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Killing with kindness

When Ben's beliefs they tried to stifle He decided to jump off the Eiffel Being of magnanimous mind Uncle was exceedingly kind Instead offering him his new, automatic rifle.

Copyright © | Year Posted 2015




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Date: 5/3/2015 9:22:00 PM
uncle is surely nice lol, awesome tittle, :) SKAT love
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Nandita Das
Date: 5/3/2015 9:30:00 PM
Hahaha...Thanks for reading n taking time to comment, for your kind support n encouragement. Truly appreciated.
Date: 4/17/2015 6:20:00 AM
An exhilarating limerick.7+++ is not even enough!
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Nandita Das
Date: 4/17/2015 6:27:00 AM
Oh thank you so very much. Thank you for your lovely comments. For 7+++. Truly this made me so happy. Thanks again.
Date: 4/16/2015 9:24:00 AM
I am asking myself if the uncle's rifle might kill somebody some day instead of his kindness. Interesting irony
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Nandita Das
Date: 4/16/2015 10:01:00 AM
How true...Thank you so much for reading and for your thoughts on this...greatly appreciated.
Date: 4/16/2015 3:31:00 AM
Excellent. Very humorous write. Enjoyed. Tfs
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Nandita Das
Date: 4/16/2015 5:46:00 AM
Thanks for reading n for your nice words of encouragement.
Date: 4/15/2015 6:26:00 PM
oh boy, that is GREAT dark humor. but let's hope he does not turn that rifle on the rest of the population!
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Nandita Das
Date: 4/16/2015 5:44:00 AM
Thanks for reading and for your comment.
Date: 4/15/2015 12:23:00 PM
what a comic relief, lol... much enjoyed, nands.. huggs
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Nandita Das
Date: 4/15/2015 1:00:00 PM
Thank you so much for your lovely comment. Glad you enjoyed. Thanks.
Date: 4/15/2015 10:37:00 AM
Nandita, oh my gosh, humour in death, wonderfully written limerick, 7, and thanks for visiting my poem, the garden picnic
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Nandita Das
Date: 4/15/2015 1:02:00 PM
Thanks for reading my poem and for your nice comment. Thanks for 7. I loved your poem The garden picnic.
Date: 4/14/2015 9:21:00 PM
G'day Nandita... very good Nandita. It saved Ben a long walk up the stairs. Lindsay
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Nandita Das
Date: 4/14/2015 9:28:00 PM
Ha ha ha...yes it did..Thanks for reading and for your nice comment.
Date: 4/14/2015 4:31:00 PM
Oh wow, what a twist at the end! Funny and well-written! Sandra
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Nandita Das
Date: 4/14/2015 8:55:00 PM
Thank you so much for your kind appreciation.
Date: 4/14/2015 3:49:00 PM
oh dear! Poor Ben, :-) hugs Jan xx
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Nandita Das
Date: 4/14/2015 8:57:00 PM
Thanks for reading and for always encouraging.
Date: 4/14/2015 3:37:00 PM
lol....very humourous Nandita...Tim
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Nandita Das
Date: 4/14/2015 8:58:00 PM
Thanks for reading and for your nice comment.
Date: 4/14/2015 10:34:00 AM
wow !! i hope the new rifle did not also stifle his wish.... and hope he is in Heaven... smiling and wishing his uncle !! superb poem !! nandita .....
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Nandita Das
Date: 4/14/2015 10:46:00 AM
Thanks