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Walking toward His grave, the cool air nipping at my nape on this chilly Nisan morning, feeling disconsolate. The sun has just risen over the Mount of Olives, while the magnificent temple basks in radiant light just beyond. I used to view the holy place with such reverence. Everything seems different now, at least for me. My head is still spinning over the events we witnessed this past week. The most compassionate man the world has ever known is no more. My spirit sank as they spat on him, hit him with their open hands and fists, beat him mercilessly with bone-braided whips, taunted him, cursed him, then accused him of being a blasphemer and seditionist. To the leaders of my nation he was an outcast, spiritually diseased, the Devil's offspring. And yet, the things we saw him do... leper messiah execrated pariah nailed upon a tree As I near the tomb where he lay my intent is simply to pray and pay homage, nothing more. Birds are singing sweetly, oblivious to the pain I am feeling deep in my heart. What will I do with the rest of my life now that he is gone? What will Peter and the others... Wait! MY GOD! I cannot believe what I am seeing. Two guards lie on the ground before the tomb, as if dead. The huge stone, sealed with mortar at Pilate's command, has been rolled to the side, leaving the tomb wide open. What in heaven's name is going on? I glance around, no one in sight. Cautiously I enter. What I see now compels me to drop to my knees. In the place where his body was laid lies the garment that he wore upon the stake, bloodstained and rolled up neatly. Tears fill my eyes as the wonderment of what has happened, or might have happened, breaks my heart. Has his body been stolen? Has all of this been some sort of ruse? Just as I am contemplating recent events, two men in white robes appear beside me and say: "Young man, who are you looking for? This Jesus whom you adore has been raised up, as he explained to you on many occasions. Now go, He is waiting for you in Galilee." As mysteriously as they appeared they vanish before my eyes. One thought consumes me now in this sobering moment, I must spread the word. The Messiah, HE LIVES! sweet sacred sunrise dawning of a bright new day birdsong fills the air * See my companion poem - Golgotha

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Date: 4/28/2024 9:27:00 PM
I wonder how I missed this wonderful Haibun. One who loves Jesus cannot bear the torture and humiliation Jesus suffered in the hands of those who wielded authority. What He suffered for us was beyond the limits of human endurance. Yet, He didn't curse his tormentors , but prayed for them. On the third day as He rose, defeating death and sin, it was a matter of joy beyond the power of description. The whole incident as watched through the eyes of a disciple is so heart touching and the news of His resurrection is a matter of incredible joy. Beautiful narration dear Tom.
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Date: 4/11/2024 2:07:00 AM
So interesting! Never occurred to me to write this from this perspective... and so lovely. Because He lives...xoxo, Crystol
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Tom Woody
Date: 4/11/2024 5:18:00 AM
Gracias. The companion piece Golgotha is written from the perspective of a non-believer
Date: 4/2/2024 3:39:00 PM
It's really an amazing poem Tom.
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Date: 4/2/2024 3:59:00 PM
Thx again Robert. The Biblical narrative supersedes by far
Date: 4/2/2024 4:15:00 AM
i don't usually comment on religious pieces, so i'm looking at the writing rather than the content, and my eye goes straight to that alliteration in the last haiku - it's very natural sounding, not at all forced - in fact the whole piece is well written
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Date: 4/2/2024 6:05:00 AM
I try to make these as "in the moment" and realistic as possible. Thx much
Date: 4/1/2024 10:45:00 PM
You depict the story with all the reverence and adoration it deserves Tom, and more. It's definitely up there amongst the most compelling pieces of yours I've ever read. Blessings...
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Date: 4/2/2024 6:03:00 AM
Thx Robert. I think my best poems are haibuns and sonnets
Date: 4/1/2024 2:36:00 AM
I already commented on this poem, but I find it too wonderful not to read it again.
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Date: 4/1/2024 5:38:00 AM
That's high praise coming from you. Thx
Date: 3/29/2024 12:12:00 AM
Hi Tom., beautifully written and powerful , it's writings, thoughts and insights like this that stir the heart and mind and allow you to believe in the power and glory of Christ our saviour . Loved it in it's entirety. Daniel
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Date: 3/29/2024 5:05:00 AM
Thanks for commentary Daniel
Date: 3/28/2024 11:40:00 PM
A retelling, compelling. Thanks, TW. He is risen indeed!! :o)
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Date: 3/29/2024 5:05:00 AM
Muchos gracias
Date: 3/28/2024 12:17:00 PM
Tom beautifully written. Love Haibuns. Do you read your poetry in a church setting? That could be powerful. Cheers, Don
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Date: 3/28/2024 1:14:00 PM
No but sometimes I do my own audio, usually with voice improvs. My poem Mary Rogers has an audio attachment if interested. Thx Don
Date: 3/28/2024 12:13:00 PM
Certainly, a FAV for my list, Tom. A beautiful rendition of the story of the death and resurrection of our Savior, Jesus Christ. Praise His holy name. Thank you for sharing this timely Haibun with us, my friend. Everyone needs to hear the story of the Savior of all that will accept Him. You are a Haibun master, write On! Bill
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Tom Woody
Date: 3/28/2024 1:16:00 PM
Appreciated Bill. And you're right about the need to spread the message, even in the face of opposition
Date: 3/28/2024 10:46:00 AM
Amen and Alleluia, Tom! What a wonderful re-telling of Easter morning shining through your words! I love the way you tell it from the standpoint of a witness! One of my one woman biblical dramas is told from Joanna's standpoint. For me it is like living Jesus' last days and experiencing that morning at the tomb. There is a companion piece that explores the days after the Resurrection through the eyes of Mary of Magdala! Thought you might enjoy my poem History's Greatest Miracle Play. Thank you for this beautiful testimony. Easter blessings!
