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Lasting Impressions

Lasting Impressions From the window, lightning It’s lasted twenty minutes now Visible, jagged bolts A dot to dot that darts across the sky Growing in size, an angry streak I stare in awe, astonishing gold Something to be watched for free No flick of a switch can stop this animation Spreads like wildfire, far out to sea Beaming down on the waters, a brilliant blue Startled dolphins collecting in marvel To watch the display of metallic lights Intrudes the sky, intermittent as a faulty bulb Revealing sleeping clouds above They wake for a second and glow, pulsate With a silvery almost lucid pink tinge A pure, pre-eminent firework display The sound of thunder’s gone astray No harsh winds, rain or sleet The night composed, a tender breeze Ice particles above freezing level collide Magnificent white light Silver tinsel and rapid static waves For a split second Then it is gone Unlike a plane no impression is left No trace of its trail Just a memory

Copyright © | Year Posted 2009




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Date: 7/6/2009 11:46:00 AM
full of wonder & longing. Light & Love
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Date: 7/4/2009 1:49:00 PM
Awesome job! I like the flow of the words and the essence of the poem regarding "Lasting Impression." Welcome to PoetrySoup! ~Joseph
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Date: 7/1/2009 9:31:00 AM
Nice use of imagery in this poem. Welcome to Poetry Soup! I hope you enjoy your time spent here. Best wishes with your writing. Karen
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Date: 6/29/2009 10:39:00 AM
Nice write Felicity, a warm welcome to the soup>>James
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Date: 6/29/2009 9:46:00 AM
Vi Ri Vi Vid =) Love the Descriptive Usage<33 Diggin'
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Date: 6/29/2009 6:54:00 AM
Welcome to PoetrySoup Felicity. I am hoping to read many more poems written by you. Love, Carol
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