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For Shadow Hamilton's Lets Rhyme contest.

As embers burn warmly at our campsite, fireflies propel, floating like citrus in flight. Crickets chirp in shadows of nature's delight, composing sounds against a backdrop of quiet. Spellbound by the magic of tender twilight, violet and clementine tints bless our eyesight. As indigo hues dissolve into midnight, stars slowly appear like sparkling crystallite. Silver pearls glowing from an elusive height, in synergy with lustrous rays of moonlight. Lost in natural wonders, passions ignite, lovers embrace, whilst poets begin to write. Marigold orb ascends to summon daylight, sapphire skies surface with fluffy puffs of white. Morning melodies birds begin to recite, the heart hopes such beauty can be infinite.

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Jay Narain

Date: 12/13/2023 9:53:00 AM

Nice poem. Great win.

Karen Jones

Date: 12/13/2023 12:12:00 AM

Back to say CONGRATS on your win!

Ayesha Iqbal

Date: 12/12/2023 10:33:00 AM

Aww my heartiest congratulations for your beautiful win in the contest.. this gorgeous poem sure deserved to win! I loved reading it!

Speaks Volumes

Date: 12/12/2023 5:37:00 AM

Nice one. Beautiful poem, well deserved 1st place Congrats.

Shadow Hamilton

Date: 12/12/2023 4:39:00 AM

well done on an excellent POEM and its 1st place Silent One hugs Shadow

Ink Empress

Date: 12/12/2023 4:02:00 AM

Congratulations dear silent one, well deserved win! I loveeee this

Karen Jones

Date: 12/11/2023 5:55:00 PM

The imagery in this flows like a fresh mountain spring. Just lovely. You will do well in the contest!

Ayesha Iqbal

Date: 12/10/2023 3:54:00 AM

Aww such an exquisite rhyming piece.. all the alliterations that you've used here made this poem even more lovely! Best of luck for the contest brother!

Hiya Sharma

Date: 12/10/2023 2:24:00 AM

From campsite imageries to marigold orbs and daylight, this poem truly conquers it all with mesmerizing descriptions, mellifluous rhymes, resplendent nuances, vibrant colourful refrences and what not! "fireflies propel, floating like citrus in flight", "violet and clementine tints bless our eyesight", "As indigo hues dissolve into midnight", "in synergy with lustrous rays of moonlight", "sapphire skies surface with fluffy puffs of white" So many fascinating line here, an absolute FAV for me, wow

Valsa George

Date: 12/9/2023 9:48:00 PM

When I read this I get a feeling that these rhymes have come to you so easy and effortless and never forced. This is indeed a very sweet description of a bonfire under a star spangled sky and the gentle arrival of the beautiful dawn. Into my FAVE.

Mystic Rose Rose

Date: 12/9/2023 5:54:00 PM

Not sure which I love more, your morning melody or your campsite delight. :)

Paige Hind

Date: 12/9/2023 5:30:00 PM

Very lovely, with enchanting images, love the stars...

Sara Etgen-Baker

Date: 12/9/2023 4:31:00 PM

a brilliantly constructed Monorhyme, Silent One. Your metaphors were superb as was your rhyme scheme and imagery! Wow! I especially liked these lines: Morning melodies birds begin to recite, the heart hopes such beauty can be infinite...best wishes with the contest. Have a splendid evening, Sara

Sotto Poet

Date: 12/9/2023 1:22:00 PM

Stunning melodies in their entirety, dear SO. I greatly admired your poetic prowess and strong metaphors present in your poetry. As a marigold orb climbs to invoke sunrise, fluffy white puffs grace the sapphire-blue heavens at the top. As birds commence with their early-morning recitation of melodies, the heart yearns for such boundless beauty. BOL with the contest, this is a fave.

Deb M

Date: 12/9/2023 11:32:00 AM

As soon as l read the first line SO l wanted to be there! Wonderful enticing imagery and words! Lovely…Debx

Andrea Dietrich

Date: 12/9/2023 11:05:00 AM

You did a great job with this poem which is not just rhymed but also has lovely imagery.

Hilo Poet

Date: 12/9/2023 8:24:00 AM

There's a sense of poeticism that you've styled, Silent One, yielding pleasantries. Shadow writes simplistically, having read her sample for this contest. Hoping she finds favor in yours, --tossing in a couple of crossed fingers as well. Aloha, William

Vijay Pandit

Date: 12/9/2023 7:38:00 AM

Wonderful melodies throughout, my friend. Much enjoyed the splendor of your imagery and voice of your poem. Marigold orb ascends to summon daylight, sapphire skies surface with fluffy puffs of white. Morning melodies birds begin to recite, the heart hopes such beauty can be infinite. A FAVE for me.

Ink Empress

Date: 12/9/2023 7:20:00 AM

Beautiful imagery and rhymes i guess rhymes come easy for you and you do them very well using deep and descriptive diction to paint vividly moving art. I loved the opening and also how this evokes so many emotions for readers. Your words are magical. I heard i saw and i sang along to your brilliant monorhyme … beautiful. BOL for the contest

Sara Kendrick

Date: 12/9/2023 7:12:00 AM

Way to go for the contest. This one reads like a good contender to me. I like the end rhyme chosen. Thanks for the visit to my page . Sara K