Keeping Hope

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Every moment is a countdown to doom. Sprinkle in the sunbeams before the loss. Don't be a coward about things that loom. Every moment is a countdown to doom. With a vice grip, hold the seconds to whom. Tension, release, relaxation, and gloss. Every moment is a countdown to doom. Sprinkle in the sunbeams before the loss. Written: May 3rd, 2023

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Bill Baker

Date: 5/3/2023 9:51:00 PM

Excellent Triolet poem, Lasaad. The message is very true ... "Sprinkle in the sunbeams before the loss." Thanks for sharing you wisdom and your gift of poetry with us, my dear friend. Bill

Alexis Y.

Date: 5/3/2023 10:44:00 AM

Hi Lasaad, You did a good job with the form and gave some sage advice my friend. Well done. Have a great day:-) Alexis

Andrea Dietrich

Date: 5/3/2023 10:06:00 AM

you did a great job with this one, my friend, and thanks for my placement in your last contest.

Vijay Pandit

Date: 5/3/2023 5:39:00 AM

Sprinkle in the sunbeams--a wonderful thought when facing gloom.

Yann Rolland

Date: 5/3/2023 4:40:00 AM

so wide and peaceful , i try to do so, no one know his future, thanks for the rich poem

Paul Bell

Date: 5/3/2023 2:37:00 AM

I think every morning when you hear the news, doom hits you, and we really should be bypassing the negative thoughts to replacing them with a sprinkling of sunbeams. The sun is shining and that always gets people smiling.

Valsa George

Date: 5/3/2023 1:01:00 AM

Time is precious. Before it slips away, sprinkle it with sunbeams. Beautiful thoughts in a lovely triolet !