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Komodo’s Final Feral Kiss

In my 25 years working as a counselor for Drug & Alcohol and Mental Health and having experienced addiction firsthand while growing up, I have witnessed the heartbreaking horrors and dire consequences of addictions in the streets of cities like Philadelphia. Here lies a tale of a tumultuous existence_-_ a forgotten life marked by the wildness of a feral cat and the relentless pursuit of belonging. A place filled with debris resembling Gehenna, where finding redemption is as difficult as spotting rats scurrying in the wind surrounded by a circle of steel. Join me on a journey through alleys where a dangerous toxic mix of Xylazine and Fentanyl is brewed, which I refer to as Komodo's Feral Kiss.

Blessings,

Daniel Henry Rodgers

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In the beginning was the word- and the word was… light darkness dawn promise dusk despair. I was a tempest child a feral cat- alone wild and untamed eyes a jigsaw of shattered chaos. Mom sighs a rustle Autumn leaves of disappointment her gaze a mirror reflecting every misstep a stalag. "Just Fix It!" her then my mantra carved in condemnation each scratching syllable a fragmented splinter in my fickle fragile frailty. My adolescence bled into a jungle-of dark shadows where reverberation of lost innocence lingered Syringes gurgled deceit in lullaby Grimm and Perrault tones. Syringes pinged promises of false belonging their icy touch cold metallic my dissociative confidant. Each puncture a pause in the narrative a fleeting escape from shame’s persistent deadwood. I a ruptured ship battling relentless waves gasping. "Just Fix It!" I heard through the smog fog as innocence withered like frost-bitten flaccid petals. My salvation lingered in Smelling antiseptic sterile halls hope flickering like an overused cadaverous candle in a storm of daunting despair. Old habits-clung Like ivy, to crumbling walls, under the weight-time. Relationships mirrored my mother’s winter of discontent a carousel of pleading faces spun in the dark. College loomed a distant shimmer of redemption a mirage on the horizon slipping through my skeletal grasp. I wandered / fell lost / my way as the maze runner of broken dreams and vile vows. Marriage followed a flickering flame in the winds of unspoken rancid regrets. Children’s laughter / just a hollow hymn / emptiness / hmmmm delivering dreams of dirt potential again decapitated. "Just Fix It!?" I swear and I swore but sobriety remained just a ghost in the wishing well elusive stoned cold. Now beneath the city's neon hum I find answers in the needle’s venomous vomit Komodo’s bite slowly coursing through dreams seeking refuge and ruin. Each hit a letter of apology I’ll never have the courage to pen let alone send. The sidewalk listens as / the confessor's confessional where I spew secrets / to indifferent slabs and benches. Deafening darkness descends I take a last breath of Komodo’s feral poisoned kiss my pernicious piteous prayer. "Look! You see Mom?" a slur and a drip of a lone cylindrical slobber "I’ve Just Fixed It." My final words hang like a fading film in the air that no longer seeks me My life is a tragic poetic play of broken rhythms A testament to all that was lost closes with the period of my own e x t i n c t i o n . A Super-Blue Moon surrendered- to the night.

