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Premiere Contest WinnerLantern of the Shadowed Glade :POTD:

Lantern of the Shadowed Glade

In shadowed glades where spirits dwell,
Beneath the boughs of an ancient spell. 
A pumpkin awaits, its fate foretold,
By tomes of old and tales untold.

Carved with care by children’s hands,
A toothy grin upon its face expands.
Yet, within those haunting, hollowed eyes,
Lies a deeper truth in dark disguise.

On Halloween, beneath pewter beams,
Wailing winds weave ominous screams,
The Jack-o’-lantern’s gaze ignites,
On ghoulish forms lurking in the night.

He sees the village, veiled in fear,
In costumes worn, yet souls austere,
For lurking ’neath the festive guise,
A darkness deep, where evil lies.

Children laugh with voices bright,
While shadows waltz in ghostly light,
Sinister secrets, whispers heard,
Carried on the wings of a devil bird.

But deeper still, the pumpkin knows,
The ancient lore, the forest’s throes,
For spirits rise on this cursed night,
To dance beneath the pale moonlight.

In solemn vigil, silent, and grim,
The gourd watches, a veil so thin,
‘Twixt shadowed realms of dark and light,
A sentinel of the Styx, in eternal night.

When dawn breaks o’er the ghastly glade,
The pumpkin’s light begins to fade,
In its heart, an ember of infernal lore,
A demonic lantern, cursed forevermore.
Copyright © | Year Posted 2024

