:55:00 PM

Wise write

Cheryl Hoffman
Date: 10/14/2016 7:39:00 AM

Thank you Mike!:)