Copyright © | Year Posted 2024




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Date: 8/27/2024 12:46:00 PM
Incredible imagery and relentless preservation you should be so proud to have survived. Blessings Daniel, Kelli
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Date: 8/28/2024 8:36:00 AM
Dear Kelli, thank you for your kind words and for taking the time to comment. - Blessings, My Dear Friend, Daniel
Date: 8/23/2024 11:57:00 AM
Your poem is a haunting exploration of pain, despair, and the relentless search for redemption in a world filled with darkness and broken dreams. The imagery is vivid and raw, painting a picture of a life marked by turmoil and the struggle for meaning. The recurring phrase 'Just Fix It!' resonates with a desperate plea for something unattainable, underscoring the sense of helplessness that pervades the poem.
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Date: 8/28/2024 8:38:00 AM
Dear SO, Yes the power of drugs over the mind is overwhelming and relentless, not always leading to a happy ending. Thank you for your visit and insightful comments! - Blessings, My Dear Friend, Daniel
Date: 8/23/2024 4:07:00 AM
A very powerful verse Daniel, a shame many don't seek help before it's too late. Many pass the help stage and then it's just a downward spiral into the dark abyss. Tom
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Date: 8/23/2024 8:28:00 AM
Hello Tom, You are right on the mark. Many do not even seek help or know where to get help or can't afford help, or too far gone. Our prayers are to be strong and help each one wherever they are at. Unfortunately, we can only help one at a time assuming they even want help. Thanks, Tom!! - Blessings, My Dear Friend, Daniel
Date: 8/22/2024 5:12:00 PM
It takes courage to write such a raw piece and to share it will benefit others. Well done!
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Date: 8/23/2024 8:25:00 AM
Dear Karen, Thank you for your amazing kind words. We have all been through our own trials and tribulations of life and it is very cathartic to be able to express them in poetry. - Blessings, My Dear Friend, Daniel
Date: 8/22/2024 3:43:00 PM
You are a strong, brilliant survivor from such treacherous days. This is very powerful and also inspirational. Great writing. Thanks for sharing! :)
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Date: 8/23/2024 8:23:00 AM
Dear Heidi, I love your wonderful affirming and motivating comments. Thank you for who you are!! - Blessings, My Dear friend, Daniel
Date: 8/22/2024 10:50:00 AM
Dear Daniel, I cannot fathom such existences where everyday life requires a 'fix.' "Just fix it" is not a means of reparation, nor is there redemption to be found in Gehenna. Your background of up close and personal experiences gives added credibility to your talent of being able to create a scene that your readers become involved in. Your poems are filled with imagery in many verses, and yet I find myself wishing that you had written more of them. Surrendered... a life to the night.
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Date: 8/23/2024 8:20:00 AM
Dear Lin, I always look forward to your thoughts because with them comes a lot of wisdom and insight. I think as poets or any creative types our experiences and ideas are revelation into the world of reality and the illusions that some believe to be real. Sometimes with many comes the haunting and devastating consequences. We are the Minstrels of the Blossoming Morning Light that spreads messages covering a plethora of topics to enlighten the masses. Thanks so much Lin for coming by!! - Blessings, My Dear Friend, Daniel
Date: 8/22/2024 2:11:00 AM
Ah where do i start praising this poetic gem? So sincere and so moving and not just meaningful but also flows with exquisite diction and alliterations as well as flow of words! I really loved the line “ My life is a tragic poetic play of broken rhythms” wow! That really stood out for me! And as we grow older we look back and realize so much, how loved ones patiently reminded us to change way’s etc. i live in a place where addiction is like a never ending pandemic, that destroys the youth, mental health issues keep rising . And its so sad! Its just all very concerning! Youv highlighted emotional aspects of it and also the opening line really stood out for me because i think some of us are tempests when growing up. We learn and we move forward! Although some, it is their final and last scene too. Reality that is so hars to break free from! How you’ve also used nature and its elements to describe this is beyond impressive! Powerful poem! A fave it is for me
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Date: 8/23/2024 8:12:00 AM
Dear Empress, I loved reading your comments this morning because they are filled with understanding and empathy. Many people do not always understand the horror and the prison that addiction and mental health bring to the hurting. You are correct in that many of us do come with tempests and I believe that was me with my parents. My mom use to tell me "I never knew what hell was like until you were born." She is now 91 and has softened her ways to those days and I know loves me. I did change my life around with lots of help of friends, and our God. Working in Philadelphia where addiction is a way of life for many is heart wrenching and I wish that I could help them all but as you know it is a never-ending battle that will never cease. Again, what a wonderful introspective visit and I always am appreciative and grateful. - Blessings, My Dear Friend, Daniel
Date: 8/21/2024 8:04:00 AM
Your work is inspirational Daniel. I would think that your own experience give you extra credibility. Part of that must be "just fix it" might not be the best approach.
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Date: 8/21/2024 8:13:00 AM
Thanks so much David, It is difficult from time to time and the rewards are being there for each person that comes through the doors. This poem is based on attitudes from people who do not understand Mental Health or D&A issues and the battle that goes on internally for the person. Many people say to me, why can't they "Just Stop It" and expect that to be the solution. Bob Newhart, the comedian, has a wonderful video from SNL called "Stop It" that is worth viewing, although quite comical and quite real. Thank you as always David! - Blessings, My Friend, Daniel