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Guillermo - Fraser Avatar
November 25, 2024 at 1:08 PM
Hi Edward, great storytelling in this poem, like the rhymes and imagery while letting the reader feel thrills with the theme!, Olive :)
Eslinger Avatar
November 13, 2024 at 9:55 AM
Edward, perfection poetry! Its metre/music; its rhymes add music but never forced to fit; its having power to make reader feel various emotions & visualize; its creation of a strong character; its dualism; its story w/begin-middle-end. Superb penning! Bravo!
Peckham Avatar
November 5, 2024 at 9:18 PM
So well written. Your personification of the pumpkin is well done, and your word choices are excellent. I was particularly impressed by the next to last stanza. Love it.
Radhakrishna Avatar
October 20, 2024 at 11:14 PM
Absolutely brilliant write!! so well written and the rhyme is great! Congrats on POTD and the top win! ine of the best halloween poems I have read!
Miller Avatar
October 18, 2024 at 1:25 AM
Very well written Halloween poem, congratulations
Wraith Avatar
October 18, 2024 at 5:58 AM
Thank you kindly Terry. I appreciate your support.
Norton Avatar
October 16, 2024 at 6:30 PM
Very good, Very atmospheric. Thanks for scaring me. Bryan
Wraith Avatar
October 16, 2024 at 9:11 PM
Thank you kindly Bryan. I trust this little fright wasn’t too bad!! Ha ha
Woods Avatar
October 16, 2024 at 5:21 PM
Well it won for a reason right!? It's a great story and rhyme and flow is awesome! I'm grateful you entered in the contest and shared this again! I'll send you a message very soon about your prize! Xoxo-Crystol
Wraith Avatar
October 16, 2024 at 9:10 PM
Wow!!! Thank you so much Crystal!!! I am truly honored.
Challender Avatar
October 4, 2024 at 1:59 AM
Well written Halloween poem. Deserved POTD well done Edwards :)
Wraith Avatar
October 4, 2024 at 9:55 AM
Thank you Martin for your kind remarks.
Poetrysoup Avatar
October 2, 2024 at 9:58 AM
Nice
Wraith Avatar
October 4, 2024 at 9:55 AM
Thank You PS Team!!
Rodrigues Avatar
September 30, 2024 at 6:23 AM
Congrats, Edward, on POTD!
Wraith Avatar
September 30, 2024 at 7:24 AM
Thank you so much Kim
Nicole Avatar
September 29, 2024 at 4:28 PM
' Carved with care by children’s hands, a toothy grin upon its face expands. ' This thought made me smile. :) There's so many different ways to carve a pumpkin. Beyond that, your thoughts have an eerie feel, indeed. Deep, dark and spooky. Congratulations Edward, on Poem of the Day. My best to you. ~ Brandy
Wraith Avatar
September 30, 2024 at 7:25 AM
Thank you Brandy
Andresen Avatar
September 29, 2024 at 11:00 AM
- Lovely poem ... congratulation on your p.o.t.d. :) -
Wraith Avatar
September 30, 2024 at 7:25 AM
Thank you very much Anne
Slaughter Avatar
September 29, 2024 at 10:38 AM
A perfect selection for POTD in this pre-Halloween time.
Wraith Avatar
September 30, 2024 at 7:26 AM
Thank you Jim. I appreciate your sentiment.
De Beaulieu Avatar
September 29, 2024 at 9:35 AM
Hello Edward Wralth, It is so nice to meet you. A great poem for Halloween. It sounds spooky. Congratulation on your POTD. Enjoy your special day. /Darlene/
De Beaulieu Avatar
September 30, 2024 at 10:43 AM
Hello Edwa4rd Wratth, you are welcome. Enjoy your day my friend. /Darlene/
Wraith Avatar
September 30, 2024 at 7:27 AM
Thank you very much Darlene.
Meadows Avatar
September 29, 2024 at 9:34 AM
A lovely poem. Congratulations on your POTD. Well done.
Wraith Avatar
September 30, 2024 at 7:27 AM
Thank you Daisy
Bailey Avatar
September 29, 2024 at 8:30 AM
Big ‘Ween Energy. I love this Jack-o-lantern poem!
Wraith Avatar
September 30, 2024 at 7:28 AM
Thank you Daniel
Lawless Avatar
September 29, 2024 at 6:29 AM
WOW....what a poetic pumpkin patch. I read this to the cat.....he hasn't come out from under the bed yet..
Wraith Avatar
September 30, 2024 at 7:28 AM
Appreciate it John, Thank you.
Jones Avatar
September 29, 2024 at 6:18 AM
Very creative and flawless rhyme! Congrats on potd!
Wraith Avatar
September 30, 2024 at 7:29 AM
So sweet of you Karen, Thank you very much.
Allison Avatar
September 29, 2024 at 6:06 AM
many congrats on POTD, Im not a Halloween fan but enjoyed your spooky write:-) hugs jan xx
Wraith Avatar
September 30, 2024 at 7:29 AM
Thank you so much Jan.
Gayagay Avatar
September 29, 2024 at 5:51 AM
What a beautiful story. Exceptional rhyme and rhythm. Imagery, wow. I'm glad I came across this. Thanks.
Wraith Avatar
September 29, 2024 at 5:52 AM
Thank you so much.
Kitchin Avatar
September 29, 2024 at 5:33 AM
Edward, I enjoyed your spooky poem, congratulations on POTD.
Wraith Avatar
September 29, 2024 at 5:52 AM
Thank you.
Williams Avatar
September 29, 2024 at 5:11 AM
This is a spooky classic Edward, and so well portrayed. Every verse has a twist leading the reader to find out more. Congratulations on the time honoured POTD. Maria
Rodgers Avatar
September 29, 2024 at 4:21 AM
Hello Edward, what a well inked POTD to take us into the magic of October and haunted pumpkins and scary stories. Congratulations, My Friend, Daniel
Proxenos Avatar
September 29, 2024 at 4:14 AM
Hi there, a terrific, scary and honored write. Congratulations on POTD - Halloween is almost upon the people of America. Not really celebrated in South Africa. Blessings, Jennifer
Greenhough Avatar
September 29, 2024 at 2:06 AM
Thank you for this Halloween poem. It is a lovely write and great kickoff to start the holiday- can't wait. I am thrilled that this poem won POTD. Congratulations.
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