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Last Line Prompt - Not For Contest

We met on a blind date oh so many years ago You wanted to get to know me I said lets take it slow But one thing lead to another and we enjoyed a night of sin We ended up making love all the night ... instead of drinking coffee in the cafés of Berlin 10th January 2016

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Archana Garg
Date: 1/27/2016 7:20:00 AM
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Aha! A very light-hearted poem..
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Jan Allison
Date: 1/27/2016 1:46:00 PM
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Thanks Archana:-) hugs Jan xx
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Susan Gentry
Date: 1/11/2016 10:19:00 PM
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Your humor is delightful! love it!
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Jan Allison
Date: 1/12/2016 1:02:00 PM
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I do try and write with humour although not everyone appreciates my form of wit:-) hugs jan xx
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Lindsay Laurie
Date: 1/11/2016 12:30:00 AM
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So how did you get the grin off your face Jan or are you still wearing it - perhaps you had strong coffee with no sugar in the morning - thanks Jan - Lindsay
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Jan Allison
Date: 1/11/2016 1:47:00 AM
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lol wish it was true Lindsay and I rarely drink coffee prefer tea lol:-) hugs jan xx
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Constance La France
Date: 1/10/2016 1:12:00 PM
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Jan, oh bad girl, but oh so romantic, a sensual night of love in Berlin, lovely, wonderful, I love this 7 ~
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Jan Allison
Date: 1/10/2016 1:14:00 PM
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Me bad Broken Wings lol noooooooooooooooo I was inspired by the prompt :-) hugs jan xx
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James Fraser
Date: 1/10/2016 11:18:00 AM
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This is a wish I was there moment. Five lines that say so much, love it Jan ~~ hugs ~~ James xx
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Jan Allison
Date: 1/10/2016 11:35:00 AM
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aww you make me smile James:-) hugs Jan xx
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Legendary Legend
Date: 1/10/2016 8:28:00 AM
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great write
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Jan Allison
Date: 1/10/2016 11:35:00 AM
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Thanks Legend:-) hugs jan xx
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Wilfred Aniagyei
Date: 1/10/2016 3:04:00 AM
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Looool!!!! Last line, indeed.... Brings the fun of the pen... Well done, Jan
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Jan Allison
Date: 1/10/2016 6:58:00 AM
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I do try and have fun when I write Wilfred:-) hugs Jan xx
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Kp Nunez
Date: 1/10/2016 2:14:00 AM
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Oh you be silly...lol! Thanks for da laffs! Your nutty muse is back! hugs
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Jan Allison
Date: 1/10/2016 6:58:00 AM
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I can't enter the contest but there is no harm in being inspired by the prompt:-) hugs jan xx
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White Sage
Date: 1/10/2016 2:06:00 AM
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oh the coffee will miss a guest lol, nice fictional write there Jan, its lovely
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Jan Allison
Date: 1/10/2016 6:59:00 AM
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ha ha ha Sage:-) hugs Jan xx
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Etienne Lariviere
Date: 1/10/2016 12:13:00 AM
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oh la la you make me rire with this, fantastique
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Jan Allison
Date: 1/10/2016 6:59:00 AM
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Thanks Etienne just a fun write inspired by the prompt:-) hugs jan xx
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Howard Tunick
Date: 1/9/2016 8:49:00 PM
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Reality doesn't count... great story... nice poem.4
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Jan Allison
Date: 1/9/2016 9:05:00 PM
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Thanks Howard I never look at the ratings anyway lol:-) the most important thing for me is for my poems to get read:-) hugs Jan xx
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Howard Tunick
Date: 1/9/2016 8:51:00 PM
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I have no idea how that 4 got there. Please don't take it as any kind of rating! I do not rate. Just enjoy and I enjoyed this one.
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Mark Woods
Date: 1/9/2016 7:47:00 PM
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Haha. Wow what could be a better place than Oktoberfest for a blind date!! lol
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Jan Allison
Date: 1/9/2016 7:55:00 PM
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lol Just a fun write Mark I was inspired by the contest prompt :-) hugs Jan xx
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Dalia Shahein
Date: 1/9/2016 7:44:00 PM
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Lol , great story in there , it's true love , beautiful poem my dear, hugs / / :) dalia
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Jan Allison
Date: 1/9/2016 7:45:00 PM
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pure fiction write just a bit of fun:-) hugs Jan xx
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Arthur Vaso
Date: 1/9/2016 7:36:00 PM
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LOL great poem, loved the last line!
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Jan Allison
Date: 1/9/2016 7:39:00 PM
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ha ha ha that comment made me LOL:-) hugs jan xx

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