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Date: 3/28/2024 1:16:00 PM
Way cool Sam and thx for stopping
Date: 3/27/2024 1:36:00 PM
It is hard to believe that they could have wanted Him dead, but they did. It was about fear: of change, change in power structure, fear of Rome, fear of not having enough, fear of a nation dying, etc. Our sins/or sin actually nailed Him to the tree, but God's power raised Him from the grave. I really like how you went about the writing of this one. Thanks for sharing it with us. Sara K
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Tom Woody
Date: 3/27/2024 1:40:00 PM
All that you say is true. Thx for comment
Date: 3/27/2024 11:53:00 AM
Dear Tommy, your narrative is first class. Your ending should be a lesson to all of us.
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Tom Woody
Date: 3/27/2024 1:19:00 PM
Much thx
Date: 3/26/2024 11:38:00 PM
A beautiful one for Easter season. I was at the place supposed to be the tomb when I was on a Bible tour of Israel. I don't know if I can buy it that it was the actual place he was placed. Also where they claim he was born. That seemed very unreal.
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Date: 3/27/2024 5:03:00 AM
Yeah who knows. I'm guessing someone's making money off the sites though. Thx much
Date: 3/26/2024 10:04:00 PM
This is such a lovely write Tom I'm simply in ah thanks for sharing your wonderful work many blessings.
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Date: 3/27/2024 5:02:00 AM
Yes ma'am and thx
Date: 3/26/2024 11:24:00 AM
Dear Tom, we all have our crosses to bear, which is one reason Easter carries such import. At Lincoln's death bed, Secretary of War, Stanton lamented "Now he belongs to the ages" Jesus and all who stand for what is right and holy often break our hearts as they brighten our spirits. Well done my friend! Robert
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Tom Woody
Date: 3/26/2024 11:45:00 AM
Much thx Robert
Date: 3/26/2024 8:55:00 AM
Wonderful! You’ve written a fresh narrative of 2,000 year old story.
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Tom Woody
Date: 3/26/2024 9:09:00 AM
Thx Kim. I deliberately left off the disciple's name so as to create a sense of: What if this had been me? What would my reaction have been?
Date: 3/26/2024 4:49:00 AM
A gorgeous retelling of the most significant historical event. As we contemplate and celebrate Jesus’s sacrifice and gift to mankind. Blessings to you Tom.
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Tom Woody
Date: 3/26/2024 5:40:00 AM
Thx so much Richard
Date: 3/26/2024 4:45:00 AM
I don't think people today appreciate the absolute brutality of the torture He went through. Nicely done
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Date: 3/26/2024 5:40:00 AM
The Devil has his moment of glory. Now judgment awaits
Date: 3/24/2024 10:38:00 PM
You have described the scene so well. No doubt about it, you are a Master Writer. Jesus has risen from the dead, just as he had prophesied. As the heavenly angels disappear ( love that part), what's left is to spread the wondrous news of His resurrection. Its a great reminder to do this as we approach Easter. A fave for me...Hugs
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Tom Woody
Date: 3/25/2024 5:35:00 AM
Always love your support and visits Maria
Date: 3/24/2024 6:54:00 PM
It's the time of the year we align with the pain and suffering of Christ Jesus. Was a great read Tom. Always. I loved the narrative path, it was engaging.
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Tom Woody
Date: 3/25/2024 5:34:00 AM
Thank you Tonye.
Date: 3/24/2024 6:35:00 PM
Colossians 2:14. Jesus canceled the record of debt we owed by nailing it to the cross. Yes, the Messiah is in Heaven with His father. So thankful He paid the price for you and me. Many wonderful blessings to you, Tom. Hugs, Brandy
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Date: 3/25/2024 5:34:00 AM
And you Brandy Nicole
Date: 3/24/2024 6:33:00 PM
Hell Tom, wow, you take us on a journey of profound reflection and revelation. I love how your descriptions transport us to the scene of Jesus's tomb, where disbelief and wonder intertwine. The imagery of the bloodstained garment and the appearance of the two men in white robes evoke a sense of awe and spiritual awakening. I liked how your words capture the essence of hope and renewal, as the realization of Jesus's resurrection dawns upon the narrator. Yes, the transformative power of faith and the enduring message of love and redemption. - Blessings, Daniel
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Tom Woody
Date: 3/25/2024 5:33:00 AM
Sweet review Daniel
Date: 3/24/2024 5:26:00 PM
a timely poem, Tom, filled with magnificent descriptive words and images. There was a certain power and depth to your poem that I highly appreciate. I especially liked: "sweet sacred sunrise dawning of a bright new day Enjoy this coming Holy Week, Sara
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Tom Woody
Date: 3/25/2024 5:33:00 AM
Appreciate the visit Sara
Date: 3/24/2024 4:18:00 PM
So very powerful your words, your descriptions, your heart, I went to church today and the waving of the palms and the music got to me, thank you for sharing this most appropriate poem today, :)
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Tom Woody
Date: 3/25/2024 5:33:00 AM
Yes ma'am and thx
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