Lady Bug's a-Flipping

     clinging to a wind-tossed leaf
     a red-and-black-spotted ladybug
     flips upside down, then 
        right side up 
        again and again
        in rapid succession

     as if she were caught on 
     windshield wipers whapping madly
        ‘midst a driving rain
Copyright © | Year Posted 2025

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Etgen-Baker Avatar
June 7, 2025 at 8:45 AM
congrats! found your poem delightful. Ladybugs are my favorite little critters.
Wolf Avatar
June 7, 2025 at 9:38 PM
Thanks for the enthusiasm, Yellow Rose. ~ gw
Rodrigues Avatar
May 30, 2025 at 12:26 PM
Flipping-crazy! A fun write, Gershon! Congrats!
Wolf Avatar
June 7, 2025 at 9:38 PM
Thanks, Kim!
Greenhough Avatar
May 29, 2025 at 8:49 AM
Disneyland reimagined. I love the picture of the dizzy lady ug in your poem. It's a good poem Congratulations..
Wolf Avatar
June 7, 2025 at 9:47 PM
Glad this one doesn't 'bug' you, Hilda. Thanks for noticing it. ~ gw
Rodgers Avatar
May 29, 2025 at 5:39 AM
Hello Gershon, your ladybug is a marvel that is clinging, flipping, refusing to let go even as the world whirls like mad windshield wipers. I see myself in her persistence, her small but mighty resilience. I love how you captured the wild, stubborn dance of survival, the beauty in simply holding on. Even the tiniest creature can weather storms and right itself, again and again. Congrats on POTD. Spring Blessings, My Friend, Daniel
Wolf Avatar
June 7, 2025 at 9:53 PM
Daniel, you really, really ought to write reviews for a hi-brow publication! Thanks, Gershon
Romios Avatar
May 28, 2025 at 12:57 PM
Hello G …apologies foe being a day late!. But,,, bringing you a bouqet of roes, that is….If I an get a flight from here to Chicago! LOL Blessings from Pangie xx
Wolf Avatar
June 7, 2025 at 9:39 PM
It's OK. My reply to you is almost two weeks late. ~ Late Lee
Fowler Avatar
May 28, 2025 at 10:34 AM
Truly great imagism gw. And POTD - congrats!!!! laf:)
Buehler Avatar
May 27, 2025 at 7:49 PM
And I thought only people did unexpected flip flops! So amusing! Congratulations on POTD, Gershon. :)
Ray Choudhury Avatar
May 27, 2025 at 6:37 PM
Congratulations on POTD, Gershon. A delightful observation turning into a creative poem!
Wolf Avatar
May 27, 2025 at 6:49 PM
Mala, the algorithm pointed its arrow my way today. Thanks, gw
Nicole Avatar
May 27, 2025 at 6:37 PM
Sounds like she's enjoying the ride. :) This is cute, clever and so creative. Congratulations Gershon, on Poem of the Day. My best to you. :) Hugs, Brandy
Wolf Avatar
May 27, 2025 at 6:48 PM
Hey, thanks for noticing, Brandy. Excelsior, gw
Goldsmith Avatar
May 27, 2025 at 12:18 PM
Congratulations on your POTD win. What a creative/fun write. Have a blessed/fun day with your wonderful win.............
Wolf Avatar
May 27, 2025 at 6:10 PM
Whap, whap, whap --- and the algorithm clapped. Imagine, gw
De Beaulieu Avatar
May 27, 2025 at 10:19 AM
Hello Gershon, Congratulations on your win. Enjoy y0ur special day. /Darlene/
De Beaulieu Avatar
May 28, 2025 at 11:01 AM
Hello Gershon, wishing hyou a happy birthday. Enjouy your special day. Enjoy your day my friend. /Darlene/
Godwin Avatar
May 27, 2025 at 11:07 PM
Really? If so, you have more than achieved the Gemini purpose, to clearly, effectively achieve all forms of communication skills. Seriously, from somber to diplomatic to witty to creatively, they are to become master wordsmiths about fun to boring, happy to sad, fun to serious, love to hate, weather to Kardashions . Now you must sing (it's mandatory) " Looks like I made it ... " and I want to say FOR You I wish a next year that is fulfilling, healthy, secure and soul prosperous. "Oh, happy day" and "Let it Be". I typed this all the while 'feeling' you thought astrology kaka, that's ok. CayCay
