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Let Me Love You

If I weren't afraid, I'd steal the stars to gather their lively brilliance; while my heart cuddles your laughter and dives into your rosette blushes reflecting spring’s twilight in your eyes: a dream that they would soon be mine before the last vestige of evening dims. O trying to be brave, I'd chain the moon then keep it shining as dawn explodes, as the fragrance of love covers us wafting like ambrosial dew by your side: then let me reach out where glances meet until this breath climbs for a hum to say, 'I'll warm you through all nights.' ---------------- Contest of Mystic Rose: Help Me Fall In Love 9/12/2017

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Date: 9/22/2017 8:37:00 AM
Congrats Nette, for your applause with this awesome piece! ;-)
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Date: 9/20/2017 10:14:00 AM
Excellent poem.
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Date: 9/16/2017 5:18:00 PM
Nette congratulations on your win with this beautifully penned poem
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Date: 9/15/2017 6:07:00 AM
Congrats nette!
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Date: 9/14/2017 7:58:00 PM
Whimsical and charming, Nette - enjoyed this write very much! Congrats on your win, my friend! :-) <3
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Date: 9/13/2017 3:48:00 AM
I do warm my love through all the nights! This is an exquisite and exceptional write my friend! I really enjoyed reading your light poetry, certainly a grandiose poem, this morning Nette! You have written such an amazing and astonishing piece, one that I believe to be a masterful poem...certain to do well in Vienna's contest! Great Work!!
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Date: 9/12/2017 2:26:00 PM
- Lots of love you give in your lovely lines, Nette - Best wishes in the contest - hugs // Anne-Lise :)
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Date: 9/12/2017 12:09:00 PM
Lovely sweet poem nette! It touches the heart ever so softly with your poetic words--so well written as always!
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Date: 9/12/2017 11:56:00 AM
Beautiful imagery , Nette, your poems always exquisite Hugs Eve ~`*
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