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Life

Life Sweet, hopeful Inviting, challenging, exciting Puzzle, riddle, end, exit Limping, Coughing, Gasping, Bitter, painful Death
Jan.19.2023 Delightful Diamante Poetry Contest Sponsor- Caren Krutsinger

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Date: 2/1/2023 6:32:00 AM
We always hope for each person a longgggggg time from birth to death and hoping it is not a long painful drawn-out death. This one reads like a good contender for the contest to me. Way to go. Thanks for sharing and for dropping by my page. Sara
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Date: 1/19/2023 5:56:00 PM
Gosh. That bad, eh?! What a contrast between age and youth! Somehow, it's not so 'black-and-white for me.
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Date: 1/18/2023 10:39:00 PM
Very successfully done:)
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Date: 1/18/2023 8:35:00 PM
Very deftly done, from the optimisim of youth to the coldness of death, best wishes for the contest~
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Date: 1/18/2023 12:44:00 PM
Valsa, you have beautifully depicted the journey from life to the afterlife. I hope you have success in the contest.
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Date: 1/18/2023 7:26:00 AM
Valsa, you have brought life full-circle in this descriptive piece. I must hobble to the kitchen to warm my coffee now. LOL! Janice
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Date: 1/18/2023 6:43:00 AM
From life to ultimate death, you captured it well Valsa. Good luck in the contest. Tom
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Date: 1/18/2023 5:22:00 AM
Well done with apt adjectives, verbs...Best to you, Valsa.
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Date: 1/18/2023 1:45:00 AM
Sad ending. Just my opinion. You seem to enter all contests. Best for a win.
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