Landing of the Brave

By days intensely bright, the sun blinks twice
The nights so cold your eyeballs instant freeze
Yet upper atmospheric views entice
You dare to brave the ice-whipped, hostile breeze 

When you look down, the ground's pockmarked with holes
And toxic gases float about your nose
The sun's gone down, and then your terror grows
Just where you stand, you'll not precisely know

On shaky surface, bare and barren rock
A baby step, you're hurtling through the air
You've leaped one hundred meters! Now take stock
The landscape here a Super-Man would scare

A lunar landing's not for faint-of-heart
Just one misstep can rip your frame apart
Copyright © | Year Posted 2019

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Krutsinger Avatar
November 28, 2019 at 4:47 AM
I think we might have to all get onboard some day soon and head for another planet because the :sun will be gone and the toxic gases are getting closer". Nice one.
Wolf Avatar
November 28, 2019 at 1:00 PM
China and India go first! If there's any room left, we go next... LOL. ~ gw
Gauthier Avatar
November 27, 2019 at 10:47 PM
Yeah - I'll pass on that free trip, Gershon. Besides, I'd rather stay here on the Soup. Loved your poem though.
Wolf Avatar
November 28, 2019 at 12:57 PM
No problem. I'll give you the WiFi passcode on the moon, and you can stay connected up there. LOL. Thanks, Line!
Mchattie Avatar
November 27, 2019 at 10:30 PM
I can't see me ever buying a ticket to go to the moon. If you want to see a bleak stark landscape... just go to the projects in Chicago. Have a great night my friend.
Wolf Avatar
November 28, 2019 at 12:55 PM
You're right. Both have craters: The moon hass physical craters; Chicago's finances are cratering... :) gw
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