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Lay Me Down

Purge these wanton eyes Lost gazing at her beauty Held visions burnt in stone Killing me ever so slowly Exhume my weary mind And cast it out to sea Drown it in Holy waters Where only the good survive Lend me your whispered breath For mine has been stolen A last gasp of indiscretion And my soul is now deflated Chop off my ringing ears So I can no longer hear The sound of the nightingale Seducing me in my mourning Lay me down and let me die This body has cried its last cry I wait with time no more I bid you all a final goodbye **A fictional poem**

Copyright © | Year Posted 2017




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Date: 5/2/2017 6:30:00 PM
I am so glad it is fictional, but I am also glad you wrote it because of its defiance:) Amitiés
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Date: 4/30/2017 9:48:00 AM
A beautiful write Tim. I'm glad to hear it's fiction too and I love it :) Hugs
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Date: 4/30/2017 9:25:00 AM
You made it feel real! You wield potent words my friend.
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Date: 4/30/2017 1:47:00 AM
And I had to type the captcha PUB !!!!
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Date: 4/30/2017 1:46:00 AM
ok ok The hawks lost, its not all bad, come here we can soak our sorrows in an Irish Pub!!!
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Date: 4/29/2017 7:41:00 PM
Your chosen title is an attention-getter, Tim. And the verses ring true to the message you're delivering in an easy reading manner. Nice one!
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Date: 4/29/2017 12:49:00 PM
Glad for that last line, or I'd be VERY alarmed :) Now I can say that this is a poem of beauty. Of all those body parts slowly stopping to function in the most poetic way. I'd like to write like this...
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Date: 4/29/2017 9:41:00 AM
Very sad , intense poem Tim. With powerful impact on the reader. Well done.
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