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Keeps Me Young and On My Toes

Keeps Me Young And On My Toes Some may ask why I have not bit the dust or found that cave to hide my sad sorrows. I'm old but my mind has not turned to rust nor do I fail to wish more tomorrows. When in darkest night's long crawling shadow my fighting spirit cries live on or bust. You are no soft flower in a meadow do as you may, dare to do what you must. That moment, I see truth, joy and white light a clarion call to hold the last fort. Sun filled summer days and beams of moonlight calm blue seas and old ships safely at port. Some may ask, why do you write such deep woes. I answer, keeps me young and on my toes! Robert J. Lindley, 11-15-2016 Poem Syllable Counter Results Syllables Per Line: 10 10 10 10 0 10 10 10 10 0 10 10 10 10 0 10 10 Total # Syllables: 140 Total # Lines: 17 (Including empty lines) Words with (syllables) counted programmatically: N/A Total # Words: 123

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Date: 11/20/2016 4:25:00 AM
Hey Robert love this sonnet, in fact I love all your sonnets, this one is no exception, keep them coming mate, a 7 for this one mate, take care........Vera
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Date: 11/18/2016 6:02:00 PM
robert, I just love this one!! a FAVE (and it's so true about you) Please don't go!!!
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Date: 11/17/2016 1:39:00 PM
Writing poetry is good medicine for mind and soul, Robert! Keep your ink flowing from deep within. This is a lovely sonnet, and I love that end couplet. Best regards to you, my friend. // paul
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Date: 11/16/2016 9:32:00 AM
Hello Robert!! I haven't forgotten you my good friend. (I've been in and out of Poetry Soup working on prose writes for my second book.) I see you haven't lost your wondrous touch for writing sonnets!! A most delightful read. The last couplet says it all -- for sure. SEVEN/FAV!! Cheers and Best Wishes to you and your family, Gary
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Date: 11/16/2016 6:27:00 AM
Deep woes maybe, Robert, but always countered by a joyous hope. And long may it continue. A delightful sonnet, as sharp as ever. Regards, Viv
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Date: 11/16/2016 12:11:00 AM
Beautiful sonnet Robert I love the uplifting couplet it made me smile!:-) hugs Jan xx
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Date: 11/15/2016 9:14:00 PM
I love it! A keeper mate!
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