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Last Minute Heaven

To touch space and shiver against those fabric-brushed black fields of dismembered poppies. To see eyes sparkle an epitaph of love, in shallow-paddled darkness, hoping serenity stays afloat, just one more minute. Breathless they touch… barely, intensity blowing sense into void, as ends one minute’s calling` and poppies run black inked petals to a brooding,silent heaven. ~~~ 3rd in Barbara Gorelick's contest "Heaven's Sake"

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Date: 10/6/2010 6:41:00 AM
Many congratulations on this well deserved win.
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Date: 10/5/2010 11:53:00 AM
Congratulations Jayne on your win with this lovely writing. Love, Joyce
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Date: 10/4/2010 8:51:00 PM
gorgeous imagery. I'm so glad to see your poems again, Jayne. congratulations. Luv, Andrea
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Date: 10/4/2010 4:51:00 AM
Congratulations on this superb win in the contest, Jayne
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Date: 10/4/2010 4:36:00 AM
Congratulations on your win Jayne in Barbara Gorelick's contest "Heaven's Sake". Love, Carol
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Date: 10/4/2010 2:33:00 AM
Wow! So beautiful. I want to say complex but I think that deep is a better word. A poem that you want to read and reread. Congratulations on your win.
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Date: 10/3/2010 8:51:00 PM
Congrats Jayne on your super win in BG's contest with this great write.. enjoy your win today with luv..
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Date: 10/3/2010 6:31:00 PM
Ive read this poem so many times..it says something different each time. Congrats on your 3rd place in my contest. Bg
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