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Femme Fatale Greeting Card for Sale by Cambion Art

light dripped from the street lamp like fluorescent dreams a-mist fog wafting in wavy, buttery shards her own private stage lithe, leggy form and perky curves fuchsia Claiborne mini-dress and black fishnets one spaghetti strap dangling coyly as if begging for a tug one hand on the lamp post the other at the end of an arm bent akimbo five-inch silver patent leather pumps shimmering like herring a foot half-out of one balanced just SO - suicidal and sexy glossy plum lips tenderly nipping a menthol Benson & Hedges she didn't smoke, really but loved to watch the shapes drifting swirling and dancing with an antagonistic sensuality but ... it was also the last, HIS last and she wanted to watch it burn ... slowly with the memory of his kiss the sting of his backhand ... and his damn abuse. ~ 2nd Place ~ in the "Brian's Choice T, Any Form, Any Theme" Poetry Contest, Brian Strand, Judge & Sponsor.

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Date: 3/28/2020 7:23:00 AM
Oh Dear! I didn't expect that ending. That's what makes this provocative piece so enthralling. Yes, abuse should never be tolerated...the world has become a sorry place.
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Gregory Richard Barden
Date: 3/28/2020 2:43:00 PM
Thank you so much for the kind words, Eileen - I'm pleased you found this worthwhile - I get very few comments anymore. Blessings, my friend. <3

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