Kill the Shrill

there was a young man from Seville
whose wife's voice was chillingly shrill
	he said please shut up
	he’d more than enough
sending him looking for advil!

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Copyright © | Year Posted 2023

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Romios Avatar
April 10, 2023 at 2:33 PM
HYSTERICAL, PANGIE
Fowler Avatar
April 10, 2023 at 2:55 PM
Glad you got a smile or a giggle Pangie! :)
Maverick Avatar
March 31, 2023 at 3:37 PM
Painless ending then Linda-Alice..You targeted This really well.'
Fowler Avatar
March 31, 2023 at 6:05 PM
Thank you Joe. My first iteration was not so benign. LOL :)
Wolf Avatar
March 25, 2023 at 9:09 PM
Ah yes, the will to be shrill.
Fowler Avatar
March 26, 2023 at 6:32 AM
And the thrill of the kill. ;)
Edmonds  Avatar
March 25, 2023 at 1:13 PM
The wife of the man who lives in Seville - Should take herself to the top of a hill - There she could shrill out loud - To every passing cloud - Far away from home to her hubby's thrill.….. Belle
Fowler Avatar
March 25, 2023 at 1:46 PM
Hahaha Belle - right you are! Very cleverly written :)
Horne Avatar
March 25, 2023 at 8:15 AM
LOL, had a laugh at this one
Fowler Avatar
March 25, 2023 at 8:36 AM
Glad you got a laugh Jack. Thanks for the visit and comment :)
Sangster - K Avatar
March 24, 2023 at 8:05 PM
Haha.. good one Linda! Thanks for the chuckle :-)
Fowler Avatar
March 25, 2023 at 6:02 AM
My pleasure Anne. Thanks for the read and comment :)
Turner Avatar
March 24, 2023 at 6:52 PM
Ha! Who doesn't love a good limerick?Thanks for the smile, Alice:)
Fowler Avatar
March 25, 2023 at 6:02 AM
Thank you dear. :) Alice
Volumes Avatar
March 24, 2023 at 6:12 PM
Oh sure. how much did they pay you? hehehehehehhe Excellent Limerick Linda. I am sure Rico would be proud of you. Keep em coming I miss reading good limericks. Best wishes Wen.
Fowler Avatar
March 24, 2023 at 6:18 PM
Hahahah WEn. ;);) Thank you for reading. I hope Rico has enjoyed as much as you have! :)
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