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leaves crunch beneath rat terrier's feet.... five sparrows in a naked pear tree
Written: 12/11/ 2022 For Brian

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Date: 12/14/2022 1:14:00 PM
Maybe a contender for a new "Twelve Days of Christmas" piece?
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Sara Kendrick
Date: 12/15/2022 3:41:00 AM
Thank you, Jim. I thought about that song when I reread it after I had finished writing it. LOL..Not intentional. Sara
Date: 12/13/2022 9:43:00 AM
Sara, love this so much, best of luck in the contest, blessings (I am sent you a soupmail)
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Sara Kendrick
Date: 12/13/2022 1:15:00 PM
Constance, I am glad you like this one. Thanks for dropping by. Thanks for the mail. Sara
Date: 12/12/2022 9:19:00 PM
You sure are in the thrones of winter, Sara. Love this.
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Sara Kendrick
Date: 12/13/2022 6:10:00 AM
Harry, it is not too bad yet. Just a lot of clouds and fog for a few days now plus the damp chilliness. Thanks for the nice review of my work. Sara
Date: 12/12/2022 3:33:00 PM
Love the imagery, Sara. Blessings my friend
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Sara Kendrick
Date: 12/13/2022 4:35:00 AM
Thank you, Eve. I appreciate the visit. Sara
Date: 12/12/2022 7:44:00 AM
A picturesque scene you have painted. All the Best dear Sara !
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Sara Kendrick
Date: 12/12/2022 8:04:00 AM
It was kind of picturesque, Valsa. Thanks, SK
Date: 12/11/2022 7:28:00 PM
great imagery here!
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Sara Kendrick
Date: 12/12/2022 2:47:00 AM
Thank you, Andrea..Sara
Date: 12/11/2022 4:53:00 PM
Great haiku and wonderful imagery you captivated here, Sara. Best wishes for the contest
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Sara Kendrick
Date: 12/12/2022 2:46:00 AM
I appreciate your visit, Lasaad. Always need best wishes. Sara
Date: 12/11/2022 1:05:00 PM
- A great picture of autumn, Sara :) - Best wishes in the contest :) - hugs
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Sara Kendrick
Date: 12/11/2022 2:11:00 PM
Anna-Lise, thank you for best wishes. I appreciate the visit. Sara

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