Lasting

lasting
is truly a
common phenomenon
that is greatly misunderstood
for soul, emotions - forever lasting,
ever changing, reinventing,
and manifesting in
a form that is
lasting
Copyright © | Year Posted 2023

Poem

Post Comments

Poetrysoup is an environment of encouragement and growth so only provide specific positive comments that indicate what you appreciate about the poem. Negative comments will result your account being banned.

Please Login to post a comment

La France Avatar
April 3, 2023 at 3:08 PM
Linda, wonderful writing and thank you for sharing your poem in my Writing Challenge congratulations !
Fowler Avatar
April 3, 2023 at 4:17 PM
Thank you for you kind words and congrats Constance. :)
Ray Choudhury Avatar
March 17, 2023 at 3:58 PM
Congratulations, Dear Linda. Really enjoyed this deeply meaningful poem. Love ~ Mala
Fowler Avatar
March 17, 2023 at 3:59 PM
Thank you dear Mala. I love your thoughtful comment. :)
May Avatar
March 17, 2023 at 11:58 AM
Congrats on your win Linda, Very nicely penned
Fowler Avatar
March 17, 2023 at 12:46 PM
Thank you Joseph. :)
Peck Avatar
March 17, 2023 at 10:51 AM
Linda, Your poem is so wise and beautiful. As I understand energy, all living things are composed of it. Now science has found dirt is alive, too. God was very thorough! Anyhow, congratulations!
Fowler Avatar
March 17, 2023 at 11:06 AM
Hi Ann. New meaning to what goes around, comes around. :) Thanks for stopping by!
Congratulations on your top win , Linda. Wonderful people
Fowler Avatar
March 17, 2023 at 11:06 AM
Many thanks my new friend. :)
Andresen Avatar
March 17, 2023 at 9:39 AM
- Congratulations on your beautiful win poem, Linda :) - hugs
Fowler Avatar
March 17, 2023 at 10:28 AM
hanks Anne-Lise. I hope your day is going well. :)
Poteet Avatar
March 17, 2023 at 9:06 AM
I like your take on the Einstein quote. He likely was not talking of emotional or spiritual energy but you created a great twist of thinking that makes for super poetry. Nice cinquain.
Fowler Avatar
March 17, 2023 at 10:27 AM
I agree - just wanted to stir the brain cells a little bit :) Thanks for stopping and commenting Reason!
Poet Avatar
March 17, 2023 at 8:35 AM
Extremely well done, Linda. Congrats on your win!
Fowler Avatar
March 17, 2023 at 10:26 AM
Thank you Lasaad. :)
Alex Avatar
March 17, 2023 at 7:25 AM
A great and beautiful rectameter. Congratulations!
Fowler Avatar
March 17, 2023 at 7:26 AM
Many thanks Alex!
Goldsmith Avatar
March 16, 2023 at 9:43 AM
I enjoyed Your "lasting write. Good luck. Have a blessed day................
Fowler Avatar
March 16, 2023 at 10:12 AM
Thank you my friend Paula. :)
Romios Avatar
March 16, 2023 at 6:38 AM
Deep thoughts, Linda Pangie xo
Fowler Avatar
March 16, 2023 at 6:54 AM
Hey Pangie. Good to see you. Thanks for commenting ;)
Brul Avatar
March 16, 2023 at 4:57 AM
Absolutely beautiful! You conveyed a profound truth ?n just few words. Blessings.
Fowler Avatar
March 16, 2023 at 6:54 AM
Thank you - all things are lasting, just in how we perceive them. :)
Meadows Avatar
March 15, 2023 at 4:50 AM
A good poem. Well done.
Fowler Avatar
March 15, 2023 at 4:57 PM
Many thanks Jeanette! :)
Buhagiar Avatar
March 15, 2023 at 2:59 AM
Lovely poem. Excellent.
Fowler Avatar
March 15, 2023 at 4:57 PM
Thank you dear Victor. hugs! :)
Volumes Avatar
March 14, 2023 at 3:19 PM
A really well constructed poem Linda. Interesting concept and a great entry for the contest. Best wishes.
Fowler Avatar
March 14, 2023 at 4:08 PM
You know me Wen. I'm the oddball. LOL I like to find a different approach or perspective. :) Thanks for visiting!
Get a Premium Membership
Turn off ads, get more exposure for your poetry, and get more features with a Premium Membership.
Book: Diverse Voices: The Poetry of Human Rights and the Pursuit of Peace