Lets Dance Among the Stars

let's not speak of it again
least it festers and takes hold
leaving despair in our hearts

let's dance among the stars
and shine among moonbeams
concentrating on our friendship

let's nurture each other,
facing a fresh new horizon with optimsm and hope
join me if you dare
Copyright © | Year Posted 2022

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Cunningham Avatar
October 29, 2022 at 1:46 AM
Belated congratulations Caren, great message, count me in. Tom
Krutsinger Avatar
October 30, 2022 at 4:49 PM
Thank you Tom! You are usually the first one to congratulate every POTD - I hope you are well my friend!
De Beaulieu Avatar
October 25, 2022 at 10:34 AM
Hello Caren, Congrat on the POTD My fav. Hugs.
De Beaulieu Avatar
October 27, 2022 at 7:16 AM
Hello Caren, you are welcome. Hugs.
Krutsinger Avatar
October 26, 2022 at 9:31 AM
Thank you Darlene
Flood Avatar
October 25, 2022 at 3:15 AM
I’m not a great lover of free verse, Caren, and so rarely comment. But this is a smashing write that’s right for our ‘hate everything and everyone’ times. Congratulations on your POTD. Terry
Krutsinger Avatar
October 26, 2022 at 9:31 AM
Thank you so much Terry
Wolf Avatar
October 24, 2022 at 8:35 PM
Good idea, C.K! Just right for POTD!
Krutsinger Avatar
October 26, 2022 at 9:31 AM
Thank you Gershon
La France Avatar
October 24, 2022 at 4:31 AM
Caren, a lovely write and congratulations on receiving the POEM OF THE DAY honor, blessings
Krutsinger Avatar
October 26, 2022 at 9:32 AM
Thank you my friend
Buhagiar Avatar
October 23, 2022 at 11:22 PM
Great poem. Congrats on your POTD.
Krutsinger Avatar
October 26, 2022 at 9:32 AM
Thank you Victor
Nicole Avatar
October 23, 2022 at 7:43 PM
"Let's nurture each other." I will join you, Caren. Our world needs this now, more than anything else. Your thoughts are so beautiful and uplifting. Congratulations my dear friend, on Poem of the Day. My best to you. :) Hugs, Brandy
Krutsinger Avatar
October 26, 2022 at 9:32 AM
Thank you Brandy
Rodrigues Avatar
October 23, 2022 at 5:53 PM
Very nice, Caren! Congratulations on POTD!
Krutsinger Avatar
October 26, 2022 at 9:32 AM
Thank you Kim
Messina Avatar
October 23, 2022 at 4:43 PM
I too dare, Caren. Beautiful write :) Congratulations on POTD!
Krutsinger Avatar
October 26, 2022 at 9:33 AM
Thank you Charles
May Avatar
October 23, 2022 at 2:08 PM
Lovely write Caren, Congrats on POTD
Krutsinger Avatar
October 23, 2022 at 2:23 PM
Thank you Joseph
Roper Avatar
October 23, 2022 at 1:04 PM
Congratulations on POTD, my friend
Krutsinger Avatar
October 23, 2022 at 2:23 PM
Thank you Eve
Andresen Avatar
October 23, 2022 at 12:17 PM
- Congratulations on your lovely p.o.t.d., Caren :) - hugs
Krutsinger Avatar
October 23, 2022 at 2:23 PM
Thank you Anne-Lise
Lawrence Avatar
October 23, 2022 at 11:47 AM
Caren, I dare !! Love this and your beautiful heart expressed. Congratulations on POTD ! susan :)
Krutsinger Avatar
October 23, 2022 at 2:23 PM
I know you dare Susan.
Slaughter Avatar
October 23, 2022 at 11:17 AM
Sounds good to me, Caren. A lovely choice for POTD. One small thing, if I may.In Line 2...I think "least" s/b "lest".
Krutsinger Avatar
October 23, 2022 at 2:24 PM
I shall look at this - thanks Jim
Faulkner Avatar
October 23, 2022 at 10:35 AM
I love your message of nurturing and optimism, Caren, we could all use more of that, many congratulations on your potd!
Krutsinger Avatar
October 23, 2022 at 2:24 PM
Thank you Michelle
Anaya Avatar
October 23, 2022 at 8:24 AM
Congratulations Caren on POTD! Let's be more optimistic, I'm there with you! Beautifully written!
Krutsinger Avatar
October 23, 2022 at 2:24 PM
We really do deserve it
Hankins Avatar
October 23, 2022 at 8:15 AM
Back to say hearty congratulations, Caren. I am so happy that this poem is P.O.T.D. Enjoy your special day on the Soup!
Krutsinger Avatar
October 23, 2022 at 2:24 PM
Thank you Hank - twas a pleasant surprise indeed!
Baker Avatar
October 23, 2022 at 6:40 AM
Great advice, Caren. We all need to focus more on the positive and move forward. Hating and retaliating is not working. Congratulations on your POTD, my friend. Smiles and Blessings Bill
Krutsinger Avatar
October 23, 2022 at 2:25 PM
Thank you Bill
Fowler Avatar
October 23, 2022 at 6:11 AM
Lovely sentiment Caren. Congratulations on your honor go POTD! :)
Krutsinger Avatar
October 23, 2022 at 2:25 PM
Thank you Linda
Gentile Avatar
October 23, 2022 at 5:54 AM
Caren, I love the message and the meaning expressed here so beautifully! Congratulations on your POTD honors!!!
Krutsinger Avatar
October 23, 2022 at 2:25 PM
Thank you Mike
Kitchin Avatar
October 23, 2022 at 5:53 AM
Caren, congratulations on POTD, a sweet poem!
Krutsinger Avatar
October 23, 2022 at 2:25 PM
Thank you Tania
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October 23, 2022 at 5:34 AM
We should forget dispute’s with humble hearts, hold hands and dance among the stars. Lovely poem and wise words Caren. Congratulations on poem of the day… Belle
Krutsinger Avatar
October 23, 2022 at 2:25 PM
Thank you Belle
Ray Choudhury Avatar
October 23, 2022 at 5:26 AM
Congratulations on your POTD. A wonderful thought - a world of hope and support.
Krutsinger Avatar
October 23, 2022 at 2:26 PM
Thank you Malabika
Logan Avatar
October 23, 2022 at 3:31 AM
Bygones! Putting those troublesome tiffs behind us and forgiving each other enables us to live a more peaceful life. Congratulations on your potd, Caren.
Krutsinger Avatar
October 23, 2022 at 3:42 AM
Thank you Jenna. This is the first I realized it
Hawkins Avatar
October 23, 2022 at 2:29 AM
Congratulations, Caren, with POTD. A beautiful poetic verse. We should care more about each other; it would improve our world. And give us happy hearts.
Krutsinger Avatar
October 23, 2022 at 3:42 AM
Thank you Shirley I appreciate it
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