Lasting Impressions

Lasting Impressions

From the window, lightning
It’s lasted twenty minutes now
Visible, jagged bolts
A dot to dot that darts across the sky
Growing in size, an angry streak
I stare in awe, astonishing gold
Something to be watched for free
No flick of a switch can stop this animation
Spreads like wildfire, far out to sea
Beaming down on the waters, a brilliant blue
Startled dolphins collecting in marvel
To watch the display of metallic lights
Intrudes the sky, intermittent as a faulty bulb
Revealing sleeping clouds above
They wake for a second and glow, pulsate
With a silvery almost lucid pink tinge
A pure, pre-eminent firework display
The sound of thunder’s gone astray
No harsh winds, rain or sleet
The night composed, a tender breeze
Ice particles above freezing level collide
Magnificent white light
Silver tinsel and rapid static waves
For a split second
Then it is gone
Unlike a plane no impression is left
No trace of its trail
Just a memory
Copyright © | Year Posted 2009

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Guzzi Avatar
July 6, 2009 at 11:46 AM
full of wonder & longing. Light & Love
Spence Sr Avatar
July 4, 2009 at 1:49 PM
Awesome job! I like the flow of the words and the essence of the poem regarding "Lasting Impression." Welcome to PoetrySoup! ~Joseph
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July 1, 2009 at 9:31 AM
Nice use of imagery in this poem. Welcome to Poetry Soup! I hope you enjoy your time spent here. Best wishes with your writing. Karen
Fraser Avatar
June 29, 2009 at 10:39 AM
Nice write Felicity, a warm welcome to the soup>>James
Al-Riyami Avatar
June 29, 2009 at 9:46 AM
Vi Ri Vi Vid =) Love the Descriptive Usage<33 Diggin'
Brown Avatar
June 29, 2009 at 6:54 AM
Welcome to PoetrySoup Felicity. I am hoping to read many more poems written by you. Love, Carol
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