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Kalpana-W

I was standing in a queue at Mumbai Airport And there in a parallel queue a stunning beauty Our eyes met, the faces were quite familiar As we graduated same year from the same university. *Kalpana, the vision of my green salad salad days Never had even a dream I will meet her like this Boarding the same British Airways air vessel. We travelled together, talked for the hours. Discussed and debated our hopes and dreams. I was headed for the British University for further study And she, the exponent of Kathkali dance for Albert Hall We navigated each other’s mind, body, and the dreams. Before the aircraft landed at the Heathrow Airport Promises were made, dreams and hopes were shaped Standing together with hand in hand at check-out queue People running here and there in chaos hearing some rumor. The vision gone and I standing alone in the Airport. Even today, waiting for the vision lost in the turmoil. Dr. Ram Mehta * An Indian name of a girl meaning vision or image ======================================== Second Place win in: Contest:The One Who Got Away sponsored by Thvia Shetley

Copyright © | Year Posted 2011




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Date: 4/6/2011 5:03:00 PM
congratulations Dr. Ram. Great vision of hopes and dreams.
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Date: 4/4/2011 1:35:00 PM
Love the illustrative content in this piece Dr Ram, (am not surprised in its win!)
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Date: 4/4/2011 5:28:00 AM
Congratulations on your win Dr. Ram for the contest "The one that got away" sponsored by Thvia. Love, Carol
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Date: 4/2/2011 2:01:00 PM
Wow Ram wonderful a real number one write, "green salad days" great phrase! Congrad's on your win. Light & Love
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Date: 4/2/2011 10:48:00 AM
Beautiful poem with images of seperation, I love it. Enjoy your first ten place win.
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Date: 4/2/2011 7:47:00 AM
This rings so true to life....a lost chance at love reunited perhaps? Nicely done, and a big congratulations!!
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Date: 4/2/2011 2:31:00 AM
Beautiful story, Dr. Ram. Many congrats on your BIG WIN. Lainie
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Date: 4/2/2011 12:16:00 AM
Excellent Dr Ram, love your vision, congrats on this winner. Harry
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Date: 4/1/2011 11:26:00 PM
Many congratulations Dr Mehta on your win. Thoughts beautifully presented..Gautami
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Date: 4/1/2011 10:35:00 PM
Congratulations on a great poem and win,Dr. Ram. Love, Joyce
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Date: 4/1/2011 9:54:00 PM
Such an awesome tale Dr. ram. many congrats dear friend.
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Date: 4/1/2011 9:06:00 PM
Another wonderful write by the great Dr. You never cease to impress...
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Date: 4/1/2011 8:52:00 PM
Congrats Dr. Ram on your 2nd place win in Thvia's contest with this awesome entry my friend.. so happy to share the winners list with u in this contest luv.. enjoy ...happy weekend..
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Date: 4/1/2011 8:50:00 PM
another congrats for the high win, dr ram.. :) huggs
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Date: 4/1/2011 1:08:00 PM
Are you writing about the woman you said you once met at an airport, Dr. Ram? Are you still in touch? Maybe you will meet again one day. Sometimes when we meet someone even for the first time, we sense a special connection. Beautiful poem for the contest. Wishing you success! Love, Carolyn
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Date: 4/1/2011 11:40:00 AM
Sounds like a nice trip...dreamy I should say Julie
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Date: 4/1/2011 11:29:00 AM
a very differnent kind of poem, enjoyed reading it. thank you for reading my little girl grown and for your comment.
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Date: 4/1/2011 9:56:00 AM
It's not often I've come across poetry that has very specific details such the ones written here (okay, I haven't really read a lot). Makes for a truly interesting read, plus I learned a new word!
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Date: 4/1/2011 6:41:00 AM
Happy Friday! I love this... Have a day filled with peace and blessings!!!
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Date: 3/31/2011 7:51:00 PM
A scintillating rendezvous! Enjoyed your enthralling experience!
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Date: 3/31/2011 7:37:00 PM
A rare beauty write Dr. Ram.. very well presented to the reader .. a dynamic story ..good luck in the contest.. lovely name of the girl as well .. amazing as u continue to amaze me luv..
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Date: 3/31/2011 5:43:00 PM
This is really beautiful Ram, I just love it, best of luck in the contest~~
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Date: 3/31/2011 4:16:00 PM
Thanks for the comment and now I truly enjoyed this poem today as travel and new places bring words to us.
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