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Lantern of the Shadowed Glade In shadowed glades where spirits dwell, Beneath the boughs of an ancient spell. A pumpkin awaits, its fate foretold, By tomes of old and tales untold. Carved with care by children’s hands, A toothy grin upon its face expands. Yet, within those haunting, hollowed eyes, Lies a deeper truth in dark disguise. On Halloween, beneath pewter beams, Wailing winds weave ominous screams, The Jack-o’-lantern’s gaze ignites, On ghoulish forms lurking in the night. He sees the village, veiled in fear, In costumes worn, yet souls austere, For lurking ’neath the festive guise, A darkness deep, where evil lies. Children laugh with voices bright, While shadows waltz in ghostly light, Sinister secrets, whispers heard, Carried on the wings of a devil bird. But deeper still, the pumpkin knows, The ancient lore, the forest’s throes, For spirits rise on this cursed night, To dance beneath the pale moonlight. In solemn vigil, silent, and grim, The gourd watches, a veil so thin, ‘Twixt shadowed realms of dark and light, A sentinel of the Styx, in eternal night. When dawn breaks o’er the ghastly glade, The pumpkin’s light begins to fade, In its heart, an ember of infernal lore, A demonic lantern, cursed forevermore.

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Date: 11/25/2024 1:08:00 PM
Hi Edward, great storytelling in this poem, like the rhymes and imagery while letting the reader feel thrills with the theme!, Olive :)
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Date: 11/13/2024 9:55:00 AM
Edward, perfection poetry! Its metre/music; its rhymes add music but never forced to fit; its having power to make reader feel various emotions & visualize; its creation of a strong character; its dualism; its story w/begin-middle-end. Superb penning! Bravo!
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Date: 11/5/2024 9:18:00 PM
So well written. Your personification of the pumpkin is well done, and your word choices are excellent. I was particularly impressed by the next to last stanza. Love it.
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Date: 10/20/2024 11:14:00 PM
Absolutely brilliant write!! so well written and the rhyme is great! Congrats on POTD and the top win! ine of the best halloween poems I have read!
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Date: 10/18/2024 8:00:00 AM
great flow and cadence - well composed
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Date: 10/18/2024 1:25:00 AM
Very well written Halloween poem, congratulations
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Edward Wraith
Date: 10/18/2024 5:58:00 AM
Thank you kindly Terry. I appreciate your support.
Date: 10/16/2024 6:30:00 PM
Very good, Very atmospheric. Thanks for scaring me. Bryan
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Edward Wraith
Date: 10/16/2024 9:11:00 PM
Thank you kindly Bryan. I trust this little fright wasn’t too bad!! Ha ha
Date: 10/16/2024 5:21:00 PM
Well it won for a reason right!? It's a great story and rhyme and flow is awesome! I'm grateful you entered in the contest and shared this again! I'll send you a message very soon about your prize! Xoxo-Crystol
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Edward Wraith
Date: 10/16/2024 9:10:00 PM
Wow!!! Thank you so much Crystal!!! I am truly honored.
Date: 10/4/2024 1:59:00 AM
Well written Halloween poem. Deserved POTD well done Edwards :)
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Edward Wraith
Date: 10/4/2024 9:55:00 AM
Thank you Martin for your kind remarks.
Date: 10/2/2024 9:58:00 AM
Nice
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Edward Wraith
Date: 10/4/2024 9:55:00 AM
Thank You PS Team!!
Date: 9/30/2024 6:23:00 AM
Congrats, Edward, on POTD!
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Edward Wraith
Date: 9/30/2024 7:24:00 AM
Thank you so much Kim
Date: 9/29/2024 6:06:00 PM
I don't do Halloween but here's an obligatory "Boo." Enjoy your special day
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Edward Wraith
Date: 9/30/2024 7:24:00 AM
Thank you Tom
Date: 9/29/2024 4:28:00 PM
' Carved with care by children’s hands, a toothy grin upon its face expands. ' This thought made me smile. :) There's so many different ways to carve a pumpkin. Beyond that, your thoughts have an eerie feel, indeed. Deep, dark and spooky. Congratulations Edward, on Poem of the Day. My best to you. ~ Brandy
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Edward Wraith
Date: 9/30/2024 7:25:00 AM
Thank you Brandy
Date: 9/29/2024 11:00:00 AM
- Lovely poem ... congratulation on your p.o.t.d. :) -
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Edward Wraith
Date: 9/30/2024 7:25:00 AM
Thank you very much Anne
Date: 9/29/2024 10:38:00 AM
A perfect selection for POTD in this pre-Halloween time.
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Edward Wraith
Date: 9/30/2024 7:26:00 AM
Thank you Jim. I appreciate your sentiment.
Date: 9/29/2024 9:35:00 AM
Hello Edward Wralth, It is so nice to meet you. A great poem for Halloween. It sounds spooky. Congratulation on your POTD. Enjoy your special day. /Darlene/
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Darlene De Beaulieu
Date: 9/30/2024 10:43:00 AM
Hello Edwa4rd Wratth, you are welcome. Enjoy your day my friend. /Darlene/
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Edward Wraith
Date: 9/30/2024 7:27:00 AM
Thank you very much Darlene.
Date: 9/29/2024 9:34:00 AM
A lovely poem. Congratulations on your POTD. Well done.
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Edward Wraith
Date: 9/30/2024 7:27:00 AM
Thank you Daisy
Date: 9/29/2024 8:30:00 AM
Big ‘Ween Energy. I love this Jack-o-lantern poem!
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Edward Wraith
Date: 9/30/2024 7:28:00 AM
Thank you Daniel
Date: 9/29/2024 6:29:00 AM
WOW....what a poetic pumpkin patch. I read this to the cat.....he hasn't come out from under the bed yet..
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Edward Wraith
Date: 9/30/2024 7:28:00 AM
Appreciate it John, Thank you.
Date: 9/29/2024 6:18:00 AM
Very creative and flawless rhyme! Congrats on potd!
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Edward Wraith
Date: 9/30/2024 7:29:00 AM
So sweet of you Karen, Thank you very much.
Date: 9/29/2024 6:06:00 AM
many congrats on POTD, Im not a Halloween fan but enjoyed your spooky write:-) hugs jan xx
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Edward Wraith
Date: 9/30/2024 7:29:00 AM
Thank you so much Jan.
Date: 9/29/2024 5:51:00 AM
What a beautiful story. Exceptional rhyme and rhythm. Imagery, wow. I'm glad I came across this. Thanks.
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Edward Wraith
Date: 9/29/2024 5:52:00 AM
Thank you so much.
Date: 9/29/2024 5:33:00 AM
Edward, I enjoyed your spooky poem, congratulations on POTD.
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Edward Wraith
Date: 9/29/2024 5:52:00 AM
Thank you.
Date: 9/29/2024 5:11:00 AM
This is a spooky classic Edward, and so well portrayed. Every verse has a twist leading the reader to find out more. Congratulations on the time honoured POTD. Maria
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Date: 9/29/2024 4:21:00 AM
Hello Edward, what a well inked POTD to take us into the magic of October and haunted pumpkins and scary stories. Congratulations, My Friend, Daniel
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