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Hidden quote by: Jesse Jackson As the daze lifts, dirge ogling at blurring. Squalls can still be stifled by soft roving. Heaven's pinions may rattle the birdcage. If tame grip, end up spotting candor wing. Conveying of the most critical stage. Toe-to-toe quicksand slogging on the rage We aught stark faith in our dominant muse. Shut eyelids bury the day's grin assuage. We, a whiff of peace, must be shining wise. Naught deems but that you go forward to rise. In its purest awe, love with hope bestow. Our scheme provides a zingy gap in size. Grin never sink out, and not backward show. Allow it to rise, by wings swell hefts grow. Fear and division are ousting cross-glare. Close fetch key vibrations to the shallow. Written: January 28, 2022 Keola Secret Poetry Contest Sponsor: William Kekaula Syllables: HMS Rhymezone

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Date: 1/29/2022 10:02:00 PM
Superb! Good luck in the contest!
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Date: 1/29/2022 10:59:00 AM
Your fantastic rubaiyat is a pleasure to read, Lasaad. I love the positive hidden message. Best of wishes for the contest, Evelyn
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Date: 1/29/2022 8:18:00 AM
Excellent work in a difficult form, Lasaad. Words of wisdom in the embedded message. A winner in my book, but I'm not the judge. It should do well. Thanks for sharing your poetic talent with us, Lasaad, A poet friend in Texas, Bill
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Date: 1/29/2022 6:54:00 AM
Well composed and very creative Lasaad, Love the embedded message. Good luck. Tom
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Date: 1/29/2022 5:54:00 AM
Outstanding writing! Certainly deserves recognition, my friend, Lasaad. Blessings.
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Date: 1/29/2022 4:58:00 AM
I like your poem Lasaad, and the message embedded within. Brilliantly executed my friend. Win BIG!
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Date: 1/29/2022 4:30:00 AM
Reads like a good contender to me. Way to go for the contest. I enjoyed reading your work. These are not so easy to write but you have done a good job. Your visit to my page is always uplifting. Sara
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Date: 1/29/2022 1:40:00 AM
Brilliantly done.
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Date: 1/28/2022 11:14:00 PM
This is an amazing write ! Coming across this poetic style for the first time. .....ingeniously done, Lasaad ! Wish you all the best in the contest ! Have a happy week end !
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