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Ladies Fair

to all ladies fair
on soup bloom of the flower...
wish i was a bee

© Harry J Horsman  2012

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Poet Destroyer A

Date: 1/17/2012 5:50:00 AM

He he he... Very cute... Harry, can I tell you who to sting first.... Lol...love it...pd

Carol Eastman

Date: 1/11/2012 8:27:00 AM

I enjoyed this and enjoyed every bodys comments, too. Great write to inspire so many great comments. A delightful morning read.

Elizabeth Wesley

Date: 1/10/2012 7:35:00 PM

As long as it's only a wish Harry, We couldn't do without the man. You sure wrote a sweet (pun not intended) one with this verse!

Kash Poet

Date: 1/10/2012 11:13:00 AM

I think I have the same wish...LOL..a very nice Senryu here Harry.Enjoyed very much.

Linda-Marie Sweetheart

Date: 1/10/2012 10:17:00 AM

oh so sweet Harry luv .. this fair lady is afraid of bees but not your kind of honey .. thankxx for precious words .. soup mail in a few

Judy Ball

Date: 1/8/2012 10:12:00 PM

lol This is too cute Harry. It really made me smile. Cute, sweet and very clever my friend. God Bless JB

Wilma Neels

Date: 1/8/2012 2:25:00 PM

lol really now Harry?? you got me giggling at 23H25 all by myself here ;) enjoyed this witty write of yours :) enjoy the week ahead! love Wilma

Andrea Dietrich

Date: 1/8/2012 11:08:00 AM

You would make quite the lively buzzing bee, Harry. this is SO cute. And i want to thank you for all your sweet remarks and for seeing my blog. sorry I can only visit one poem today. Andrea

Red Fiery

Date: 1/8/2012 9:14:00 AM

I AM HAPPY THAT UR OUR HARRY...SUCH A WONDERFUL POET...MILLION TIMES BETTER THAN A BEE...WHICH DOESN'T HAVE POETRY...LOL..EXCELLENT WRK AGAIN HARRY PS. YES I LIVE IN SINGAPORE

Robert Pettit

Date: 1/7/2012 3:04:00 PM

Nice write Harry, but you are better off as a human being.

Bl Devnath

Date: 1/7/2012 11:12:00 AM

You are a lovely one, heart is filled with love. Thanks for sharing, my friend. You have tied flower, lady and bee all in your poem, it's practical beauty. Nice. bl