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Lavender Lady

LAVENDER LADY
She was my lavender lady; Standing by the lake, Gazing across the sky-blue water At who-knows what in the distance. She was the very essence of elegance. Spurning the mini-skirted fashion of the age, Her flowing summer dress Modestly reached mid-calf. I was not given to approaching perfect strangers (And I use the word ‘perfect’ advisedly) But I was drawn to her. Like a moth to a flame? Iron filings to a magnet? Choose your own simile. “Lovely day,” I ventured, “For gazing across lakes.” “Very pleasant,” she responded, coolly. “Do you come here often?” I heard myself say, with horror And caught a glimpse of amusement In those pale blue eyes At the outrageous cliché. “Did you really say that,” she asked, “Or I did I imagine it?” “Sorry,” I said. “I always get tongue-tied At moments like these.” “I see. And what sort of moment is this then?” “!t could be a moment of destiny. “Hmm,” she said, “and, then again, it could be An insignificant moment in time” She turned to walk away. “Lavender really suits you,” I tried. But she kept on walking. I called after her. “You didn’t answer my question,” “What question was that?” She asked, over her shoulder. “Do you come here often?” She laughed “Come again tomorrow and find out.” 19th September 2020 Clutching at Straws contest Sponsor Kai Michael Neuman

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Date: 10/6/2020 10:40:00 AM
- She gave you a good answer ... an enchanting story, Bryn :) - Congratulations on your win in the contest :) - hugs // Anne-Lise :)
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Date: 10/6/2020 6:13:00 AM
Wonderful Bryn! This brings a smile to my face. Congratulations! Linda
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Date: 10/6/2020 5:15:00 AM
Congrats on your top winning poem. This is a stunning work. I love it. God bless you... And I hope she comes back :) Gina
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Date: 10/6/2020 2:46:00 AM
I was totally drawn into this endearing scene, Bryn and would love to read a sequel! Congratulations on your win in the contest too.
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Bryn Strudwick
Date: 1/4/2021 1:18:00 AM
Hello Wendy. Some time ago you you made some kind comments on my poem "Lavender Lady" and said you would like to read a sequel. If you would like to contact me at bryn@brynstrudwick.co.uk I can now reveal what happened next. Best wishes, Bryn

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