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Laundromat Madonna

She precisely folded the baby clothes and being a long time laundromat habitual, I recognized the signs. Obsession at the laundromat level is usually the last attempt at order in a life without. The two blackened puffy eyes and the swollen lip were not too subtle clues and the bent nose and scar upon the cheek told more of what she was going home to. She worked with such care, such intense deliberation, there, in the holy golden glow of the afternoon sunlight, an American Madonna, and I wondered, after she left, what I should have done, and what I could possibly do.

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Date: 10/9/2009 3:08:00 AM
Ahellas, congrats on being featured this week...Raul
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Date: 10/8/2009 2:48:00 AM
I hope she gets help before it is to late. A crime that this still goes on. Great writing, Ahellas. Congratulations on this well deserved feature of the week. Lainie
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Date: 10/6/2009 1:13:00 PM
Congratulations on this beautifully written and heart touching poem being featured this week! Love, Robin
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Date: 10/6/2009 11:56:00 AM
Congrats on your feature write this week! Love Light Truth Patty
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Date: 10/5/2009 4:29:00 PM
Stories like this need to be told so that there is public awareness. With knowledge people can act on something as this much better. Congratulations on this poem being featred this week. Keep writing. Sara
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Date: 10/5/2009 1:03:00 PM
Far to many live in this sad life. You paint a picture with words in this poem. Congratulations on having it featured this week. Keep on writing! Karen
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Date: 10/5/2009 11:13:00 AM
Congratulations on your feature poem this week >> James
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Date: 10/5/2009 3:45:00 AM
Congratulations on your well deserved poetry being featured this week Ahellas. Love, Carol
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