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As our lips touched, I felt such bliss. It was such a magical moment. The things people said to describe a first kiss didn’t come close to what I felt. It felt so good that I didn’t want it to end. But to be honest, I felt the kiss long before your lips brushed mine. In the depths of my soul. 09/13/2014 Contest: “ K” New Or Old Sponsor: Constance La France

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Date: 9/17/2021 10:26:00 AM
So tender Alexis and very charming! Short and sweet as that anticipated kiss. Congratulations!
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Date: 9/16/2021 9:42:00 AM
YES, you describe a first kiss exactly as it feels well penned my friend. Congratulations on your win. Hugs and blessings, Jennifer.
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Date: 9/15/2021 10:18:00 AM
Congratulations on your win. A creative "Kiss" write. Love your line, "In the depths of my soul." Have a blessed day..............
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Date: 9/15/2021 7:20:00 AM
Alexis, congratulations on your win in my "K" Contest with this wonderful poem, well done and I liked the music ~ love and serenity _Constance
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Date: 9/14/2021 6:57:00 PM
Very honest words. True. Mere Lip-rubbing is not kissing. Congratulations on your bold expression.
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Date: 9/13/2021 10:37:00 PM
Wonderful poem. A kiss is like an earthquake of the heart. Hugs.
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Date: 9/13/2021 1:25:00 PM
Shining romantically in your beautiful words, Alexis.
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Date: 9/13/2021 11:45:00 AM
So very well-crafted poem, romantic and lovely, best wishes of luck in the contest.
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Date: 9/13/2021 11:32:00 AM
So very lovely! That is the greatness of waiting - the pleasure deep down in the soul.
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Date: 9/13/2021 11:19:00 AM
So you knew what you were getting into?
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Date: 9/13/2021 11:08:00 AM
This is so romantic.... he kissed you before you felt hid lips...so lovely
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Date: 9/13/2021 10:29:00 AM
So lovely, Alexis. Have a great day.
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Date: 9/13/2021 10:09:00 AM
We never forget our first kiss Alexis, Hope you're well. Tom
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