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Learning to Persevere

Learning to play piano again I feel like a toddler learning how to walk My fingers fumble and like a sin A wrong note yells at the air The note hangs choking melodies My brain aspires to create Oh how I miss my youthful fingertips That were nimble flexible and accurate Now nerve damage curves my abilities And gasp I must ignore reading music And adore grasping sound with ear I am frustrated but of good cheer For if a famed musician can not see Yet plays beautifully I must not be weak If a musician who becomes deaf Still has the skill to work treble clef I too must persevere and do well Ancestors demand this of me

Copyright © | Year Posted 2023




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Date: 12/12/2023 7:06:00 PM
Once you could play piano like an expert with beautiful music flowing. Now with some deformity in your digit extremities, you are incapable of playing that well. But it is not yet time to give up. Perseverance has proved so successful with some music maestros with greater deformity. Continue striving, dear Caren.
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Karen Jones
Date: 12/12/2023 7:22:00 PM
Thanks Valsa!
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Karen Jones
Date: 12/12/2023 7:21:00 PM
Thanks Valsa!
Date: 12/11/2023 7:20:00 PM
You've got guts! ~ Ray Charles and Ludvig von Beethoven
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Karen Jones
Date: 12/12/2023 7:20:00 PM
Hugs Gershon!
Date: 12/11/2023 5:00:00 PM
Best of luck with your musical endeavor, my friend. A marvelous poem about your journey.
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Karen Jones
Date: 12/11/2023 5:15:00 PM
Thanks for your encouragement Jerry! I will use it as fuel to persevere!
Date: 12/11/2023 12:23:00 PM
Karen This is truly exceptional! Hehe, you rock! You are exceptionally fortunate to possess that artistic talent.. Sustain and take delight in the beauty you're able to create.
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Karen Jones
Date: 12/11/2023 5:14:00 PM
I feel like the old dog trying to learn a new trick with an old bone! Ha but I must admit I love to play even if not as well as I once did. Thanks Soto for your comments!
Date: 12/11/2023 11:46:00 AM
Absolutely brilliant Karen! You go girl hehe!! How lucky you are to have that musical gift….persevere Karen and enjoy the beautifulness you make! Debx
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Karen Jones
Date: 12/11/2023 12:15:00 PM
Deb I will keep your words fresh in mind and heart when I feel discouraged. Thanks so much sweetie! Hugs
Date: 12/11/2023 4:07:00 AM
Never give up Karen, nothing more beautiful than the sound of the piano, I'm sorry I never learnt how to play an instrument. Tom
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Karen Jones
Date: 12/11/2023 4:11:00 AM
Thanks Tom. But you play words beautifully. Poetry is yet another form of song. And as for never playing an instrument it is never too late to learn. ;0)

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