Lately I'Ve Been Feeling Like:

Tim, l enjoyed reading this piece. Life does go on.Congratulations on your win:-)Alexis

Yep life goes on, enjoyed, congratulations

Wonderful write Tim! Congrats on big win!

Tim. Congratulations on your sweet Romantic WIN... SKAT

That's brilliant Tim! Love ur write full of vivid thoughts n vibrant emotions! Congrats on big win!

Hi Tim, Congratulations, with your awesome rejection poem.... LOVE LINDA

I think I think too much too !! .....I think you think brilliantly !

Congrats on this fine write, Tim

Congratulations on your win Tim.

Congratulations and thank you for entering the contest. Love and prayers and God bless you, Gina

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I'm guilty of thinking too much, don't you wish there was an off switch some days? : ) Yes, life is precious and short, what is meant to be will be Tim, let's make a pact and both agree not to think too much okay. Terrific write! Hugs

That first line captures so much in so many layers. Great tone this poem creates. Good to read you again, Tim: I have missed being around. Will share a poem I wrote about Ireland after my first visit there. It is a magical place and a land of poets. SuZ

I hope life is treating you well. Continue on and keep writing. I enjoyed reading a couple of your poems this early morning. Take special care and have a lovely rest of the week. Always, Laura

Ahhhh, but I read HOPE between the lines!

Of course i will. Ask, dammit, ask (lol). Lucky the being who managed to touch you so deeply. Good luck, Tim. May you have your answers soon. Licia :-)

There is much more to this poem than first meets the eye.......I think some of these feelings are not just your poetic imagination having fun, but perhaps reflecting something more real, and needing to know where you stand. I hope you get the answers you are hoping for......and yes.....life is short, fragile, and precious..... I hope she recognizes it the same as you! :) Best wishes my friend!

...life goes on...and so should we...

So intriguing this poem...So many questions unanswered..Yearning..thought..desire.Life is short ..lets make each day count and emotions flow..That s the clever sentimental msg i see here.Original as always Tim Tnks for stopping by my Oasis.big smile : )

Wow! Quite unique! Facinating piece.

Oh Tim, I'm faving this. It is so beautiful and full of emotions....Don't wait...make a move! ;) Hugs!

I couldn't have said it better myself. I love the piano and carrot line. Everyday I wake, I need to live in the now, and not waste my time on weary feelings. My life is to precious. Tim, this is a nice one. I'm happy for you. Don't ever be someones fool. I know how it feels to have your mind only on one person. this reminds me of a song called... "I got my mind set on you." by George Harrison. ps... thank you for supporting my contest... always & forever The Poet Destroyer