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Let the Rain Come

Storm clouds gather over the mountains The day suddenly heavy and dark The graveyard murmurs old songs Totems and headstones standing stark Native artists gave the spirit world voice Gods of nature speak though their art Wings steadily raised in supplication The spirit world and man not far apart The raven knows of the other world He calls out to those left behind "Prepare for the cleansing rain coming Death comes to the body, not to the mind"....
Barbara Gorelick 8/18/11

Copyright © | Year Posted 2011




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Date: 9/18/2011 5:34:00 PM
Beautiful poem Barbara and thanks so much for your kind comment on "Whispering angel". Walter
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Date: 8/25/2011 9:27:00 PM
Excellent piece. Congrats on this fine write. Loved it. God Bless, JB
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Date: 8/25/2011 8:27:00 PM
Good one..If for the contest, reads like a winner..We definitely cleanse the carnality of the body and the mind..Sara
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Date: 8/23/2011 4:50:00 PM
I love it. Congratulations on your placement with this well deserved work of art.
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Date: 8/23/2011 1:36:00 PM
Congratulations on your placement in Francine Roberts' "Totems in the Darkening Sky" contest Barbara. Love, Carol
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Date: 8/20/2011 8:31:00 PM
I see congrats are in order here dear poet ! ((((((claps)))))) Splendid write Barbara ! Have a fantastic weekend...much love, james
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Date: 8/20/2011 8:57:00 AM
Many congrats to you, Barbara : )
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Date: 8/20/2011 3:43:00 AM
hey Barbara, congrats on your win David
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Date: 8/20/2011 1:43:00 AM
Great writing Barbara. Congratulations. Love, Joyce
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Date: 8/19/2011 11:53:00 PM
Congrats BG on your fabulous fifth place win in Totem contest with this grand creation luv..
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Date: 8/19/2011 10:22:00 PM
congrats on your fifth place win in the contest Barbara with this wonderful entry
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Date: 8/18/2011 10:43:00 PM
I wish the rains would come here in Denver, today it was 99 this has been the hotest summer we have had since we have lived here which is 1977. so reading this beautiful poem made me feel a little cool for a while. enjoyed it.
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