Killing With Kindness

When Ben's beliefs they tried to stifle
He decided to jump off the Eiffel
Being of magnanimous mind
Uncle was exceedingly kind
Instead offering him his new, automatic rifle.
Copyright © | Year Posted 2015

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May 3, 2015 at 9:22 PM
uncle is surely nice lol, awesome tittle, :) SKAT love
Das Avatar
May 3, 2015 at 9:30 PM
Hahaha...Thanks for reading n taking time to comment, for your kind support n encouragement. Truly appreciated.
Mumo Avatar
April 17, 2015 at 6:20 AM
An exhilarating limerick.7+++ is not even enough!
Das Avatar
April 17, 2015 at 6:27 AM
Oh thank you so very much. Thank you for your lovely comments. For 7+++. Truly this made me so happy. Thanks again.
De Paz Avatar
April 16, 2015 at 9:24 AM
I am asking myself if the uncle's rifle might kill somebody some day instead of his kindness. Interesting irony
Das Avatar
April 16, 2015 at 10:01 AM
How true...Thank you so much for reading and for your thoughts on this...greatly appreciated.
Sathasivam Avatar
April 16, 2015 at 3:31 AM
Excellent. Very humorous write. Enjoyed. Tfs
Das Avatar
April 16, 2015 at 5:46 AM
Thanks for reading n for your nice words of encouragement.
Dietrich Avatar
April 15, 2015 at 6:26 PM
oh boy, that is GREAT dark humor. but let's hope he does not turn that rifle on the rest of the population!
Das Avatar
April 16, 2015 at 5:44 AM
Thanks for reading and for your comment.
Onclaud Avatar
April 15, 2015 at 12:23 PM
what a comic relief, lol... much enjoyed, nands.. huggs
Das Avatar
April 15, 2015 at 1:00 PM
Thank you so much for your lovely comment. Glad you enjoyed. Thanks.
La France Avatar
April 15, 2015 at 10:37 AM
Nandita, oh my gosh, humour in death, wonderfully written limerick, 7, and thanks for visiting my poem, the garden picnic
Das Avatar
April 15, 2015 at 1:02 PM
Thanks for reading my poem and for your nice comment. Thanks for 7. I loved your poem The garden picnic.
Laurie Avatar
April 14, 2015 at 9:21 PM
G'day Nandita... very good Nandita. It saved Ben a long walk up the stairs. Lindsay
Das Avatar
April 14, 2015 at 9:28 PM
Ha ha ha...yes it did..Thanks for reading and for your nice comment.
Haight Avatar
April 14, 2015 at 4:31 PM
Oh wow, what a twist at the end! Funny and well-written! Sandra
Das Avatar
April 14, 2015 at 8:55 PM
Thank you so much for your kind appreciation.
Allison Avatar
April 14, 2015 at 3:49 PM
oh dear! Poor Ben, :-) hugs Jan xx
Das Avatar
April 14, 2015 at 8:57 PM
Thanks for reading and for always encouraging.
Smith Avatar
April 14, 2015 at 3:37 PM
lol....very humourous Nandita...Tim
Das Avatar
April 14, 2015 at 8:58 PM
Thanks for reading and for your nice comment.
Gurunath Avatar
April 14, 2015 at 10:34 AM
wow !! i hope the new rifle did not also stifle his wish.... and hope he is in Heaven... smiling and wishing his uncle !! superb poem !! nandita .....
Das Avatar
April 14, 2015 at 10:46 AM
Thanks
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