Date: 8/21/2024 7:31:00 AM
Life must be hard for you in the circumstances. My wife had dementia and I spent many years taking care of her knowing there was no cure. Great poem.
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Date: 8/21/2024 8:09:00 AM
Dear Victor, I applaud you for taking care of your wife. My mother-in-law had Alzheimer's, and my wife and I cared for her until her death. How sad but I know she is with the Lord. I recognize as one of God's helpers (counselor) that I need a lot of self-care to keep me grounded and Jesus to keep me whole. - Blessings, My Dear Friend, Daniel
Date: 8/20/2024 4:02:00 PM
I echo David here. So sad but also powerful
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Date: 8/20/2024 4:02:00 PM
I just echoed myself trying to post my comment. Haha
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Date: 8/20/2024 4:01:00 PM
I echo David here. So sad but also powerful
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Date: 8/21/2024 6:41:00 AM
Dear Andrea, I am so glad to get a triple visit from you and it fills my heart. Yes, addiction is way more consuming, mind altering, and a robber of life. I pray first that people do not start down the path and for those that did that they find the help needed to get sober. -Thank You! - Blessings, My Dear Friend, Daniel
Date: 8/20/2024 1:14:00 PM
Powerful and sad, makes me grateful I've never got caught in addiction's grip.
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Date: 8/21/2024 6:39:00 AM
Hello David, you are very fortunate to never have an addictive nature. Unfortunately, I myself had many battles early on until I got it right. I have been sober since 1993! and I now counsel those who battle the beast. - Blessings, My Dear Friend, Daniel
Date: 8/20/2024 12:15:00 PM
WOW!!! What a powerful write. Your golden pen was working overtime on this one. "Great Job" It is so sad this is what the world has come to. Have a blessed day writing away...........
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Date: 8/21/2024 6:37:00 AM
Dear Paula, It is wonderful seeing your comments this morning. I believe we will never find a cure to addiction which leaves us to walk with those who battle and assist them in their maintained sobriety. Thank You! - Blessings My Dear Friend, Daniel
Date: 8/20/2024 12:02:00 PM
Just fix it, often doesn’t. Those suffering from mental illness and drug addiction have a hard cure. Cathartic words that at least let those who suffer know someone understands them, if only a little. I’ve prob told you before, but its almost been 3 years since my dear nephew took his life on early hours of Oct 31st. (heart break < 3 )
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Date: 8/21/2024 6:36:00 AM
Dear Kim, Thanks for sharing your heartbreak about your nephew. I have had so many people in my family, friends, and clients who couldn't walk away from their addiction, which led to dire consequences. They are in my prayers that those who are living can get the help that will move them away from addicted living to a life worth living. - Blessings, My Dear Friend, Daniel
Date: 8/20/2024 9:21:00 AM
Really and truly powerful writing, I am sure you have told someone's story.... raw talent....
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Date: 8/20/2024 9:34:00 AM
Dear Paige, I am always so thankful for your visits and comments and I am filled with gratitude. - Blessings, My Dear Friend, Daniel
Date: 8/20/2024 6:05:00 AM
This is heart pinching. The story of a prodigal son who was warned repeatedly by his mom to fix.... just fix the broken pieces evokes strong feelings of pathos. Though he passed through the different stages of life, university education, marriage, becoming a parent, nothing could satisfy him. He plunged into his feral habit of finding solutions in drugs and went from toxic stuff to more toxic stuff. To watch his fall through addiction is soul twitching. "Now beneath the city's neon hum I find answers in the needle’s venomous vomit Komodo’s bite slowly coursing through dreams seeking refuge and ruin. " What a severe fall.... ! I feel the pain of his mother. How many mothers may be living through such nightmares. Such people need support, guidance and compassion. So movingly and powerfully penned, dear Daniel.
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Date: 8/20/2024 9:33:00 AM
Dear Valsa, I loved reading your comments this morning and I am very thankful. There have been so many broken families that have lost family to addictions. It is heartbreaking to sometimes feel the helplessness that we go through in trying to assist them in recovery. Ultimately, they have to be somewhat invested in that recovery. I once saw an article that said it takes 7 inpatients for addictions to finally overcome the nightmare. My office we have individual counseling, Intensive Outpatient Groups, and Partial Hospitalization to help the Philadelphia population battle these addictions. Unfortunately, many do not have insurance and/or the support to get them into treatment. We will strive to help as much as we can. - Blessings, My Dear Friend, Daniel
Date: 8/20/2024 5:48:00 AM
I sometimes watch the Soft White Underbelly interviews on YouTube. Also the vids of Kensington Ave, which inspired my poem of the same name. Very painful to watch, just as your poem is painful to read. I don't claim to understand addiction, though I have a close relative who struggles with it. It's a demon for sure
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Date: 8/20/2024 9:27:00 AM
Hello Tom, I have seen many of those videos and also experience it almost on a daily basis working here in Philly for the past 8 years. I do remember your poem, which was very insightful. I keep pushing my company to do more here in Center City and Philadelphia in general. We are a very large company, and I believe we could make a greater impact. I got very emotional writing this poem and it took a lot of rewrites to get what I wanted. Who knows but maybe our poetry will somehow make an impact through the Lord's help. Thanks, as always for your support!! - Blessings, My Friend, Daniel

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