Get Your Premium Membership

Life

Life, often, is self-seeking, Sages did, within speaking; Enlightenment dawns; not soon, Yet, it's not magical boon...! From tumbling forth from the womb, Till reaching our precious tomb; What go, exactly, betwixt? Are truths, by nature, well-fixed...? Not had a wish to be born, No hope of life till next morn; Puzzle is whole existence, Too less trace of the essence...! 23 March 2022

Copyright © | Year Posted 2022




Post Comments

Poetrysoup is an environment of encouragement and growth so only provide specific positive comments that indicate what you appreciate about the poem.

Please Login to post a comment

Date: 3/26/2022 1:52:00 PM
The rhyming and the message were enjoyable to read. Write On! my friend, Bill
Login to Reply
Date: 3/23/2022 11:46:00 AM
Dear Christuraj, your poem is potent in both its beauty and depth. Great use of the poetry form and wonderful rhymes too! I especially loved the pairing of "betwixt/well-fixed".. ingenious! Your profound pen shines. Warmest wishes.. ~Susan
Login to Reply
Alex Avatar
Christuraj Alex
Date: 3/23/2022 7:21:00 PM
Thank you very much.
Date: 3/23/2022 10:46:00 AM
Quite an intricate, deep poem with much to ponder Chris, good work!
Login to Reply
Alex Avatar
Christuraj Alex
Date: 3/23/2022 7:21:00 PM
Thank you very much.
Date: 3/23/2022 9:39:00 AM
A beautiful poem thank you Pangie
Login to Reply
Alex Avatar
Christuraj Alex
Date: 3/23/2022 9:45:00 AM
Thank you very much.

Book: Reflection on the Important Things