Laundromat Madonna

She precisely folded
the baby clothes and being
a long time laundromat
habitual, I recognized the signs.
Obsession at the laundromat level
is usually the last attempt
at order in a life without.
The two blackened puffy eyes
and the swollen lip were
not too subtle clues and
the bent nose and scar upon
the cheek told more of what
she was going home to.
She worked with such care,
such intense deliberation,
there, in the holy golden glow
of the afternoon sunlight,
an American Madonna, and
I wondered, after she left,
what I should have done, and
what I could possibly do.
Copyright © | Year Posted 2007

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October 9, 2009 at 3:08 AM
Ahellas, congrats on being featured this week...Raul
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October 8, 2009 at 2:48 AM
I hope she gets help before it is to late. A crime that this still goes on. Great writing, Ahellas. Congratulations on this well deserved feature of the week. Lainie
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October 6, 2009 at 1:13 PM
Congratulations on this beautifully written and heart touching poem being featured this week! Love, Robin
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October 6, 2009 at 11:56 AM
Congrats on your feature write this week! Love Light Truth Patty
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October 5, 2009 at 4:29 PM
Stories like this need to be told so that there is public awareness. With knowledge people can act on something as this much better. Congratulations on this poem being featred this week. Keep writing. Sara
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October 5, 2009 at 1:03 PM
Far to many live in this sad life. You paint a picture with words in this poem. Congratulations on having it featured this week. Keep on writing! Karen
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October 5, 2009 at 11:13 AM
Congratulations on your feature poem this week >> James
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October 5, 2009 at 3:45 AM
Congratulations on your well deserved poetry being featured this week Ahellas. Love, Carol
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