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Fun is explosive, fun is basic joy springs from many hearts to make pleasure orgasmic. Moving clothes and flesh accentuate the electrifying scene flashes of darkness, makes crazy come clean. Changing colours, flowing rhythms, high spirits, there's always a reason staying still against the infectious melody? That's treason! The Dj has got enough gas in his lungs heat, check! Mood, check! Visuals, check! There can never be any wrongs. Go with the beats, dance to the tune, its pretty straight forward add jumping and acrobatics, nothing is awkward. Loud speakers revolve minds over each other for time not to linger forget all the hustle, let formality slip and lose a finger. The rotating illuminating balls are clearly instructive increasing the groove for dancers to follow their directives. House is full, influenced by a soft command it's allowed for steps to come in many brands. Positive energy embraced by young souls in monomania a joke on man's hand to make his cycle funnier. The night started with something to hatch morning draws near with everything to catch.

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Date: 10/15/2019 6:24:00 PM
I enjoyed your poem, Funom, filled with color, life and energy, about letting go and abandoning oneself to the rhythm. It was very fun to read, and reminiscent of the seventies.
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Date: 8/19/2019 6:34:00 PM
Oh my. I hated disco...Thank God for 'Meatloaf'...I would have never made it though the seventies. Have a great day my friend.
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Date: 8/5/2019 9:30:00 PM
Boy, that takes me back a way. Thanks for the memories.
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Date: 8/9/2019 8:19:00 AM
Yeeeeaaaah and I am sure it was soooooo much fun. I am glad, it's giving you that breath of fresh air. Thank you so much for the comment, my friend
Date: 7/31/2019 4:22:00 AM
"jumping and acrobatics, nothing is awkward." - and sometimes people tell me to calm down when I am dancing but I cannot! This poem has such a terrific BEAT!
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Date: 8/9/2019 8:18:00 AM
Nooooo! They should never limit you.. Please do all the acrobatics you can, even though I would tell you to do it with caution since age is no more on your side. Thank you so much for your comment Caren Krutsinger.
Date: 7/30/2019 5:24:00 PM
Remember vividly those disco nights way back when. Relived the memory! Extremely entertaining Funom.
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Date: 8/9/2019 8:16:00 AM
Yeah.. It was full of fun... Thank you so much Ronald Thompson
Date: 7/30/2019 4:02:00 PM
Your descriptive and electrifying poem takes me back in time, Funom, when we used to dance the night away! Regards // paul
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Date: 8/9/2019 8:14:00 AM
Yeah... I can only imagine the fun Paul. Thank you so much for your comment.
Date: 7/30/2019 2:01:00 PM
Great , fun poem Funom. Thanks for sharing :)
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Funom Makama
Date: 8/9/2019 8:12:00 AM
Thank you so much Heidi Sands
Date: 7/30/2019 1:54:00 PM
I'm a little too young for the disco era, but this is full of energy and vibrancy!
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Funom Makama
Date: 8/9/2019 8:12:00 AM
Yes, so full of energy, fun and innocent bliss
Date: 7/30/2019 1:31:00 PM
Disco died too quickly. Someone should bring it back! Very enthusiastic, colorful piece, Funom. Welcome back! Janice
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Date: 8/9/2019 8:11:00 AM
Thank you so much Janice.. I truly appreciate it.
Date: 7/30/2019 1:16:00 PM
A fun one! Enjoyed!
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Funom Makama
Date: 8/9/2019 8:10:00 AM
Thank you Kim

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