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Hidden quote by - Reihold Nieburhr At the funeral I whispered GOD, GRANT ME the strength to get through this day THE SERENITY to rise above my weeping the power TO ACCEPT this death of a person I love and bless me with fortitude to welcome THE THINGS I cannot transform and I CANNOT CHANGE and a way to express my pain and sorrow and THE COURAGE to let this soul go to the afterlife to be reborn and TO CHANGE with eternal respect THE THINGS that I CAN and with determination as I whisper again "all my love for eternity" AND give me THE WISDOM oh God give me the wisdom TO KNOW and understand what this life journey was ... it was a life well lived not a life wasted for I know THE DIFFERENCE _________________________ January 22, 2022 Poetry/Free Verse/Keola-Free Verse Copyright Protected, ID 01-1423-702-22 All Rights Reserved, 2020, Constance La France Written for the Standard contest, Keola Secret Ka-Ching- Cash Cash Cash sponsor, Hilo Poet, Judged 07/26/2022 Third Place

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Date: 7/27/2022 1:29:00 PM
WOW!!! Congratulations on this win. A beautiful write/picture. Today, be blessed with your wonderful win...........
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Constance La France
Date: 7/28/2022 3:28:00 PM
Paula, thank you so much for the congratulations and compliment, blessings ~Constance
Date: 7/26/2022 9:22:00 PM
Great Prayer, Constance.. Congratulations on your win in William's contest. Blessing my friend
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Date: 7/27/2022 8:50:00 AM
Eve, thank you so much for the congratulations, yes it is a great prayer, blessings ~Constance
Date: 7/26/2022 2:49:00 PM
Constance, you have so aptly worked this beloved quote into a prayer of letting go of a beloved into the afterlife where they can go to be reborn into eternity. Very touching, and much appreciated. I congratulate your podium win. Blessings ~ John
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Constance La France
Date: 7/26/2022 3:51:00 PM
John, thank you so much for the compliment, comment and congrats, blessings ~Constance
Date: 7/26/2022 2:37:00 PM
This is so inspiring to live life well and appreciate its beauty and challenges, congratulations on your win, Constance
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Constance La France
Date: 7/26/2022 3:52:00 PM
Michelle, thank you so much for the compliment, comment and congratulations, blessings ~Constance
Date: 7/26/2022 6:50:00 AM
Congratulation on a very well-deserved contest win, Constance. You penned an absolutely beautiful poem. Blessings dear friend.
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Constance La France
Date: 7/26/2022 3:52:00 PM
Sotto, thank you so much for the congratulations and compliment, blessings ~Constance
Date: 7/26/2022 2:23:00 AM
This is a quote I love so much and desire to put into practice. You have used it in the most apt and appropriate manner . This is a gem of a poem.... very touching! Congratulations Constance on your wonderful win in this prestigious contest !
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Constance La France
Date: 7/26/2022 5:58:00 AM
Valsa, I love this quote also and say it to myself often, and thank you so much for the compliment and congratulations, blessings ~Constance
Date: 1/23/2022 3:02:00 AM
You rose to the challenge with a most able pen, Constance! This certainly was not easy to write; I love how all the words/phrases fitted in comfortably, naturally...and the content is beautiful and uplifting. ~ Regards // paul
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Constance La France
Date: 1/23/2022 10:37:00 AM
Paul, thank you so much for the wonderful compliment and comment ~
Date: 1/22/2022 7:17:00 PM
Wow! This is brilliant, Constance!
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Constance La France
Date: 1/23/2022 10:36:00 AM
Seeker, thank you so much for the compliment ~
Date: 1/22/2022 5:41:00 PM
Absolutely beautiful and so spiritually poignant, Constance. I am intrigued by weaving a quotation into a poetry form in a way that brings meaning to both. Superb job!
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Constance La France
Date: 1/23/2022 10:36:00 AM
Milt, thank you so much for the compliment and the comment, appreciate a lot ~

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