Life

Oh life what can I say about your charm you play both bad villain and good angel Your bad villain takes my puppy away you make me cry day and night a little heart that breaks so sad that I did not want to play Life can be happy with a good angel making me happy and laugh with a smile like the time you let me play in the snow fun~cold with hot chocolate in tow Life changes as we grow from child to adulthood we learn about self we learn about life bad and good are mixed in just like a fine recipe Date Write:10/10/2021 4 Place 3. Life Couplet~Imagism~Choka Let's Mix It Up Poetry Contest Sponsored by: Constance La France

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Constance La France

Date: 11/4/2021 2:51:00 PM

Paula, nice write and congratulations on your win in my Let's Mix It Up Contest ~ love and serenity _Constance

Paula Goldsmith
Date: 11/4/2021 3:26:00 PM

Thanks for your note and for your congratulations. It was nice to have this win in your fun contest. I enjoyed writing it. Glad you like my "Life" write. Have a beautiful/blessed autumn day...............................

Vijay Pandit

Date: 11/2/2021 1:05:00 PM

Congrats on you win, Paula. Images of life you conveyed hit the mark. Thoughtful write.

Paula Goldsmith
Date: 11/3/2021 9:41:00 AM

Thanks for your note and for your congratulations. It was nice to have this win. Glad you like my images of "Life" write. We get both good/bad over the years. Have a beautiful/blessed autumn day...............................

Unseeking Seeker

Date: 10/30/2021 1:43:00 AM

Deep wisdom! Congrats on your win, Paula

Paula Goldsmith
Date: 10/30/2021 9:08:00 AM

Thanks for your note and for your congratulations. It was nice to have this win. Glad you like my "Life" write. Have a beautiful/blessed autumn day...............................

Susan Ashley

Date: 10/20/2021 8:44:00 AM

Oh, this is so beautiful and inspiring, Paula. Your exquisite imagery moves my heart’s imagination so very deeply, for I have been before where your vivid expression has brought me again. Simply splendid, my dear friend. Indeed, life is like a recipe all mixed together. Best wishes for a win and warmest wishes for you.. ~Susan

Paula Goldsmith
Date: 10/20/2021 9:37:00 AM

Thanks for your note, your very kind words and for your best wishes. Glad you like this Life write. Have a great/blessed autumn day writing away...................

Anil Deo

Date: 10/15/2021 3:18:00 PM

I am echo, as I endorse Harry's comment on last lines. Like the best store-bought confectionaries, there are good and bad "things" in it. And we "get killed" so slowly, we actually pay others to do that "natural" crime ... one human at a time. Ooops, there are angels of course. Pos+

Paula Goldsmith
Date: 10/16/2021 10:37:00 AM

Thanks for your note. Glad you like this write. Oh yes, angels. Have a great/blessed autumn day writing away...................

Harry Horsman

Date: 10/11/2021 1:21:00 AM

Last two lines say it all. Paula, we have to sort it out, many cannot, This is an excellent poem, it runs very deep with me.

Paula Goldsmith
Date: 10/12/2021 1:58:00 PM

Thanks for your note. Glad you like this one. Thanks for saying, "excellent." You made my day. Have a great/blessed day writing away...................