Wolf Avatar
May 27, 2025 at 6:11 PM
And tomorrow's my birthday. How about that?
Toney Avatar
May 27, 2025 at 9:55 AM
Gershon, your Lady Bug's a-Flipping, so I'm a-FAVing your dynamic poem since I'm partial to ladybugs. Your description of the action makes me think of a ladybug on a bucking bronco. Yeehaw! Congratulations on Poem of the Day!
Wolf Avatar
May 27, 2025 at 6:12 PM
Bucking the trend there, eh? -- Ladybug on a bucking bronco: Bucky's no match for her. ... thanks, gw
Doll Avatar
May 27, 2025 at 7:48 AM
Gershon, I have always loved lady bugs and have often wondered what they did during a rainstorm. Now I know. Thanks for this gem and Congratulations on your POTD honor~ Warren
Godwin Avatar
May 27, 2025 at 10:50 PM
Ha ha ha, oh, I forgot, these days it's LOL
Wolf Avatar
May 27, 2025 at 6:13 PM
That's right, Warren. My poems are truth, pure and simple. I would NEVER joke or lie. ~ Pinocchio
Prothero Avatar
May 27, 2025 at 7:32 AM
Congratulations, Gershon!
Wolf Avatar
May 27, 2025 at 6:13 PM
Thanks, Jerrold. Appreciated. ~ gw
M  Avatar
May 27, 2025 at 7:16 AM
Biggest Congrats BB on POTD….For your sweet ladybug poem! Debx
Wolf Avatar
May 27, 2025 at 6:14 PM
Alright, Deb. Appreciate you noticing. Thanks, gw
Trestrail Avatar
May 27, 2025 at 5:47 AM
I see you’re not a lone wolf today but indeed the leader of the pack. Congrats.
Wolf Avatar
May 27, 2025 at 6:14 PM
Call me Akeela. lol. Thanks, Keith.
Winter Avatar
May 27, 2025 at 4:18 AM
Dear Gershon, Congratulations on POTD, you deserve it! Enjoy your special day! Well written! Best, Anne
Wolf Avatar
May 27, 2025 at 6:14 PM
Whether I really deserve it or not, I've got POTD. Thanks, Anne.
Seeker Avatar
May 27, 2025 at 4:06 AM
Creative imagery, an authentic gw write! Congratulations on POTD
Wolf Avatar
May 27, 2025 at 6:15 PM
Yes indeed, Seeker. Didn't resort to AI for this one...
Meadows Avatar
May 27, 2025 at 3:46 AM
Congratulations on your POTD.Well done.
Wolf Avatar
May 27, 2025 at 6:15 PM
Thanks for noticing, Daisy. Flowers and Fragrance, gw
Kitchin Avatar
May 27, 2025 at 3:19 AM
Gershon, a sweet poem, congratulations on POTD.
Wolf Avatar
May 27, 2025 at 6:16 PM
Whap, whap, whap. Can't get any sweeter than that, I guess. ... Slap, Whap, then Clap for Potd
Gifford Avatar
May 27, 2025 at 3:00 AM
Hello Gershon, congratulations on your POTD win with your beautiful poem. Wishing you a wonderful day as you celebrate.
Wolf Avatar
May 27, 2025 at 6:17 PM
And a wonderful day it is. Thanks, Zyrool ~ Gershon
Onclaud Avatar
May 27, 2025 at 2:40 AM
i enjoyed the delightful images of movement here...very visual write, gershon...big congrats on your potd award!
Wolf Avatar
May 27, 2025 at 6:18 PM
Yes - for those who have eyes that see. Thanks, Nette.
Andresen Avatar
May 27, 2025 at 2:03 AM
- Congratulations on your p.o.t.d., Gershon :) - hugs
Wolf Avatar
May 27, 2025 at 6:18 PM
T.Y. for noticing, Anne-Lise. Cheers, Gershon
DiMino Avatar
May 27, 2025 at 1:41 AM
Could swear I had already commented on this fine poem. Wonderful imagery! Congratulations on POTD!
Wolf Avatar
May 27, 2025 at 6:20 PM
You probably did - but thought better of posting the comment. lol. Didn't want to bug me, I guess. lol Thanks, Joe.
Jones Avatar
May 27, 2025 at 12:45 AM
Love the imagery dear Gershon! Congratulations on a captivating potd!
Wolf Avatar
May 27, 2025 at 6:20 PM
Appreciated, Karen.
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