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Landing of the Brave

By days intensely bright, the sun blinks twice The nights so cold your eyeballs instant freeze Yet upper atmospheric views entice You dare to brave the ice-whipped, hostile breeze When you look down, the ground's pockmarked with holes And toxic gases float about your nose The sun's gone down, and then your terror grows Just where you stand, you'll not precisely know On shaky surface, bare and barren rock A baby step, you're hurtling through the air You've leaped one hundred meters! Now take stock The landscape here a Super-Man would scare A lunar landing's not for faint-of-heart Just one misstep can rip your frame apart

Copyright © | Year Posted 2019




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Date: 11/28/2019 4:47:00 AM
I think we might have to all get onboard some day soon and head for another planet because the :sun will be gone and the toxic gases are getting closer". Nice one.
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Gershon Wolf
Date: 11/28/2019 1:00:00 PM
China and India go first! If there's any room left, we go next... LOL. ~ gw
Date: 11/27/2019 10:47:00 PM
Yeah - I'll pass on that free trip, Gershon. Besides, I'd rather stay here on the Soup. Loved your poem though.
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Gershon Wolf
Date: 11/28/2019 12:57:00 PM
No problem. I'll give you the WiFi passcode on the moon, and you can stay connected up there. LOL. Thanks, Line!
Date: 11/27/2019 10:30:00 PM
I can't see me ever buying a ticket to go to the moon. If you want to see a bleak stark landscape... just go to the projects in Chicago. Have a great night my friend.
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Gershon Wolf
Date: 11/28/2019 12:55:00 PM
You're right. Both have craters: The moon hass physical craters; Chicago's finances are cratering... :) gw

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