Less Than Fresh

I just found a P. S. feature
that I hadn’t seen before.
It’s the one on well-known clichés.
If you use them you’re a bore.

I thought I’d take a look to see
if I had been guilty of
using other folks bright phrases
in a way they’d disapprove.

I was surprised that many thoughts
I believed were mine alone
had before been poetically expressed
and were not mine to own. 

It was like being asked to write
an essay extraordinary,
while being banned from using
words from Webster’s dictionary.

Since I am so many years older 
than are any one of you,
perhaps when I first wrote them
they were entirely new.

If so I have a legal claim
to some of them, you see.
It’s not I who am transgressing.
You’ve been stealing them from me.

Won no. 9
Copyright © | Year Posted 2011


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Date: 9/24/2011 6:32:00 PM
Congrats on your win in Nancy's "Make Me Laugh" contest Joyce. Love, Carol
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Date: 9/23/2011 2:59:00 PM
Congrats on your thoughtful write..Sara
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Date: 9/21/2011 8:48:00 PM
Well constructed and a strong punch line... dig it, Joyce! ~N
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Date: 9/18/2011 2:00:00 AM
Joyce, very interesting and strong,,, Stopping by to read a couple of poems.. God Bless,..p.d.
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Date: 9/17/2011 10:25:00 PM
:-) witty and charming. It's hard to stick clear of cliches. Oh, tried to find your poem and its gone missing on fall cleaning. Edgar Guest, is a poet you may enjoy if you haven't already heard of him. He was called the people's poet. Your cleaning/weeding poem reminded me of his funny yet deep writing. Cheers, gotta get some sleep! :-) Cyndi
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Date: 9/17/2011 10:10:00 PM
Good one, Joyce. Enjoyed this. Kim
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