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Let's Give It a Shot

When will us human guys see the light It's clear to me and I'm not overly bright Like two plus two Love is all we need do Sound too simple? Let's try it... alright? © Jack Ellison 2015

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Funom Makama

Date: 12/24/2015 7:26:00 AM

when the rains fall, they will feel so warm even in cold if they are poured through your lines. You are superb, fantastic and just wow! Its nice I visited this page. Compliments of the season dear poet!

Jack Ellison
Date: 12/24/2015 7:50:00 AM

You are very kind my dear friend... thank you! And the compliments of the season to you sir!!!!

Carol Eastman

Date: 12/23/2015 11:01:00 AM

It's the perfect time of year to begin spreading love and good cheer... Make sure this message- that is so dear... Is sent out loud and clear... Each year we'll add another new frontier... And it might help to pass around the message first, to those that are near...

Jack Ellison
Date: 12/24/2015 8:03:00 AM

And I thought humans were the intelligent species!!! Love, Jackson xox

Tim Smith

Date: 12/23/2015 7:31:00 AM

I like your theory I'll give it a try....grab holg my sweetie and off we shall fly....two birds in love....we float up above....so peaceful the setting up in the sky

Jack Ellison
Date: 12/23/2015 7:36:00 AM

Awww! How sweet Mr. Tim!!! Didn't know you cared!

Judy Konos

Date: 12/22/2015 8:39:00 AM

Jackson....I don't love you anymore....but I don't love you any less! Bet you saw that coming!

Jack Ellison
Date: 12/22/2015 9:30:00 AM

I did bur still loved it! A bunch of hugs, kisses and an enormous amount of love! Jackson xoxox

Lin Lane

Date: 12/22/2015 8:15:00 AM

Lovely thought, Jack. If only....

Jack Ellison
Date: 12/22/2015 9:28:00 AM

Call me a dreamer... Merry Christmas, Lin!!! Love and hugs, Jack xxx