Life

Life, often, is self-seeking,
Sages did, within speaking;
Enlightenment dawns; not soon,
Yet, it's not magical boon...!

From tumbling forth from the womb,
Till reaching our precious tomb;
What go, exactly, betwixt?
Are truths, by nature, well-fixed...?

Not had a wish to be born,
No hope of life till next morn;
Puzzle is whole existence, 
Too less trace of the essence...!


23 March 2022
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Baker Avatar
March 26, 2022 at 1:52 PM
The rhyming and the message were enjoyable to read. Write On! my friend, Bill
Ashley Avatar
March 23, 2022 at 11:46 AM
Dear Christuraj, your poem is potent in both its beauty and depth. Great use of the poetry form and wonderful rhymes too! I especially loved the pairing of "betwixt/well-fixed".. ingenious! Your profound pen shines. Warmest wishes.. ~Susan
Alex Avatar
March 23, 2022 at 7:21 PM
Thank you very much.
Goff Avatar
March 23, 2022 at 10:46 AM
Quite an intricate, deep poem with much to ponder Chris, good work!
Alex Avatar
March 23, 2022 at 7:21 PM
Thank you very much.
Romios Avatar
March 23, 2022 at 9:39 AM
A beautiful poem thank you Pangie
Alex Avatar
March 23, 2022 at 9:45 AM
Thank you very much.
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